Liu Meng was already there when Li Sheng came over, and he stood up immediately when he saw Li Sheng coming, feeling a little at a loss, especially when he saw Yu Feihong also there. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

Li Sheng walked over with Yu Feihong and waved his hand at Liu Meng.

"Don't be nervous, sit down!"

Liu Meng nodded, and then sat down in a daze opposite Li Sheng, waited for a while before coming back to his senses, and pulled out a stack of handwritten manuscripts from his bag.

Li Sheng took it and nodded, "It's very fast!"

Liu Meng hurriedly said, "I'm not shoddy, because I've always been very interested in this." ”

Li Sheng nodded, "I'll just say casually, I'll look at the manuscript first." ”

Li Sheng lowered his head and began to look at the script filled in by Liu Meng, Yu Feihong looked at the two of them, and was also a little curious about Liu Meng, a little fat man, because she rarely saw that Li Sheng would find a screenwriter to help him write the script, Liu Meng should be the first.

While Li Sheng was looking at something, Yu Feihong beckoned to the waiter, asked for two cups of coffee, and stirred the spoon one by one, waiting for Li Sheng to come back to his senses.

……

After a while, Li Sheng read several pages, and as he turned the manuscript, he nodded and shook his head in the middle.

Every time Li Sheng nodded or shook his head, Liu Meng would look very nervous.

Li Sheng put down the manuscript in his hand, looked at Liu Meng and nodded.

"It's not badly written. ”

Liu Meng suddenly laughed, breathed a sigh of relief, and said with a smile, "That's good, that's good!"

Li Sheng's words changed, "It's not ......"

As soon as this sentence came out, Liu Meng couldn't help but get nervous again.

"But what?" Liu Meng's tone was tense.

Thinking about it, although the overall atmosphere of the current circle is not bad, but after all, there are still more monks and less porridge, Liu Meng is still very clear about this, if he can complete Li Sheng's task well this time, he should be able to join Li Sheng's Feihong Pictures in the future, in that case, if he continues on this road, it should be very smooth.

"However, while the writing is good, I think there is still something missing that can be remembered at a glance. Li Shengdao.

"Huh?" Liu Meng didn't quite understand Li Sheng's words, and looked at Li Sheng questioningly.

Li Sheng groaned for a moment, took a sip of coffee, and thought about it carefully.

"Well, it's like ...... Well, it's like a slogan, or a central idea, point out, after all, the military is originally a niche, and not all audiences like to watch it, so you need to highlight a key point, or the spirit of the whole play!"

When Li Sheng said this, Liu Meng felt as if he understood a little, but he still felt as if there was a layer of window paper blocking it, so he couldn't wait to ask.

"For example...... You see, the initial scenes above are all training, from a recruit to a special forces king who can cross the battlefield, then you can start with this training!"

"For example, practice for battle, not for watching, always be ready!"

"Then write this in, put it into a team with more scenes, strengthen it, and then amplify it, think about it, will it be better!"

In fact, Li Sheng is still quite impressed by Liu Meng's special forces in his previous life, after all, these films were very good at the beginning, although there are many shoddy plots, but they are generally okay, after all, there are still relatively few TV series about this kind of special forces, so I also remember a lot of things.

Li Sheng's words lit up a window for Liu Meng at once, he took the manuscript, and then took a pen and wrote Li Sheng's sentence just now on the manuscript, and then muttered it repeatedly.

"Practice for battle, not for watching, always be ready to ......"

Liu Meng stood up and bowed to Li Sheng, "Thank you, I understand, I'll go back and revise the draft now." ”

After he said that, he left with his bag and the bun, and Li Sheng didn't have time to continue to say something to him.

On the way back, Liu Meng was still thinking about what Li Sheng said just now.

"Training for war, training for ......"

When he returned to the dormitory, one of his roommates saw him muttering to himself with his head down and holding his bag, and couldn't help but be curious, so he stepped forward and patted him on the shoulder.

"What's wrong, Fat Liu!"

Liu Meng reflexively said in a high voice, "Practice is for battle, not for watching, always be ready!"

The goods were stunned by Liu Meng, and he didn't come back to his senses for a long time, and after coming back to his senses, he hammered Liu Meng angrily.

"Good boy, it scared me, but this sentence is quite imposing!"

Liu Meng looked at him, shook his head, and then returned to his bed with his bag, the guy looked at Liu Meng and shook his head, and went out.

In his opinion, this fat man has been very unreasonable recently, and he is writing about special forces who don't know what the hell with his stuffy head, it seems to be a script, will anyone read him when he writes that thing, and now he writes that he is still fascinated!

……

Here, Yu Feihong asked Li Sheng curiously.

"Looks like you have a lot of confidence in this little fat man!"

Li Sheng nodded, "Well, it's not bad!"

Yu Feihong said, "Then why don't you pull into the company?"

Li Sheng shook his head, "He can't, he's not suitable for our company." ”

"Huh?" Yu Feihong was puzzled.

Li Sheng continued, "In contrast, he is still more suitable to go to Bayi Factory, or the army, that is where he should go, come to our company, it's a pity, and we can't always shoot military themes." ”

Hearing Li Sheng say this, Yu Feihong nodded, although she rarely takes charge of the company's affairs, but she still knows some of the general directions.

"Then how do you plan to place him in the future? It's not your temperament to leave it alone when it's finished!" Yu Feihong said curiously.

Li Sheng thought for a while, "Recommend it to Bayi Factory, although Bayi Factory doesn't produce much now, but it is a state-owned enterprise, it should be much better than outside!"

"Hmm!"

Yu Feihong nodded, and didn't continue to ask, she was just curious, she rarely asked about these things.

The two drank coffee for a while, and Yu Feihong asked Li Sheng where to go next.

Li Sheng didn't have any ideas, the two discussed it and planned to go to dinner.

Just thinking about it, Yu Feihong's phone rang, she answered it, it was Huang Lei, he rarely took the initiative to contact the two, could it be that there is something to find himself today.

Just as Li Sheng watched Yu Feihong answer the phone suspiciously, his phone rang.

Li Sheng answered it suspiciously, it was Jiang Wen, this product would probably be unbearable and lonely, saying that he wanted to invite Li Sheng to dinner, and asked Li Sheng to take Yu Feihong, but Li Sheng still knew him better, and knew that he must be a drunkard who did not mean to drink, and his goal must be the script of killing.

Anyway, there was nothing to do, after Li Sheng got down, he turned his head and prepared to ask Yu Feihong.

(To be continued.) )