Chapter 243: An Alternative Actress (8)
Jiang Sheng didn't know that Jing Jing had such sinister intentions. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info he blinked ignorantly: "The actress is a real woman, how can she find a man to play it, how can a man play it?"
If the voice can be done by dubbing in the later stage, and the behavior can be imitated, but the woman's posture, gait, expression, and charm can never be performed by a man. Not to mention that the empress you mentioned has gone through vicissitudes, and its god is even more difficult to grasp. ’
Jing Xiao said lightly: "You are not an ordinary man. You have no physical entity and can become a real woman. Shouldn't it be too difficult to play the empress like this?'
'I didn't expect you to be such a master!'
Jiang Sheng was excited: "We ghosts also have dignity, ghost character, and ghost power! Why do we call people become women? I am a man from my whole ghost body and soul! From birth to death, I am also a big man." Even if she becomes a woman, she can't play the coquettishness and charm of a woman. Master, you have to die! Even if I am destroyed, I will not become a female ghost!'
'What are you yelling about!useless things!' Jing Silence's face was covered with frost and snow, and he glared at Jiang Sheng angrily: "I don't even want to do this little thing for my master!I've really raised you for nothing!Get out! I don't want to see you again in a short time, heartburn guy!"
Jiang Sheng was aggrieved and indignantly silent. This master is really chilling!
He thinks about his master, gives advice to his master, solves problems, and almost responds to requests. Now a little less than the woman's intentions, she turned her face faster than she could turn the book.
Hmph! Get out, get out! Zeng Keyi remembered that dead woman, did he really think that he couldn't live without her? He wanted to see, without him, how could she be in the entertainment industry?
Jiang Sheng ran away from home indignantly. He is now a ghost, no matter day or night, he can go wherever he wants. Jiang Sheng plans to float in the air, travel around the country, find a few scenic spots, see if he can meet a gentle and amiable female ghost who is as beautiful as a flower, and compose a romantic relationship. lest you be ridiculed by your unscrupulous master, and you are destined to be a single ghost for the rest of your life!
Jiang Sheng's departure, Jing Lin didn't take it to heart. She signed up for an acting class and found an old-timer with superb acting skills to study, in addition to learning with her predecessors every day, she nested in her room and practiced her expression in front of the mirror, adjusted her gait, etc.
Occasionally, when I am tired of practicing, I go to my younger brother's room and open a live broadcast room with him, pointing out some simple and practical fist and foot kung fu for fans and sisters who want to learn martial arts.
Fans support her movies so much, which has contributed a lot to the box office, and she should also respond.
I heard Zeng Xiaodi say that most of the people in his live broadcast room are now her fans, and many people say that they have watched "Xianya" seven or eight times, and "Fascination" four or five times.
Jing Lin thanked the fans for their support and kindness, and opened a live broadcast room to teach them to practice and defend themselves.
Interact with cute fans every once in a while, and know that there is such a large group of people who really love her, support her, and trust her. She was full of strength and energy.
It wasn't until a month later that Jing Xiao received a big phone call from the person who wrote the script of "The Empress" for her, saying that the other party had completed the first draft and wanted to ask her to meet with her, let her have a look, and talk to her about how to revise and polish the script.
Jing Xiao sighed at the great dedication and efficiency of this "fish life"! I was a little worried about the quality of the script of "The Empress". The last time he wrote the manuscript of "Xianya" for her, it took twice as long as writing "The Empress".
Jing Lin was very curious about what Yu Shengyan had written "The Empress" like, and readily agreed to go to the appointment.
It just so happened that he was also from Huaishui City, but he lived in a university town, a little away from the villa area of the Zeng family, and Jing Lin drove to a café in the university town to meet Yu Shengyan.
Yu Shengyan is an author who pays special attention to privacy, and when he wrote the script of "Xianya" before, he had been communicating with Jing Lin through email and WeChat, and it was a text-only communication, except for the script, nothing else.
After "Xianya" was finalized, the two sides negotiated the price, and Yu Shengyan sent an account to Jing Lin and asked her to send the money. As soon as he received the money, he signed a power of attorney to Jing Lian.
Jing Lin appreciates his dedication, talent and simplicity, and this time "The Empress" also asked him to handle it. It's just that Jing Lin didn't expect that Yu Shengyan, who pays great attention to privacy, would take the initiative to ask her to meet, and without saying a word, he would resell the copyright of the script of "The Empress" to her.
It seems that he also has his own ideas.
Jing Lin is personally inclined to think that Yu Shengyan wants to participate in the filming of "The Empress" this time. After all, it's a good script, it works, and it's likely to win. It's normal for Yu Shengyan to have the idea of intervening.
Although "The Empress" is an outline provided by Jing Lian, the conception and writing of the script were all completed by Yu Shengyan alone.
According to Huaguo's current "Copyright", Yu Shengyan is the first copyright owner, and Jing Lin ranks second at most. If Yu Shengyan does not agree to transfer the script to her, then Jing Lin cannot use this script for filming. Otherwise, if she is an infringement, there will be a lot of trouble.
Jing Lin entered the café and found that the tables inside were separated by screens or greenery, which was very elegant and quiet, suitable for couples to fall in love and for business meetings.
She reported her name at the front desk and was led by the waitress to a table in the corner of the window. It's the quietest and most undisturbed part of the whole café.
"I'm Zeng Keyi, hello. ”
Jing Xiao pulled out a chair and sat down, and took the initiative to greet the Qingjun man who turned his head and looked out of the window through the floor-to-ceiling window. "Can I read the script first?"
He was younger than she expected, no longer than he looked thirty. Although his appearance is mediocre, his temperament is very elegant and quiet, wearing a pair of gold-rimmed glasses, like a university professor and a doctor.
"Hello Miss Zeng when we meet for the first time. You can call me a feast. Yu Shengyan smiled and handed Zhang Suya's business card to Jing Lian. Jing Xiao was not surprised to see that he was a professor of the Chinese Department of W University, raised his hand to stuff the business card into his handbag, picked up the script that Yan Qi placed on her right hand, and looked at it intently.
Because of her strong soul and spiritual power, Jing Xiao quickly finished reading the script with more than 300 pages of A4 paper, and engraved all the plots into her mind, she scanned the ending twice, raised her eyebrows and asked Yan Qi: "Why did you change the ending?" I remember that in the outline I gave you, the empress was killed by the design of the crown prince she chosen, and died a somewhat disgraceful death. Why did you write in the script that she died of old age?"
Yan Qi frowned, he felt that Jing Jing glanced at his script lightly, and did not respect the fruits of his labor at all, I am afraid that he only watched the ending carefully, and he was a little dissatisfied in his heart.
However, out of good upbringing, Yan Qi didn't show it, and said gently: "I revised your outline a little. In my opinion, this ending is better and more logical. ”
"According to your outline, the empress has been completely reborn as a queen for the second time, and she is already very mature in terms of life experience, intelligence, and calculation. She single-handedly created the prosperous An Dynasty and personally promoted many famous generals who governed the country, I think she at least has a basic vision of people, and she will not make stupid mistakes in such a major matter as choosing a prince. ”
Besides, after she chose the crown prince, she personally took him for a year or two. For such a long time, how could an empress who had gone through the world and whose eyes were like torches not be able to see the mind and city government of such a seventeen or eighteen-year-old hairy boy as the crown prince?
Yan Qi paused, took a sip of lime water to moisten his throat, and asked Jing Lian, who had been silent, with a smile: "Does Miss Zeng think I am right?"
"You're right. It's just that you forget that once you get old, you don't have to worry about a lot of things. May be blind. Her eyes will become cloudy and her mind will become confused and dull. This is also known as Alzheimer's disease. Moreover, the empress is not not planted in the hands of the minister. In my outline, I wrote about her final death, and it was written by the minister of the DPRK and China. The crown prince alone can't deal with the empress at all. ”
"But you didn't mention Alzheimer's in the outline. Yan Qi became more and more dissatisfied with Jing Lian, who wanted to be a one, and glared at her invisibly, "Miss Zeng, if the empress has this symptom, you should tell me." ”
"I'm sorry. Blame me for being overthought and forgetting this. ”
Jing Xiao seemed to be casual, but actually flipped over the sixty-seven pages of the script accurately, pointed to one of the texts, and asked: "Professor Yan, about the scene of the empress forcing the palace and confronting her imperial brother, you wrote that the empress arrogantly counted him to nothing in front of the palace people and her imperial brother and concubines, and also revealed her ambitions, which seems to be a bit devastating. ”
"I don't think so. Yan Qi said: "At that time, the empress was only in her twenties, and she held great power, and it was when she was young and vigorous and high-spirited, she cleaned up the mess for the mediocre and incompetent imperial brother for several years, and she had long been dissatisfied with him. In addition, the emperor listened to the slander and asked the Ouchi guards to kill several courtiers who had taken refuge in her behind her back, which was obviously a provocation. The young empress is enraged and can do things to force the palace, why can't she complain about her royal brother and his concubines and the palace people she serves to express her anger and pride?"
"But the empress you wrote about before is a cautious and decisive person. When she forced the palace, because of the suddenness of the incident, she actually did not fully grasp the harem. When she blocked the emperor and his concubines in the palace of the favored concubine, the Ouchi guards loyal to the emperor had already sensed that something was wrong and were about to take action. According to the situation at that time and the setting of the empress's personality, I think it is better to write directly that the empress simply killed the emperor and the concubines and palace people who served him. Even if the empress holds back a lot of words in her heart, she can wait until she sits on the throne and then speak at the emperor's tablet or tomb. ”
Yan Qi thought for a while and nodded: "You are right." He picked up a black pen, marked it on page 67, and asked Jing Xiao: "Miss Zeng thinks there are still problems, or if you have any different opinions, you can put them forward?"
This time, Yan Qi and Jing Jing spoke in a more gentle voice and a more gentle attitude. He knew that Jing Lin didn't read the script carefully, and his impression of her became a lot better.
"There are still one hundred and ninety-one pages, the scene where the empress is escorted out of the palace by the guards, I see that you have spent a lot of pen and ink describing the chief of the guard, and in the back, you have also added a lot of scenes to the chief of the guard, such as he secretly admires the empress and dare not express it; when he escapes with the empress, he will expose himself in order to buy the empress the snacks she likes to eat, and almost die; no matter how willful the empress is, he will tolerate her and act completely according to her orders, even if he knows that the empress's orders are wrong, and may cause them to be exposed and killed, etc., etc., portraying the chief of the guard as very stupid and infatuated, can I ask, Professor Yan, why do you want to portray such an imageIt can't just be to add a subtle romance to the empress, right?"
"I spent pen and ink to create the role of the chief of the guard because I wanted to show the reason for the queen's change of temperament from the side. Let her slowly transition from the ignorant tyrannical empress to the more sophisticated, deep, forbearant and resourceful military advisor. I think every change in the queen's temperament should be reasonable and natural. ”
Yan Qi talked eloquently: "The role of the chief of the guard is the 'reasonable and natural' reason for the greatest change in the empress's temperament. ”
"Because Miss Zeng, the outline you gave only talked about the history of the empress's struggle, and did not mention her emotional history. In the end, she only said that she was clean and self-conscious all her life, and was not moved by men and feelings. And there is no mention of why she is not tempted. I added drama to the chief of the guard without authorization, and I also wanted to explain clearly that the empress did not talk about feelings. ”
Yan Qi immersed himself in the role and said very devotedly: "Because of her recklessness and selfishness, she has always ignored the love and dedication of the captain of the guard who is loyal to her, and even killed the other party in the end." And the chief of the guard did not blame her until he died. Before he died, he tried his last bit of strength to take her to escape to the mountains, put her in a safe place, and then hide far away to die...... The empress has lived in a harem of deceit and indifference since she was a child, no one gives her warmth and affection, and she doesn't understand feelings. But her chief guard loved her with his life and woke her up. It wasn't until he died that she realized that she also liked him, but unfortunately the other party was indirectly killed by her. Since then, she has closed the world of feelings, and devoted herself to the public, the country and the people......"
"You're right. Jing Xiao pondered for a moment and nodded: "In this way, the empress's character will be fuller." Moreover, this affectionate and loyal chief of the guard can add some warmth to this drama, otherwise, the whole drama will seem too heavy. The audience may not be able to stand it. ”
"......" Yan Qi was really shocked by Jing Lin at this time, he was very surprised, she could actually understand his original intention of adding drama to the chief of the guard.
In fact, using the role of the chief of the guard to flatter the empress on the side was something he thought of later. At the beginning, he felt that the whole tone of "The Empress" was too gloomy and heavy, and he needed a tender and warm character to light up the script, so he added an emotional scene to the chief guard and the empress.
In addition to these, Miss Zeng has any other thoughts, and say them together. One person counts short, two counts long. This script still has shortcomings, so I implore Miss Zeng for some advice. ”
Yan Qi is very polite, but Jing Lin can't take other people's politeness as a blessing, and casually point fingers at the script.
Besides, there is no major problem with Yanqi's first draft, and she has nothing to change for the time being.
"Professor Yan, I think the script has been relatively perfect, except for the two places we just talked about, there is no need to make more changes for the time being. Jing Lin took a sip of warm black tea and raised his eyes to look at Yan Qi: "I want to know more, what does Professor Yan mean by seeing me today?"
"My intentions, Miss Zeng is so smart, how can I not know?"