sunjun0723:00:27cst2015

The description of the novel is very delicate, especially the description of the scenery, which can very highlight the changes in the psychology of the characters and hint at the next plot development; This character has a strong sense of substitution, and the description of loneliness is relatively lacking, the author wants to write more! For the heroine Mu Xinya, her changes are also obvious, from the beginning of the soft and weak, dare not hurt people, to the current brave to protect herself, her experience undoubtedly played a great role, so adversity creates a strong man! I hope that the heroine will become more cold in the future, but she can't completely lose her heart, otherwise it will make people sad...... I like Jade Poria very much, it's so cute, like a sunflower, kind and cute, and Chu Han protects her, a very happy little girl, but she will also have a series of bad things happen later, heart-stopping! But I hope the author can give such a beautiful girl a better ending, otherwise our values will collapse! What should we do if such a good child is miserable in the end! I also want to give her and Chu Han some extras (⊙o⊙) Oh! As for the plot, the writing was a little immature at the beginning, but after seeing it, I could really follow the article, and the author has greatly improved! Awesome! The plot in the future should also think more, more interesting, and the ups and downs can attract readers more! In the end, it is a great blessing, scattering flowers and flowers! Quickly become a god!!