Li Mo's essay was too ruthless, it is said that there was a female teacher among the teachers who marked the papers, and it happened that her mother was sick and hospitalized, and after seeing this essay, she was actually incited to cry. Pen | fun | pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 infoA few of the other teachers couldn't figure out what was going on, so they asked.

After reading the paper, several teachers didn't know what to say, and the two teachers smiled bitterly and comforted the female teacher.

Although the name system is vague, as for the name of the student, a few teachers can guess it without guessing, among the middle school students in Chao City, which student writes the best essay?

The high school entrance examination is also a cross-change examination room in the city, and the teacher is changed to mark the papers to prevent cheating.

A few teachers sighed for a long time, and sure enough, they were a talent, and it would be great if we could teach such students.

If you have to pick a thorn, you can still deduct half a point, maybe you can pick? If you don't say anything else, that female teacher won't agree. Therefore, this essay is still a perfect score.

Of course, Mr. Qian has already read it, but the experts invited by the publishing house commented on it again: the most simple text, the greatest true love in the world, and the best middle school student essay of the year.

The school is also going to get it to be published in the provincial daily newspaper, what should I do, Li Mo does not participate in the essay competition, not only composition, but also Li Mo mathematics and English are eligible to participate in various competitions, but Li Mo just does not participate.

Writing a good essay and putting it in the newspaper will bring some honor to the school. But if you want to be in the newspaper, you have to check the authenticity. Really, it will be more touching, fake, relatively speaking, this essay will be greatly discounted.

Teacher Qian said, "Li Mo, share with you your experience in writing essays. ”

"Okay, I don't talk about writing essays in my usual life, but only about writing essays in the exam room, and the time is very short, not only for essays, but also for the previous exam questions, so you have to use every minute. First, we must analyze the exam questions, and we must not go off topic, unless you write a shocking article in the "Preface to the Tengwang Pavilion", then no matter where you run, even if you run to the United States, the essay can still get a high score. ”

The students laughed together.

"After analyzing the exam questions, I immediately recalled, in fact, there is no need to observe, we have grown so big, and everyone has many stories of this kind and that, that is, the central idea of the essay is to rely on these stories as much as possible, so that the written articles will make people feel real and move people's hearts. ”

"After relying on it, I immediately sorted out my thoughts, but I couldn't figure out my thoughts clearly, and I couldn't write my essay well. Finally, you need to write the draft in the most cursive word, and then revise it. For example, in my essay, there are still several sentences, how many heroes have been produced in the world since ancient times, but no hero can block the passage of time, and spring is getting thicker and farther away...... But the previous sentence let me delete it, because it is seriously inconsistent with the style of this article. Also, I wrote in the draft about the old lady's death, such as her gray hair. It's too much, and I'm going to delete it. ”

"In addition to these four, I would like to say two key words, calm. Many students usually do well in the exam, but they don't do well in the big exam, not because they usually plagiarize in the exam, but because when they get to the big exam, they are nervous and can't perform. The same is true for composition, I can't even remember what I have learned, and besides, the story that happened to me before will inevitably be written poorly. ”

"If you still feel that your writing skills are poor, there is only one way, every three or five days, write a diary of 300 to 500 words, whether it is after reading or what is happening around you, it does not have to be read by others, but it must be written. After a few years, the ability to write is bound to improve dramatically. For no other reason, he is familiar with 300 Tang poems, and he can't compose poems and can chant them. That's it......"

"Thank you Li Mo for sharing his essay experience. Teacher Qian said.

The whole class slapped together, including Liao Quanbao, one is composition, the other is English, Liao Quanbao is also self-aware, and he is not as good as Li Mo.

After class, Guo Zirong said to Li Mo: "Little villain, whatever essay you wrote, it made me cry." ”

"Is it badly written?"

"Is the Yan family really that miserable?"

"Well, it's true, but I've done it artistically. In fact, Mrs. Yan was sick for several days before she finally died. Ordinary people are like this, their family is just an ordinary working class, with limited income, and when they get married, or have a serious illness, or other big things, they have no money in their hands, so they have to borrow money from others, and if they borrow, they have to pay it back, so they have to work hard. It's not their family, it's like this in many families. Your dad is a leader and can't understand it. ”

"What about the leader?"

"No, no......" Li Mo didn't say.

In fact, going back, don't look at the old lady who falls on the road, there may not be anyone to help, but many people still want to help in their hearts. There is also the catastrophe in western Sichuan, and I saw the performance of the people of the whole country...... This shows that although the world is declining, everyone is still sticking to their moral bottom line.

But there is one group that has fallen even more, and that is Guo Zirong's father......

The matter still let the Yan family know, first Uncle Yan was crying in the house, and his daughter-in-law didn't dare to persuade him on the side.

Then Uncle Yan ran out and squatted in the corner and smoked vigorously.

Li Mo saw Uncle Yan holding his essay book in his hand at a glance, and he was so frightened that he ran back.

But soon, Yan Bo's two sons came to the door.

Li Mo asked with some concern: "Uncle Yan, Uncle Yan, what are you looking for me?"

"You wrote this book, right?"

"Yes. ”

"You wrote my mom?"

"Uncle Yan, I wrote it, it's okay, right?" asked Li Mo weakly. According to the custom of their neighborhood, they are called into the earth, and when a man dies, do not disturb them. Li Mo used a dead man to make a fuss, which was not very good in the end.

Not to mention that Uncle Yan's two sons are filial piety and etiquette, if they get involved in this, once they get angry, they are really a little unclear. After Li Mo finished speaking, he stared at Uncle Yan and Uncle Yan nervously, fearing that the two Uncle Yan would beat him up.

"You write that my mom is a good person, why do we blame you. Li Mo, thank you, otherwise I would have forgotten my mother. Uncle Yan said.

The two brothers discussed at the door of Li Mo's house, and they would ask for leave tomorrow and go to their mother's grave.

The next day the two brothers came back from the grave, and their eyes were red with crying, and then they moved the table to the courtyard and drank vigorously.

Definitely won't trouble Li Mo, but Li Mo sighed, even if the old lady dies and raises these two sons, she should be able to smile under Jiuquan.

Midterm exams are here.

Liao Quanbao was pressed to fourth place by Xie Yuhe and the two freshmen this time, and Li Mo's performance slipped even worse.

Teacher Huang called Li Mo to the office.

Li Mo said: "Mr. Huang, I plan to take the science exam in the future, and I didn't spend time on history and geography. ”

He has always been very good at historical geography, especially history, and even the teachers who teach history classes may not be as good as him. But in addition to listening to lectures and doing homework, he didn't take a little time to memorize, and some details were definitely not answered.

Li Mo also knew that he would definitely not do well in the exam this time, but there was only so much time, and he really couldn't spare it.

"You write very well in essays, why do you want to take the science exam?"

"Mr. Huang, I am good at writing, but I am also good at mathematics, physics and chemistry. ”

"Even if you want to take the science exam, you didn't do well in politics this time. ”

"Teacher Huang, it's still early, don't worry, when it comes to the college entrance examination, my political class grades will definitely keep up. ”

"Learning is like sailing against the current, if you don't advance, you will retreat, how can you reassure me?"

"Teacher Huang, it's really not good, you look at my final exam. Li Mo was also helpless, Teacher Huang was kind, but it was not a way to stare at himself like this, so he had to spend more time on studying.

"Don't think you've published two composition books......"

"Mr. Huang, I really don't have pride. ”

"Go back. Teacher Huang said that he had already checked Li Mo's transcript, and the final exam results were relatively stable, but as soon as the mid-term exam results were due, they would change very badly, sometimes up and sometimes down.

Could there be any other reason?

After school, Mr. Huang followed Li Mo to Li Mo's house, he knew that Li Mo had "rented" a house outside, but he didn't know if any family members came with him, even if he didn't come over, what was the environment around the house?

Li Mo walked in front and didn't notice it, so he led Teacher Huang to his home in a daze. He turned his head to look, and his face changed: "Teacher Huang......"

Teacher Huang looked at the room strangely and asked, "Li Mo, is there no one else here?"

"No, I'm alone for the time being. ”

"Aren't you afraid of such a big house?"

"What are you afraid of?" Li Mo said funny, in his previous life, when he fished for blackfish and soft-shelled turtles, he could sometimes sleep with his head resting on the tomb. Maybe there are ghosts and gods in this world, but they shouldn't be the ghosts and gods that everyone thinks. Even if there is a ghost and god in everyone's heart, he has not done anything wrong, and he will not be afraid of the trouble that the ghost will come to him in the middle of the night.

"The house also has air conditioning. ”

"It's loaded. ”

"The rent is expensive. ”

"Relatives, relatives. Li Mo said vaguely that Mr. Huang didn't go upstairs, but just looked around, and didn't notice anything wrong, so he left depressed.

However, the honor that should be fought for still has to be fought for, and soon, Li Mo's essay was really published in the provincial daily.

For a while, Li Mo once again attracted the attention of many students.

Seeing that everyone treated Li Mo like stars holding the moon, Liao Quanbao's heart swelled with all kinds of feelings. However, in just a few days, Liao Quanbao found a way to attack Li Mo......

At this time, the weather gradually got colder, and everyone's clothes became thicker and thicker, on this day, Liao Quanbao brought a newspaper and said to Li Mo: "Li Mo, you just published two essay collections, look at Li Mu, that's amazing." ”

In the Chaoshi dialect, wood and Mo are really close. But Liao Quanbao spoke Mandarin very well, Li Mo still heard it, and he said casually: "What Li Mu?"

"Look at it," Liao Quanbao spread the newspaper on the table.

Li Mo was watching, and several classmates were also watching.

Li Mo only glanced at it, and his face changed...... (To be continued.) )