Chapter 128 of the text volume Seven Swords Encounter Cold, a new work of martial arts

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On Monday afternoon, Shen Zhe had just come out of the classroom when he immediately received a call from Zhongli.

"Let's get out of class, let's talk in the group. ”

It's about the work group of the editorial department, which only adds a few editors-in-chief, and issues related to the magazine are discussed here.

Declining the invitation of a female classmate to represent the Xiàn Poetry Association, Shen Zhe hurriedly returned to the dormitory.

At the beginning of the school year, Zhongli asked for his class schedule, which sounded relaxed this time, but maybe there was something wrong with the magazine, otherwise he wouldn't have taken the time to call him.

I think it should be a problem with the serialization of "Seven Swords", because today is the day when the new issue of the magazine is released, and there will definitely be feedback from readers.

Turn on the computer, first log on to the forum, and Shen Zhe will understand.

"Look at me confused, Shen Da's level has dropped a little, do you feel this way?"

"I feel the same way, except that the writing is still the same, the story seems to be too messy?"

"I think it's very good, you have an opinion after the first two times? ”

"Let's hope so......"

Shen Zhe raised his eyebrows, and then selected a few slightly longer book reviews to browse.

After reading it three times, I finally sorted out some of the relationships between the characters. There are too many appearances, Mao Huanlian, Fu Qingzhu, Duoduo, Liu Yufang...... There are no less than ten people who use a large section of description, among which Fu Qing is a Confucian and a Confucian costume, with exquisite medical skills, superb swordsmanship and good at calligraphy and painting, and has the most protagonist temperament, but he is an old man, obviously not the protagonist. Chu Zhaonan, as a disciple of the Zen Master of the Obscure Ming, is keen on fame and fortune, and he is undoubtedly the villain. The first protagonist is still unclear, and my personal guess is that according to the arrangement of Lian Nishang, the woman named Liu Yufang can fight with Duoduo, and it is most likely to ......"

"Those who are entangled in Zhuo Yihang and Lian Nishang can sleep, Shen Daxin's book obviously happened decades later......"

"I may explain it in the middle, otherwise I'm sorry for our ......"

"To be honest, I feel that Shen Da is in a bit of a hurry to open the book, maybe the pressure of the magazine serialization is too great, and it has been affected a lot......"

"Mother-daughter recognition is a big failure......"

Shen Zhe sighed, he had long found that the chivalrous authors and even readers of Huaxia had a relatively high ability to appreciate them, and he was still very emotional.

These comments almost hit the nail on the head.

Especially from an emotional point of view, Yi Lanzhu and her mother Nalan Ming's recognition is too bland.

Mother: "Your surname is not Yang?"

Woman: "Why do you have a good impression of Yang?"

Mother: "Do you need help with any difficulties?"

Woman: "I don't have any difficulties, I have overcome all the difficulties by myself." ”

Mother: "As long as it's your business, I'll do it for you!"

When a mother sees her daughter who has been separated since childhood, it should never be this kind of expression, although she uses words such as decadence, indifference, and confusion, and expresses Nalan Ming's inner struggle, it is still not enough. When you think only of helping, shouldn't you break down, or at least cry bitterly, right?

After the shock of "white hair for love", it is very uncomfortable to read here.

Because Nalan Mingyi is the body of the princess, Yi Lanzhu has long been in the rivers and lakes, this kind of treatment cannot be said to be wrong, it is not normal to change it.

But not pleasing the reader is for sure.

To put it bluntly, it is the impact of the serialization order of "White Hair" and "Seven Swords", the former is more mature.

To cultivate chivalrous readers into martial arts readers, Liang Shi's works are the best transition, and when the "Oriental" magazine was newly created, if you want to be a hit, "White Hair" is also the best choice.

Shen Zhe once considered giving up "Seven Swords", but later found that it couldn't.

A complete "Tianshan Jianghu" must not lack this work to carry on the past and the future.

Workgroup

Zhong, Su, Lin, Wei, and Fan were all waiting for Shen Zhe.

"Brother Zhong, does it have a great impact on the sales of the magazine?" Shen Zhe asked first.

"That's not it, we estimate that there may be some rises, and this is the only way to see martial arts!"

"It's just that the feedback from readers isn't very good, is it?"

"I don't think it's a big problem, the next issue of Tianshan Shenmang Ling Weifeng will appear, and it will definitely turn ......over," Lin Yuanzhi interjected.

"Xiao Zhe, what do you think?"

Shen Zhe smiled and said: "I understand, you are here to comfort me, they were all good reviews before, and suddenly a reader asked, afraid that my mentality is unbalanced?"

"It's not so strict. ”

"Don't worry, I'm not that fragile, I'll get better slowly, and the next work will be better. ”

Exiting the work group, Shen Zhe thought for a while.

Liang Shi later also used "Seven Swords" to express his views on martial arts creation: "The main factor that works can move readers is the characterization and portrayal of inner emotions. ”

This point of view runs through Liang's martial arts, and the obsession of "sex" has not only not been achieved, but has been completely surpassed by Mr. Jin Yong.

In addition to the differences in text, the key is precisely how the storyline is arranged.

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The development of the martial arts world also exceeded Shen Zhe's expectations, and "Jianghu" suddenly announced its transformation.

Shen Zhe's sudden rise had a great impact on the former chivalrous magazine leader "Jianghu" and "Wonder Hero Story", and sales declined all the way.

The former tried to rely on Sima Mingfeng to redeem the defeat, but there was nothing he could do in the face of the popular witch, and the chivalry and martial arts in the same vein were obviously more exciting. And the latter is already on the verge of extinction due to a large loss of readers.

Sima Mingfeng had already passed the peak of his creation, and if Shen Zhe had not appeared, the series would have been able to support a magazine.

Now it also looks powerless.

The members of the Chivalry Association lost three-quarters, and correspondingly, martial arts book fan clubs began to appear across the country.

At this time, the editor-in-chief of "Jianghu" Wang received a submission, which was the first three chapters of a martial arts work, about 40,000 words.

Editor-in-chief Wang was pleasantly surprised after reading it.

"Xiangjiang Monster brings the martial arts masterpiece "The Legend of the White Lotus Heroes" to compete in November, ask the ups and downs of the rivers and lakes, and meet you in three days!"

"Southern Weekly" quietly appeared an advertisement, full of gimmicks.

Chasing deer, ups and downs, heroes vs seven swords......

After some readers saw it, they forwarded it everywhere on the Internet, and the martial arts world immediately boiled.

"The spring of martial arts is coming!"

"I'm not optimistic, "Oriental" is the authentic martial arts, and the transformation of Chivalry Magazine has already explained the problem......"

"It's a good thing, Shen Da's works are too few, and it's not enjoyable to read them at all, as long as their content can be read by people, I will order it." ”

"A single flower is not spring, a hundred flowers bloom in spring!"

For a time, celebrants, cold-eyed bystanders, and skeptics left messages one after another. Booksellers know that they are not afraid of poor writing, but they are afraid that there is no topicality.

With the topicality, we must start to look forward to the work coming out.

"A masterpiece of martial arts?"

Shen Zhe shook his head a little, but he also wanted to see how the martial arts created by the Chinese author were.

I went to several bookstores before I got a copy of Jianghu magazine.

It took twenty minutes to read it carefully, and he laughed in a low voice: "It's not bad, it seems that I really met an opponent." ”

It would be nice to have him read well.

Judging from the beginning, Xiangjiang Strange Man absorbed many creative concepts of "Dragon and Tiger" and "White Hair", with the background of the White Lotus Sect, which is very marketable among the people, and the future plot should be the theme of resistance. Because the work of this group is to rebel against the rulers, and the Song, Yuan, Ming and Qing dynasties did this.

How it is depends on the serialization.

Shen Zhe is not too worried, since he is studying Liangshi, it is estimated that he will not be able to go beyond this category.

If a master like Jin Yong suddenly appears, it may move him. (To be continued.) )