It's too easy to deal with Liao Quanbao, what Li Mo is most afraid of is to move his fists, and if he punches him, no matter how bright his head is, it won't work, so he has that sentence, Xiucai met a soldier, and he can't explain it clearly. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info

Liao Quanbao is a top student and can't fight.

Li Mo came to the physical education teacher Teacher Zhao and said, "Teacher Zhao, Liao Quanbao wants to play badminton with you and fight it out." ”

Zhao Leshi was happy: "Really fake?"

"Li Mo, you lie, Mr. Zhao is not, I asked Li Mo to play badminton, so dare to play with you." "Playing badminton with Mr. Zhao, isn't that pure abuse?

Li Mo came to Liao Quanbao and compared himself, Liao Quanbao, and then Teacher Zhao.

Come on.

The weight gap between Mr. Zhao and Liao Quanbao is not much bigger than the weight gap between Liao Quanbao and Zhao Mo.

"Liao Quanbao, you have the heart of a strong man, what is the heart of a strong man, and you are not afraid of strong opponents. Eat persimmons, especially pick soft ones to eat, is that called a strong one?"

"Then don't you do the same. ”

"Is it the same? Look at when I am better than I am, and then look at you, like a big rooster, whoever doesn't like the eye will peck at whom. Oh, it turns out that even a big is not as good. ”

Teacher Zhao understands that the two top students in the class are having a conflict. Proper competition is a good thing, but discord is not good, he advised: "One of you is the class leader and the other is a study committee, so you should unite. It doesn't matter if you play badminton well or not, what matters is your academic performance. ”

You're a physical education teacher, alas...... Well, that's pretty much the case with schools.

"Well, let's compare the results. ”

Compared with the results, Li Mo is not afraid, but why bother. Indeed, it is not easy to suppress Liao Xueba's grades, but what if you press it down, you picked up sesame seeds and lost watermelons.

Li Mo compared the heights of the two again, and then read in pieces: "You are from the city, your parents are literate, and you have not been to kindergarten...... If you don't answer, it means that you have been there. As for me, I am from the countryside, my parents are illiterate, and there is no kindergarten in the whole town. ”

"You start in the first grade of primary school, and primary school is the foundation, and the foundation is solid. I went to school at the age of six, and I skipped straight to the third grade, and I only studied for three years, and my foundation was not solid. ”

"As for us, when we are all growing rapidly, our IQ is also growing rapidly at this time. You're two years older than me, and by the way, the month is older than me, and I was born almost in the solar year, so the month doesn't count, there is at least a two-year difference in IQ. ”

"Needless to say, no matter what the differences, you have to study hard. Teacher Zhao interrupted Li Mo's comparison funny, otherwise, Li Mo could still count five or six gaps, anyway, you Liao Quanbao is still bullying the weak in learning.

Liao Quanbao was almost so angry that he vomited blood.

Soon, Liao Quanbao was hit again.

The class teacher asked each student to hand in a dime and a half to buy a composition book.

It is also normal that in addition to assigning homework, the school also often asks students to buy some review and tutoring materials, and if they want to study well, in addition to paying attention to listening to lectures, that is, rote memorization and question sea tactics.

A few days later, the essay was distributed to the students.

After each student opened it, their faces showed strange expressions, and the Chinese teacher, Mr. Lu, stood on the podium and watched everyone's reactions happily.

It is Li Mo's collection of essays.

The name is "Guardian", but the cover pattern is not a polder, but the back of a middle-aged couple, with open arms, and two children running happily in front of them.

Anyway, the meaning of guardianship in Li Mo's composition is very vague, and it can also be interpreted in this way.

The next line of small print: This year's best essay book for primary and secondary school students. Then there is the author's name: Li Mo.

There are many Chinese, there are not too many duplicate names, and when students saw the cover, they did not pay much attention, but there was also a title page, which had some brief introductions about Li Mo, including age, home address, and the rest was good grades, obedient, and the small test score was the first in the county, and now Chaoshi No. 1 Middle School is studying.

This is also a product of the planned economy, and the leaders of the publishing house can vaguely feel that Li Mo's age is a good selling point, so Li Mo's age is highlighted. But because his thinking has not been reversed, and this is the only way, not only did he not send someone to interview, but he did not even have a photo.

So why publish, in addition to age, what moves them is the content, mainly the content.

The publishing house also deliberately invited experts to make comments after each essay, and wrote a long preface in front of it: "Precious in Truth".

There are a lot of essays taken away by a few teachers, and it is impossible to publish them one by one, so only select more than 80 of the more excellent essays, including two "Guardians", and publish them in a collection.

But whether it is selected or eliminated, it is Li Mo who has carried out some language processing on the basis of truth. Just like these two "Guard", there is a real Cao Zhen Cao River, a real Cao Zhen history, and the last sentence can move people's hearts.

Another example is the article "Hope" in it, first write about a few families planting greenhouse vegetables, how much it costs, worry all day, and finally write about the harvest, a large group of villagers watched the vegetables pick up the boat, a few people supported three wooden boats, silently sailed into the dim moonlight, and gradually disappeared at the end of the moonlight, where there are two words, called hope.

There are two ways to end an article, such as "Falling Peanuts": we talk about dispersing late at night. I finished eating all the peanuts, and my father's words were deeply imprinted on my heart.

This method is called the slow ending method, which is like a stone falling into the water and making waves, and the waves will eventually come to an end, and the aftermath will still be rippling.

There is another way, such as "In Praise of the Poplar": but I want to shout praises to the poplar tree!

It's called a wrap-up finish, and it ends abruptly at the climax.

Li Moduo uses the latter method to conclude, but unlike the current article, his concluding does not have many slogans, although it is a summary of the concluding ending, but it is more restrained and subtle. Of course, this is also a product of the times, and half of the articles before the eighties are slogan articles. After the nineties, Li Mo's finishing method was not so impressive.

It's only 81 years now, and every time several editors of the publishing house see these endings, they will get goosebumps again and again, and then sigh that the prodigies recorded in ancient books are really not exaggerated, and Li Mo is a good living example.

Not only editors, but also review experts, when they encounter these endings, they will always boast in the reviews.

There is also an essay: "Monster Cat".

This is a cat raised by Li Mo's family, and his mouth is too greedy, not only stealing meat dishes from the house, but also stealing meat from neighbors, including lard. Li Daguang's house lard was stolen by it twice, Li Daguang had no choice but to hang the lard jar on the roof beam, only to find that the cat climbed onto the beam of his house, hung on the beam with hind legs, and hung upside down, sticking his head into the lard jar to steal the lard. This cat made the whole village complain, and Li Guangping was so angry that he didn't give it food.

And Li Guangping wanted to kill it, after all, the Li family was too thin, and there were many people in the village who hated it, so they couldn't make enemies with other people for a cat, of course, Li Mo would not write this section into the composition. He only wrote that the father was going to kill it and then look for the cat.

Li Mo's parents saw a scene by the pond, the Li family didn't give it food to eat, and the cat also had a way, put its tail in the water, the little fish couldn't figure it out, came up and pecked, it flicked its tail, brought the little fish to the shore, and there was a delicious meal.

Mother Li smiled bitterly, this cat has become a monster, can't fight, although it is stealing mouths, think about it on the other hand, it is also very good at catching mice, since raising it, the family can no longer hear the movement of mice.

Li Mo used childlike techniques to write all kinds of things about this gluttonous cat, wrote about his mother's discussions, and then ended with a sentence. The flower cat continued to gnaw on the small fish, and looked at his father and mother with disdainful eyes, which means that only you humans are smart, and we cats also have smart cats.

The word cats made Li Mo come up in advance, but this essay became interesting and lively.

Therefore, in this preface, experts call on students to learn to observe and write about real things, people, and things if they want to write good essays.

Let's not talk about writing cultural essays like Li Mo, although China has a history of thousands of years, there are many historical themes to choose from anywhere...... But every student has a lot of people, things, and things around him, just talk about things, 365 days a year, how many interesting or worthwhile events have to happen.

As long as they are observed, write them out, and a good composition will appear. Instead of randomly constructing things that didn't happen at all, can you write well? Are they really all young writers?

Indeed, most students have a headache with their essays, even if it is Liao Quanbao, who also deducts two points from the essay.

After reading the preface, Li Mo felt that the expert's words were not very comprehensive.

It's like Li Mo himself deliberately paid attention to it? Of course, what he writes in his essays is basically true, why is it that this occasional observation is enough to support him to write one essay after another?

The root of this is not observation, but the ability to organize language.

There are two more ways to write a good composition, one is to take the time to read some extracurricular books to enrich your knowledge. The second is to keep a diary, not necessarily every day, once every three or four days, no matter how long or short, but it must be real.

In this way, after three or four years, the composition will be ready.

If you want to study well or write well, it is still the same sentence: There is a diligent path in the book mountain, and there is no end to the hard work of learning the sea. There are methods and skills, but the main ones are still two words: hard work, diligence!

Teacher Lu said: "In terms of composition, you have to learn from Li Mo, go back and read it, take a look at this collection of essays, and see how Li Mo writes essays, in addition, each person must write two feelings after reading." ”

Chubby turned his head to look at Liao Quanbao......

Liao Quanbao immediately lowered his head, secretly clenched his fists, hold back, spend money to buy Li Mo's essay, and read Li Mo's essay and write two more articles after reading, can he be willing?

But Li Mo was a little dumbfounded, stood up and asked, "Teacher Lu, do I also want to write my feelings after reading?"