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He Tiantian listened, but still decided to say his own suggestion, as for whether Yuan Hua accepts it, it is Yuan Hua's own business, after all, Yuan Hua is the author of this book, not her. Pen Fun Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo

"Yuanhua, the era you wrote about is around seventy-seven years, you are not from the past, you don't know that as an educated youth, seventy-seven years is a hopeful year for us, whether we take the exam or not. He Tiantian said, "At that time, everyone worked during the day and studied at night, and their morale was high. I also know that there are many people who did not get in, but it cannot be denied that the society was progressive at that time, and in seven or eight years, after the economic reform, it was not only the economy that was reformed, but also people's thoughts, and some people who dared to think and dare to do things had already walked in front of the wealth. It can be said that your time background is positive. You write about the characters to criticize the human nature of that era. Your idea is good, but I think your portrayal of characters does not bring a positive impact to people, but reveals that people are powerless in the face of the times, even if they struggle hard, they will fail in the end, and a good person can only commit suicide with children, don't you think this is too decadent?"

Yuan Hua was stunned for a moment, carefully pondering Teacher He's words.

There are some unsatisfactory things in life, but there are also some truths, goodness and beauty!

Her novels do not match the background of the times.

She only thought about criticism, but she didn't think of hope.

"Mr. He, you're right, my novel is different from the background of the times. Yuan Hua said, "Then how to change my novel?"

He Tiantian thought a lot, she hoped that many people could be strong, not weak and not want to change.

"Actually, you want to satirize and criticize that era through a woman, but at the same time it is an era full of hope. The man Chen Shimei, who abandoned his wife, has already played a critical role. However, the portrayal of the heroine, using tragedy to deepen the critical role, can not really play the desired role, so I suggest that you can make the heroine strong and self-reliant, it doesn't matter if she is not admitted to college, you can do a small business; 。 This kind of story is much more exciting than the old-fashioned story of Chen Shimei and Qin Xianglian, isn't it?"

Yuan Hua was stunned for a moment, carefully pondering what He Tiantian said.

After a while, Yuan Hua's eyes showed excitement and said, "Teacher He, I understand what you mean." It's better than the other person, it's more critical than suicide, and it can also guide women to be positive instead of going against the grain. ”

"Yes!" He Tiantian smiled, "Writing a novel is not about how impressive it is, but it must have its own meaning." ”

"Uh-huh, yes. Yuan Hua smiled, "I am a woman in the new era, and I should write more positive novels." It may be that my mood some time ago affected the writing of the novel. ”

"If you're in a bad mood, don't write. He Tiantian smiled, "By the way, you're about to take annual leave, when are you going home?"

"There are not many things to do at the end of the year in our association, and on the twenty-sixth day of the lunar month, I can go home. I came to work on the 10th day of the Chinese New Year, and I would like to take my father over if I can. Yuan Hua said with a smile, "I often clean the house I bought before, and then buy some furniture, and then I can move in." ”

"Okay, your father is alone at home, and you don't feel at ease outside. He Tiantian smiled, "By the way, your family and Xiaoyan's family are not far away, her parents-in-law are elderly, your father is fine, you can go and chat with them." ”

"Yes, Uncle Niu, Aunt Niu is a good person. Yuan Hua smiled, "My father is retired now, and he usually doesn't like to be at home. I also saw a small park around the house where people played chess, my dad didn't smoke or drink, but he just liked to play chess, and he would definitely love it. ”

"Hehe, that's even better. He Tiantian smiled, "Take advantage of the old man's good health and spend time with his family." ”

"Yes, Mr. He. Yuan Hua said with a smile.

After eating here, Yuan Hua hurried home and revised the draft.

Before returning to his hometown on vacation, Yuan Hua came over again and put the manuscript here with He Tiantian.

He Tiantian saw it, it was really refreshing, a strong woman, a great mother, jumped on the paper. The storyline is tightly arranged and the writing is smooth.

It's just that Yuanhua went home, and he could only wait for the New Year to praise Yuanhua.

is really a talented woman, He Tiantian just has some ideas, if she really wants her to write, she can't write it.

Think about Tang Ping'an, who developed in Xiangjiang, like Yuanhua, is talented.

But Tang Ping'an didn't love Yuanhua, Yuanhua was a proud woman, she didn't want to be a person who lost herself for love, so she came to Yanjing.

One south and one north, spanning most of China.

Even if He Tiantian feels pity, she also knows that some people are destined to become friends and not lovers.

Some time ago, He Tiantian received a letter from Xiangjiang Xie Wanying.

The letter said that Tang Pingan was more suitable for development in Xiangjiang, and his grades were excellent, and she had introduced Tang Pingan to the Chinese teacher of Xiangjiang University, which was appreciated by the teacher, and was better for his future development.

Now the Xie family's magazine and publishing house are making every effort to cultivate Tang Ping'an.

He Tiantian was happy for Tang Ping'an, and also wished him greater achievements in Xiangjiang.

He Tiantian wrote back to Xie Wanying, explaining to her that she must be like an elder, teach, and remind Tang Ping'an, after all, he is still young, and in the face of the colorful world outside, don't lose yourself.

He Tiantian also wrote to Tang Ping'an before, but Tang Ping'an did not reply.

Xie Wanying is more than ten years older than Tang Ping'an, and I believe that she will give Tang Ping'an some help.

At the end of the year, the students who had taught before wrote to He Tiantian one after another, telling them about their affairs in the internship unit, as well as some words of thanks and happy New Year wishes.

Especially in Layue, He Tiantian can receive letters from students every day.

This made Huo Yingjie's eyes hot.

I've only been a homeroom teacher for a year, why do you suddenly give people a feeling that the world is full of peaches and plums?

This makes He Tiantian very proud!

When He Tiantian wrote to the students again, he felt very happy.

Huo Yingjie helped He Tiantian analyze it, this is because He Tiantian is at home and has little communication with friends, so he is eager to communicate with others.

He Tiantian thought about it carefully and thought about it deeply, and decided to maintain these relationships.