Volume 1 Cloud City Boy Summary at the end of the volume
The first volume was finished, and it was exactly 200,000 words.
This volume, called "Cloud City Youth", what I want to show is Qin Feng's growth from scratch, from the awakening of the martial soul to becoming a role model for the younger generations of the Luo family, from the distribution of medicine gardens to the recognition of peers, elders and even the entire Luo family, from being unknown to moving the cloud city, from being blank to making the entire cloud city surge.
In the middle, there are a lot of imperfections, but they can be barely expressed.
At the beginning, according to the outline I designed, this volume was to write 300,000 words, and then it was transferred to the Northern Xinjiang Lingxuan at about 300,000 words.
Originally, there were still a lot of plots in the middle, to show Qin Feng's transformation very delicately, but when I was writing and writing, I found that it was not right, if I wrote it according to the original plan, although it was delicate, the rhythm would be much slower, and the plot would drag out for a long time, which would not work, and it would feel very watery.
After struggling for a while, I gritted my teeth and slaughtered part of the outline, and reluctantly deleted nearly 20,000 words of the manuscript and rewrote it.
After deleting and revising, I reduced the originally designed plot of almost 100,000 words.
However, in this way, it brought another problem, there were several places in the middle, the connection was not very good, and it felt very stiff, so I had a headache for several days, and I tried my best to polish it, but I could only get to this point.
After all, Lao Jiu is still a newcomer in the online literature circle.
I have no experience, I don't know how to write, and I don't understand the market, so I can only write diligently.
In addition, in terms of updates, the updates are indeed a bit slow.
There are two reasons for this.
First, Lao Jiu is a construction site dog, and the brothers who have done the construction site should know very well that the construction site is very hard, going out early and returning late, getting off work is usually very late, and overtime is also a common thing, which leads to my little time for coding, and often lack of energy.
Second, I am not handicapped, but my brain is slow, and my writing is more serious and meticulous, so it often takes about two and a half hours to write a chapter, and it takes another hour to revise it, which is really slow in the industry and among many authors (in this regard, I deeply reflect and do a deep self-review).
I've also struggled with whether to blindly ensure speed, write like a running account, and then stop spending so much energy on typos, sentences and expressions, so that I will be much faster, ensure that 5,000 words are updated every day, and then I can get a full attendance.
However, I still couldn't convince myself.
After all, this is my hard work, I don't want to pile it up so hastily, I don't want to give up quality for the sake of speed, I can write a little slower, although the middle may lose a lot of reading because of the slow update, but when I have more words, people who like it, you can come back and read it, that way, it should be more flavorful to read, and it won't feel too perfunctory about the story of the old wine.
Of course, I will adjust myself, learn more, and then work harder to achieve speed and quality as much as possible.
Finally, I would like to thank the few readers who have supported me during this time.
Thank you for being kind to me.
Thank you for enjoying this book.
I will write with my heart, although I don't know what it will be written later because of my ability, but I will do my best.
Thank you.
See us in the second volume of "The Spiritual Selection of Northern Xinjiang".
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(Take a leave of absence at the end of the volume, I haven't figured out how to cut into the second volume, it's a bit of a cardin, I need to sort it out, and I drank with my colleagues tonight, I'm a little dizzy, I'll take a day off today, I want to think about the content of the second volume, and strive to be more mature and better than the first volume.) Please forgive me for the day of the pigeon, crying and chirping. )