Extra: A heated discussion between the author and the protagonist

Today's topic is, this book seems to be hitting the streets, what do you think about children's shoes?

Author: "It's all to blame for giving the protagonist the name Mo Ming at the beginning, originally I wanted the protagonist not to seek fame and fortune, but I didn't expect that not seeking fame and fortune came to me, and the egg hurts." ”

Mo Ming: "It's all because the author writes blindly, always hesitating, for fear of hitting the street, being cautious everywhere, and in the end, he still pounces miserably." ”

The author has a sad face: "Well, now is not the time to blame each other, we should think of ways to stop the ......"

Mo Ming: "Cut it, let me go to the next book as the protagonist." ”

Author: "You can't do this, you have to believe that you can still save it, the protagonists of the last book haven't been buried yet...... You have to salvage it, so no matter what, first of all, you, as the protagonist, must make a change!"

Mo Ming looked puzzled: "What change?"

Author: "Well, you have to have a big goal, in fact, you have a goal, but that's the goal in the later stage, not in the early stage, it's very painful, it's like you want to become the Hokage, become the One Piece, and use this banner from the beginning, so that the reader will have a sense of anticipation, so that's where the key problem lies...... Yes, set a long-term goal now, what do you think? ”

Mo Ming: "Okay, I will definitely become the Hokage." ”

The author was pleased: "Also, there is more, the emotional drama should be strengthened, if the emotional drama of a light novel like ours is not prominent enough, it will lose a lot of charm, which is my fault, as the official female one accounts for too little pen and ink, and so on...... If we have an unserious style like ours and forcibly add emotional drama, will it be too discordant?"

Mo Ming's witty face: "That's right, this should be settled with the encounter, the twisted melon is not destined to be sweet, and it doesn't match my character." Then, instead of strengthening individual scenes, it is better to strengthen the portrayal of characters, whether it is passers-by or main characters, there must be a clear personality contrast. For example, if there is a sentence in the text, 'You are very good-looking', even if it is not stated who said it, the reader will know that Qi Miao said it, and if there is a sentence in the text, 'Although I can fight ten by myself, but ......', careful readers must know that this is what Shen Zhiming said. ”

Author: "That's right, if the image of the two-dimensional character is not portrayed enough, then it is no different from a salted fish...... But I've done my best, and it's useless. ”

Mo Ming: "Then strengthen the plot, since it is a platform for online novels, we should follow the general trend and pretend to be more forced to slap our faces." ”

The author's face was excited: "No! This is not our painting style, we have already made some mistakes before, and we can't make them again......"

Mo Ming's dull face: "Then let's continue to make salted fish." ”

Silence for half a minute.

Author: "Na, in fact, the previous plot was also very good, I wrote it very carefully, it was just a matter of careful consideration." Although you're a tease as the protagonist, you often say things that seem silly, but combined with the same funny environment, there's nothing wrong with it. ”

Mo Ming: "You think it's okay, but the reader scolds me for being stupid!

Author: "Oh, you say this, it seems that some people say that your IQ is in arrears, but don't worry, people who say such things don't have to pay attention, anyway, even if our book is on the shelves, that kind of guy won't contribute even a penny to see the genuine version." ”

Mo Ming: "But sometimes I feel that my IQ is in arrears!"

Author: "Be confident, you are not in arrears of IQ, if there is such a moment, it is just to pave the way for the later plot." ”

Silence for half a minute.

Mo Ming: "Forget it, let's cut it." ”

Author: "No, it's not easy for me to raise you so big." ”

Mo Ming: "But we're hitting the street! Look at the way we are now, in the future, we can only drink porridge and eat steamed buns to continue creating. ”

Author: "It's a dream, you know? Because I want to see you characters, one day become an anime and appear on the screen of Guoman.,So I took the risk to try.,Take the risk to work hard.,Hawkers,Although it seems now,It's all delusion.。 ”

Mo Ming: "So, dreams can deceive people. ”

Author: "But hard work doesn't lie. ”

Silence for half a minute.

Mo Ming: "In that case...... Then fuck it, don't be a Hokage, or be a god. ”

Author: "Okay, have ambition! Let's go to the heart of the daily plot in the future, the world is so beautiful, I will definitely accept the plot of our heart." ”

Mo Ming: "Then I shouldn't tease?"

Author: "Of course, your setting is like this, it is impossible to change, even if it grows, it will definitely not change." ”

Mo Ming: "That's right, I'm me, it's a different color fireworks!"

Author: "Yes! Now, we are even more bold and write down the plot that I think is the best, anyway, we are not afraid of anything!"

Mo Ming: "That's right...... It's me who is wrong, there is no point in pretending to be forced or something, teasing should be treated differently, I want to be the king...... Phew, I'm going to be the true God!"