Finally finished writing "The Melancholy of the Spring in the Cool Palace" before the start of school.。 Pen "Fun" Pavilion www.biquge.info When I finally retracted the foreshadowing of the first chapter "Toy Soldiers" in Chapter 17, I was in a very excited state. So by the way, I wrote the epilogue together. It's one o'clock in the morning, and there's still an hour before Ah Xu and Kasuga meet their two-person world, and I have time to calm down and summarize the gains and feelings of this volume.

First of all, the Suzumiya Kasuga series should be regarded as the first light novel I read. At the same time, I also watched "9s", "Literary Girl", "Radio Wave Department Girl", "Yakushiji Ryoko's Strange Event Book", "Empty Realm" and "Burning Eyes of Xana" (I also want to write about the same people of these works). At that time, I was still a junior high school student, and Haruhi Suzumiya had a huge impact on me (in terms of worldview, in terms of thinking about problems). I've always wanted to write a fan of Haruhi Suzumiya, but I know it's going to be difficult. The level of the Suzumiya Haruhi series is very high (especially the first volume is an award-winning entry), and its narration is very distinctive (the protagonist's words are mixed with his inner monologue, without quotation marks, and it is up to the reader to judge for himself whether Ah Xu has said those inner words). His story is very tightly connected, and the foreshadowing is very delicate (such as the birthmark on Asahina's chest, etc.). The main thing is that this work is well-known.,It's really difficult to have a work like this.,Especially since my personal level is quite limited.。

That's why I'm doing secondary creation with a learning mentality. I have quoted quite a few passages from the original text in this article, in large part because I think it is so well written that I can't part with it and can't change it. If you copy the original text exactly, what would it be called doujin?So from the beginning, I wanted to replace Asahina, Furuizumi, and Nagato with my own characters. This idea is the most classic sentence in and out of Suzumiya Haruhi: "I have no interest in ordinary humans." If there are aliens, people from the future, people from another world, people with superpowers, just come to me! (My replies in the book review section have also changed to the style of xxxx or above.) I was thinking, why do you have to be aliens, futuristic people, and superpowers? Can you come with a new one? So I replaced the alien with Sulfona, because Sulfona was already very capable when she evolved to the seventh volume (she was already a demigod by the time of the fourth volume), and only Nagato's position was suitable for her. Asahina was changed by me to the now popular main god space setting, which can be regarded as a kind of time travel. Eventually, I changed the name of Furuizumi to a magical girl in women's clothes (which seems to be the mainstream now), although he insists that he is a superpower.

You can see it by looking at the title of each chapter. Both of the things in the title appear in this chapter, and both are not present in the original book. I hope you can recall what this one is about when you see the title.

I guess when I read Nagato's confession, many readers don't understand what I'm writing. It's kind of my little love, and I can't stop writing about this kind of sci-fi setting (I was a big reader of Science Fiction World). There are many more such quirky sci-fi settings in this book (such as the prologue), so I hope you will understand.

When it came to Asahina's turn, I told the story of her and Ayu's seniors. In the original work, Asahina can't like Ah Xu because of the distance of time and space and the constraints of "established matters". Here, it's because Ah Xu and "Ah Xu's predecessors" are two plausible people. Ah Xuan said in Chapter 9: "I think I may not be your predecessor Ah Xu. At that time, he had already clearly rejected Asahina. As for the setting of the so-called strategy book, I refer to the ability to draw Sakurayu fog in Akamatsu-sensei's manga "UQ Holder!". Although the setting that Haruhi Suzumiya is the main god sounds novel, it actually caused me a lot of trouble when I wrote it.

Gu Quan: I want to write as a relatively mature person. Compared to the smiling tiger like the original, I hope you can understand why he is so mature. I gave him some stories about the past with Suzumiya. He feels that he has said too much to Haruhi, causing Haruhi to sacrifice himself in the end. He turned into a girl in a costume to make him cute. It is more valuable for young and old people to be bullied. The protection of Kasuga is more about stabilizing the SH defense system, which seems much more natural than the original setting of "out of instinct".

In addition to the changes in these three characters, the plot of the final closed space is also a little richer. The closed space became more dangerous, and Ah Xu became more manly. In the end, Ah Xu's monologue about Haruhi is almost completely different from the original book, which is actually my experience. I was also in my second year of secondary school (although I am ...... now. I often fantasize that I'm the protagonist with superpowers. As I grew up, I gradually experienced the real taste of life. So I couldn't help but fill in my own feelings. We look forward to your understanding.

Of course, Nagato Sina and Asakura Sulfur are the two characters I care about the most. Asakura Sulfona is the Sulfona in the third volume, her image is ready-made, and I need how this character will show her existence in the world of Suzumiya Haruhi. So I designed a plot for her that fits the world of Kazeno Tokitsuki: a fairy tale recreated in the real world. There are many works that confront fate, and the reason why Macbeth was chosen is simply because of his hot head. Of course, in the world of Kasuga, Asakura is also a very good person. It's good enough to be misunderstood, so good that it's deliberately misunderstood for the happiness of others. I added a lot of scenes in Asakura, and she became active in interacting with Ah Xu, silently promoting the relationship between Ah Xu and Haruhi. In the final epilogue, I also let her make a small appearance, which can be regarded as a successful ending.

Nagato's character is actually very similar to the original Nagato, and of course I gave up using bookmarks and gave her a new way of "manifestation". This approach is derived from Book 6, although Volume 6 is currently pitted. Every word of the wordless character must be carefully scrutinized. My abilities are limited, and this character is really average. It's like Haruhi and Ah Uh fantasizing that they can become otherworldly one day, and in my heart, Nagato may wish that he could become ordinary. She learned to eat, make coffee, read books, and do things that ordinary people would do. As she says to Ah Xu in the epilogue, "Sometimes I think how nice it would be if I were just an ordinary person like you." "It's a completely opposite role to Form 2, but I didn't manage it well.

The spring is basically the same as the original, but Ah Xu has rarely changed with me. He became more cheerful, and he became more proactive, such as the Shinin Finger part. This character is undoubtedly the most difficult to understand in the entire Suzumiya Haruhi series (the best to understand is, of course, Kasuga, and the second most difficult to understand is probably Taniguchi). What he said, his inner monologue is just one side of his thoughts, and it is difficult for us to get a glimpse of the real Ah Xu. On the one hand, many of his ideas resonate with readers, but on the other hand, many of his actions are thought-provoking. Of course, his inner world is very interesting. I've been learning in the process of the same person"A Xu's spit "Void style",Most of the A Xu's spit in this volume is written by me in imitation.,I hope it can be interesting.。

Another element of this volume is that strange candy. I'm writing this because I was eating sugar at the time (it's a shame to eat sugar at such a big age) and the sugar was still very sour. I'm the type to write wherever I want, and before I know it, sugar has become quite a key prop. Whether the turning point is blunt or not, and whether the development is strange, I hope you will give me more opinions.

Another little easter egg is probably Othello's level. Although Gu Quan was often beaten violently in the original work, Ah Xu's chess power should be inhuman in my setting. Their home is probably like the devil's house in "Genius Mahjong Girl". Asahina, who has unlimited ability to read files, can't even beat him, and of course an ordinary master like Gu Quan can only be ravaged obediently.

Personally, I think this volume is the one I'm very satisfied with so far. Tokitsuki Kaze is a bit sluggish in the third volume, and the pace of the story is fast and slow. Of course, it seems to be very brainwashing.,There's a heavy social reasoning style.,But I prefer a lighter taste.。 This volume adheres to the characteristics of the original, and there are many foreshadowings buried in daily life. It was only after reading it many times that I realized a lot of ingenuity in the original work. I try to imitate as much as possible, and I hope you will give me a lot of advice.

Most of my fanfics can be read directly without reading the original, and this volume is no different. However, if someone reads "The Melancholy of Haruhi Suzumiya" and this volume, they may find new fun. My fandom will only become more interesting because the reader has read the original book. I also hope that readers of this volume of mine will read the original book by Ryu Tanigawa if they have time. It's really well written.

During the Spring Festival and winter holidays, I basically had no distractions in the codeword, which was a good feeling. I'm starting to get used to updating 15k per time. It's hard for me to say what the future holds. Fortunately, last semester was supposed to be the heaviest semester for me, and this semester will be easier.

Every time I see the synopsis of my book, I feel ashamed. The text has nothing to do with the title, so why are even the first and second volumes potholed. So I decided to start rewriting the Great Sword Scroll (the original part is still kept, and I'll open a new one). The reset greatsword will retain most of the characters, but their settings and stats will change. In addition, this volume will be a pure story, and I will try not to add any complaints and memes. The goal I want to achieve will be a big sword with a "martial arts style". If you are extremely faithful to the original, you can come and tear me up.

Hopefully this time I'll be able to finish my story and stay the course. Sure enough, all the holes dug have to be filled.

In addition, I hope that you will post your thoughts to the book review area. If you don't want to send a recommendation vote, at least let me know that someone is watching it (you don't have to give a tip). Your support is my motivation.

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