Chapter 604: Wow!~What a great body!~

Ji Ran conceived for half a night, and finally thought of his own, although the outline is still a little vague, but there is already an obvious main line, and the name has also been thought of, it is called "Folded Winged Angel".

After giving a good name, Ji Ran originally wanted to rest, because there is still class tomorrow, and it is not too early now, but what is unexpected is that writing is still a very exciting thing, because once you have a story in your head, you have an urge to tell it quickly, if you don't tell it, it will be very uncomfortable to hold it in your heart, which is more uncomfortable than the feeling of holding urine.

Maybe this is what the tomato god said about the feeling of diabetes insipidus, right?

Ji Ran was completely sleepy, so she had to lie on the bed and start writing about herself.

Although it is very tiring to write with your fingers, this is no longer a problem for Ji Ran, who is completely immersed in the passion of creation.

When it was close to dawn, Ji Ran finally finished writing a paragraph, and when she looked back, she couldn't help but be startled, she actually wrote more than 6,000 words in one go.

Ji Ran checked it carefully from beginning to end, except for a few occasional typos, Ji Ran felt that the writing was okay, but if such an article was posted directly on the Internet, would it be too hasty?

Do you want to ask Sister Shell to help you check the gates?

However, it's already two o'clock in the morning, and it's already late, will it disturb Sister Shell?

Ji Ran thought about it, and finally had an idea, why don't you send an email to Sister Shell, and wait for when she sees it, and when she can help me point it out.

Ji Ran wrote the article he wrote and sent it to the QQ mailbox of the leek shell with the email, which is the one 260005520, only this is the personal official QQ ^_^ of Sister Shell

After sending the email, Ji Ran was about to squint for a while, but what she didn't expect was that only about ten minutes later, she actually received a message from the leek shell.

It turned out that Sister Shell didn't sleep either, and it took her more than ten minutes to read Ji Ran's manuscript seriously, and put forward some of her own opinions on the content of the manuscript.

"The story at the beginning is not attractive enough, the plot enters too slowly, and the sense of substitution is not good enough, there is a trick to writing online articles, that is, the dragon head pork belly unicorn tail, whether the beginning is written well or not directly affects the results of the entire online article, especially the first three chapters, it is the most important thing, you should write the best story at the very beginning, or explain the things you want to explain the most, at the beginning, so as to increase the reader's desire to read, your beginning is too traditional, not suitable for the beginning of the online article. The leek shell unabashedly pointed out Ji Ran's shortcomings.

Ji Ran thought about it carefully, and it seemed to be really reasonable, so he humbly accepted the suggestion of the shell, reluctantly deleted all the three chapters he had worked so hard to write, and began to reimagine the story.

I haven't slept all night, Ji Ran felt that my head was a little confused, so I simply put my phone aside, take a nap, and write it when my mental state is good, otherwise, the written text will also be indiscriminate.

Ji Ran took a nap on the bed for an hour, it was already dawn, Lin Shuhao came to Ji Ran's apartment on time and knocked on the door vigorously.

Ji Ran heard a knock on the door, so he woke up, touched his phone and looked, "Oh my God, I'm going to be late!~"

Ji Ran hurriedly jumped off the bed, ran to the door, and opened the door for Lin Shuhao.

Due to the hurry, Ji Ran only wore pajamas and went to open the door, and when she opened the door, the graceful figure shrouded in almost transparent pajamas was unreservedly displayed in front of Lin Shuhao.

Lin Shuhao looked at Ji Ran's tall chest, smooth lower abdomen, and a pair of slender **** with white flowers under the nightdress, and almost fainted with happiness.

"Xiao Ran, why did you get up?" Lin Shuhao asked strangely, if it was usual, Ji Ran should be on his way to school at this time.

"There's no time to explain, you wait for me first, I'll be right away. After Ji Ran finished speaking, he hurriedly rushed into the bathroom, and after some washing, he returned to the room.

"Hey, I've changed my clothes, you turn around and don't peek. Ji Ran told Lin Shuhao.

Lin Shuhao turned around with a smile, but Ji Ran forgot a little, there was a big mirror in the room, although Lin Shuhao turned his back, but he could still see Ji Ran from the mirror.

It's hard to see it in such a small room.

It's just that Ji Ran was in a hurry to change his clothes at this time, and he didn't expect so much, but in front of Lin Shuhao, he took off his pajamas, and his snow-white and wonderful figure was unreservedly presented in Lin Shuhao's eyes under the reflection of the mirror.

Lin Shuhao's heart jumped suddenly, and his eyes widened, "Wow, Xiao Ran's figure is really amazing, her breasts are so big, and her legs are so white!"

Lin Shuhao exclaimed in his heart, but this kind of benefit ended quickly, because Ji Ran's speed of dressing was also amazing, his pants were put on with a kick on his legs, and his shirt was directly covered from his head, and then, he pulled his messy hair out of his clothes, combed it with a comb a few times, and it became neat, and his long black and silky hair poured down like a waterfall, which was really beautiful.

It only took less than five minutes for everything to be taken care of, and the speed was amazing, which made Lin Shuhao staggered.

"It's so fast. Lin Shuhao looked at the energetic Ji Ran and couldn't help but exclaim.

"Hehe, is it quick?" Ji Ran walked up with a smile and asked.

"A lot of girls wear all kinds of makeup before they go out, and I thought you would do the same. Lin Shuhao said with a smile.

"People have cosmetics and makeup, how can I have them? I don't want to make up makeup?" Ji Ran shrugged his shoulders and smiled helplessly.

"What kind of cosmetics do you like? I'll buy it for you." Lin Shuhao said without thinking about it, such a beautiful girl, if there is no cosmetics, how can it?

As the personal guardian of the beautiful school flower, how can she suffer like this?

Looking at Lin Shuhao's serious appearance, Ji Ran suddenly smiled, "Fool, I'm teasing you, I don't want any cosmetics, in fact, I haven't made much makeup all the time." ”

"Alas, don't you usually wear makeup?" Lin Shuhao asked strangely, isn't such a delicate skin maintained with super expensive skin care products?

"Of course, when have you ever seen me wear makeup? Wash it with water, put on some sunscreen when it's cold, and sunscreen when it's hot. Ji Ran smiled beautifully, the small dimples at the corners of her mouth were cute and charming.

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