Chapter Eighty-Three: Flying Knife, Quick Sword, Uncle, Boy

Shen Nan is in the author's background of Shenzhou Literature Network, establishes the work, and then applies for review.

After doing all this, Shen Nan used QQ to notify Zhang Hongwei and asked Zhang Hongwei to help pass the trial quickly.

Before Zhang Hongwei received Shen Nan's notice, he was really anxious, and it was a day, and people were breezy and prosperous, but what about Shen Nan? This guy is not in a hurry, and he still runs to do a live broadcast!

However, he didn't urge Shen Nan again, he knew that it was useless to urge, Shen Nan had always been disobedient to discipline, and he had a degree, and he released it when it was time to release.

Now that he received Shen Nan's notice, Zhang Hongwei's hanging hair was finally put down, and after replying to Shen Nan with an ok expression, he immediately notified the review editor Wang Erlong.

Wang Erlong was already in a hurry, he was supposed to get off work at five o'clock, just to wait for Shen Nan, he insisted on working overtime, although he was a loyal fan of "Zhu Xian", he was also a little unhappy, after all, there was no accurate letter, waiting so much in his heart, it was strange.

After receiving Zhang Hongwei's notice, Wang Erlong finally breathed a sigh of relief and finally released it, which was the end of the torture of waiting for him.

After checking it, the new book of Nanshan Cottage is called "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword", which immediately passed the review! Then he opened the chapter and looked at the contents of the first chapter.

This is a big chapter of more than 10,000 words, when Wang Erlong saw the first sentence, he had a strange feeling, this feeling comes from the style of words used in Nanshan Hut, concise to the extreme and full of romantic realistic style, so that Wang Erlong feels very novel, and at the same time very comfortable.

"The cold wind is like a knife, using the earth as a chopping board, and treating all beings as fish and meat. Thousands of miles of snow fly, turning the firmament into a furnace, and melting everything into silver.

The snow will stop, the wind is unsettled, and a carriage comes from the north, and the rolling wheels crush the ice and snow on the ground, but it cannot crush the loneliness between heaven and earth. ”

Just at the beginning of these two sentences, Wang Erlong's heart has been captured.

A few simple words describe a vast ice and snow world vividly, and the desolate taste seems to fill the heavens and the earth, giving him an immersive sense of reality.

This style of diction is something Wang Erlong has never seen before, but the feeling in it is that there is a Western romantic atmosphere in it, and this ingenious fusion of the body makes the work itself poetic and a little more ruthless.

"That's amazing!" Wang Erlong couldn't help but secretly praise in his heart, with his many years of experience in reviewing online articles, this beginning was signed in seconds.

Next, Li Xunhuan appeared, he drank, he carved, he buried the woman he carved, all of which made Wang Erlong feel a sadness that could not be dissolved, a lonely person, a fiery heart, in this cold world is particularly strong.

Li Xunhuan suddenly walked into his heart and into his world, this person's charm has been revealed at this time, he has not done anything, he is already loved.

All of this is because of the author's divine description.

Especially what Li Xunhuan said: Life is full of contradictions, and no one can bear it.

If this sentence is said elsewhere, it is easy to be said to be negative, and it is said to be moaning without illness, but when it appears here, it seems reasonable, without the slightest sense of disobedience, but gives people an inexplicable feeling.

What kind of martial arts is this? Wang Erlong couldn't help but ask himself.

Wang Erlong can't get an answer, this kind of novel full of charm in every word and sentence is only seen in his life.

Mo Yang Zhenren looked at the first chapter sent by Shen Nan, and he was very remorseful.

He regretted why he gave Qingfeng Xu Lai such a high evaluation as "Angry Sword Hero" before, "Angry Sword Hero" is excellent, but compared with "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword" in this Nanshan Hut, it is much worse.

It's not because of the plot that the number of words is low now, and it's too early to say this, but because of the style.

Mo Yang Zhenren, as a great figure in martial arts novels, has a keen sense of smell in martial arts novels that no one can match, so he dares to praise Qingfeng Xu Lai's "Angry Sword Heroes", and now, he seems to see a martial arts master coming!

That's right, Martial Arts Grandmaster!

In the eyes of Moyang Zhenren, the "Amorous Swordsman Ruthless Sword" written by this Nanshan hut is concise and beautiful, and the soul of the martial arts world is revealed between the lines, and the characters are described very well. One less point is insufficient, and one more point is excessive, and the character's inner emotions are rich in emotion, making him sigh to himself.

The most important thing is that he subverted the style of traditional martial arts, and described human nature very realistically, and everyone's every move and behavior is very reasonable!

This is what I have done before, the character dialogue is more exciting, and the long-winded dialogue that seems to be Western is actually a rare conciseness, because a lot of the characters' emotions and hearts are contained in the dialogue!

The characters are so vivid that they are close to the eye, and the fighting style is as fast as lightning, and the fight is completed completely through the side description, which makes people feel more immersive and real.

Moyang Zhenren knows how much effort it took to write these 10,000 words written by Nanshan Hut!

Nothing can be done easily, and how much pain will be experienced during this period? He knew it perfectly.

In this chapter of the novel of Nanshan Cottage, the atmosphere, characters, plot and dialogue are integrated, and the martial arts atmosphere is even stronger, and it has become a family of its own, more than mature!

This is like what only a martial arts master can do! This is also what Moyang Zhenren racked his brains to do in the later stage but did not fully do it!

The more Moyang Zhenren looks at it, the more embarrassed he becomes, he is called the master of martial arts by the literary world, the first person in martial arts novels, and the master of martial arts novels.

Moyang Zhenren suddenly felt a burst of frustration, he had worked hard for martial arts all his life, and he didn't create a new situation for martial arts novels until he closed his pen, and this Nanshan hut, the first martial arts work, was really creative and tricky.

But soon, Moyang Zhenren was happy again, after all, he is a person who is interested in martial arts, and has written countless excellent martial arts novels, and he has unconsciously developed a chivalrous spirit.

Thinking of this, his hands began to tap on the keyboard and mouse.