I'm not satisfied with this debut novel, I should say very dissatisfied, it's almost the opposite of what I originally thought, so that the more I write about the more pitfalls in the back, the more I don't understand, the more I don't match. (What's the solution??!)

So I once again understood that it is not enough to have imagination and writing to write a good work, but also to have logic, and perfect logic can make your writing reasonable. The second is the problem of writing, good writing makes your essay ornamental, and finally imagination, rich imagination can make the article not rigid. Ideas are imaginative, words may be able to, but the whole book cannot, it must be down-to-earth, steady and steady.

The above thoughts are on my preparation for the improvement of the next book for this book, and I say to myself, "Come on!"

Of course, this is not at all satisfactory to this book, after all, he has put a lot of time and effort into it. It may be very bad logically, but I don't feel that I have created a bad character in terms of characters, first of all, the protagonist, this is an "angry protagonist!" Indeed, my original purpose was to write him as an angry protagonist, nothing can be saved, nothing is worse. Thus transforming him from a man who was originally free and easy to become a melancholy and revenge-minded machine. It's not very successful, but at least it's not much worse, he may not be a perfect protagonist, no, he can't be a perfect protagonist at all, but what I want to create is a "person" full of flaws!" (So, don't spray goldfish if you don't think it's good-looking after reading it, I really tried my best.) The main dish is my pot, but it's not my fault!)

Speaking of supporting roles, Xiao Lang is a character I like very much in the whole book, he is truly unrestrained, truly chic and free, no matter what kind of past he bears, what kind of pain, he will always be a cynical prodigal son, and the "prodigal" son has not been annihilated because of this.

As for the old k, there is no way that he was included in the villain camp, so he is destined to end in tragedy, (those who are against the pig's feet are waiting to die, don't most books explain this truth?=-=)

As for the villain Long Aotian, this is an impromptu name, and I initially set him to be mighty and domineering. It's okay, although it's a bit hasty, but there's no way, it's going to end, how can the villain end if he doesn't die, the goldfish is very helpless, okay, okay, I've carried this pot!

There are also many characters, I actually have a very hard time to put forward their characteristics, highlighting their characters, the arrogance and sorrow of the thief, the wisdom and Chun of the abbot, the slippery head of Liu Dui, the loyalty of Ye Chen, the persistence of Mingtian, and the rationality of Tang Liang.......

Well, the summary is almost, in general, there is a lot to gain and keep up the good work.

(What forgot the heroine!)

(What kind of heroine, nonsense!)

I also hope that some friends will pay attention to my future works, and I will definitely grow and improve!