"Yohee! Defeat that guy Nana starts today!"

Jiang Yucheng regained his motivation - if you want to overshadow this famous writer, it is impossible to do it overnight, but at least you have to accumulate small victories into big victories! Maybe you can't come up with convincing results soon, but a journey of a thousand miles begins with a single step, at least now you have to complete today's update well, and you have to write better than Nana's update—— that is, at least in today's update, defeat Nana's guy!

There was no class that afternoon, and Jiang Yucheng returned home at noon - according to the custom, he made lunch for his sister first. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info she hasn't been out of the room since the showdown a few days ago. Perhaps, she won't appreciate it, but as an older brother, Jiang Yucheng has already made up his mind to resolutely resist Nana's evil intentions and defend his sister's sacred and inviolable right to squat at home—just as Mi Rong Ni and Niu Jingui (Note 1) want to defend the sacred and inviolable stupid rights of the people of the Hope of Mankind.

After making up for a two-hour nap, Jiang Yucheng was woken up by the alarm clock. Leave all the messy chores like homework behind for now – start thinking about today's update first. Since you are determined to defeat Nana's guy from today, then as a man, of course, you have to do what you say - even if it takes a little more time and a few fewer words, you can't do anything like borrowing from irrigation!

Sitting in front of the computer, Jiang Yucheng took out the end of dealing with linear algebra and organic chemistry, and seriously considered today's more text-painstakingly deducing the development of the plot, conceiving the dialogue between the characters, perfecting the description of details, and thinking of some interesting stalks to put into the text...

"Why don't you just make a new girl!"

At first, it was just a flash of inspiration in my head - but in an instant, this girl's attributes, image, lines and plot suddenly jumped out completely. He was amazed at the speed of his writing, and then he began to take pride in the perfection of the idea—sometimes it was painful to write an article, but this time, the whole chapter popped out of his head like Athena, and it was a wonderful feeling!

"Strike while the iron is hot. ”

So after an hour of fingertip flying, today's update took shape smoothly - after writing, Jiang Yucheng also reviewed it several times, and the more he examined it, the more he felt that today's more text was really perfect! However, why does it always feel a little familiar? Maybe it's because I've seen it too many times?

“··· Wait!!"

Masaka · Jiang Yucheng clicked on the bookshelf "Top Ambition Sky" and began to confirm in fear...

I said how can this TMD look so pleasing to the eye!! this is obviously the bridge written in Chapter 67 of "Top Ambition"!!Whether it is the girl who appears or the plot and lines, it is basically exactly the same—— no, because of the limitations of writing, my own writing is a little worse·····

The previous arrogance turned into disillusionment in an instant - lost... Completely lost, the battle was lost before it even began... Obviously, I'm trying my best to write something that surpasses Nana's guy... But the best passages that came up with it, the plot, the lines, and the ones that were going to be used in the update were all things written by Nana's guy!!

"No! It's not because I can't write anything else, it's because I've read too many Nana's things at once, and my mind is full of Nana!···"

Jiang Yucheng announced like this - although such a statement sounds a bit dangerous, if it is heard by the fagots of the cage mountain infrastructure construction group, they will definitely have "true love", "together" or something. But the priority should be to relax your mind····· Forget it, let's read some other online articles to find inspiration... As he spoke, he put Word aside and clicked on his mother's bookshelf.

"Hmmm... Well, this guy is better than Nana's writing--it's really a god..."

"Hmmm... Damn, what is this?!Don't say Nana, even I can this thing!!"

Wait!! I came to read other online articles by myself, obviously I wanted to get rid of the deep impression that Nana instilled in my mind!! why did I still involuntarily compare myself with Nana's guy?! Doesn't this make Nana's image more and more profound?·····

Just when Jiang Yucheng was busy vomiting himself, the penguin's prompt sounded:

【Red Lancers】

16:15:11

Hello

By the way, I almost forgot that there was this guy—— she promised to be on her side like that. I think you can make some useful suggestions, right?

【Little Fat Man】

16:15:22

Yo

······

Speaking of which, what is this guy's attitude towards herself? Probably she admires her work very much, and since she said that she wants to take a look, she must still want to help herself, right? Seriously, although the faggets in the group sometimes discuss some novels, but they haven't made any specific suggestions to themselves, she is willing to bother like this, Jiang Yucheng can feel a little moved...

··· But judging by yesterday's reaction, it doesn't seem like she admires her own work "so", and it doesn't seem very convincing to interpret her kindness as an interest in her own work. Then unless... Unless...

"Unless it's not my work that she likes, but... Personally!"

Uh... Just by moving the thoughts, the deer began to bump into the chest... No, no, no, what am I doing in YY... Judging by the way she looks, she may be a bit of an ascetic person, ah, yes, didn't she speak out about the boys in their school as some kind of "potato and cabbage-like characters"·····

With his trembling right hand, Jiang Yucheng slid the mouse with some difficulty, dragging the Word document he had just written into the chat window.

"This-is-today's-update, there's-what-opinion-although-put forward-"

But... If the people of Northeast University of Technology are all potato and cabbage-like figures, it is natural for her to have a longing for the students of famous schools, right? Speaking of which, when she was in the experimental middle school, she went to Xu Laofu's worst class, but what about herself? She is a person in the key class, and it can be said that she has been ahead of her, so it is okay to have a little sense of superiority·····

To be honest... When this guy puts down the shelf, he is still quite likable, he looks fair, his teeth are very neat, and when he laughs...

【Red Lancers】

16:19:31

Well, after taking a look, I think there is still room for improvement

Let's say, this section:

Two missiles were hit at a distance of 10 kilometers from the battleship and exploded into two huge fireballs - however, the guns on the Littoral Combat Ship were actually more like the 35mm field self-propelled anti-aircraft guns equipped by the Celestial Army on Earth to deal with helicopters and attack aircraft, rather than the land-based "phalanx" used to intercept missiles. For such a high-speed target as a missile, the interception effect is actually not very good

(A large quote from the original manuscript)

It was supposed to be a fierce battle, a little more fast-paced

But the sentences you use are too long, and you should use more short sentences.

······

(In short sentences...·· How to use short sentences?—— Jiang Yucheng was a little unenlightened for a while. ）

【Little Fat Man】

16:22:03

How do you use short sentences?

(Maybe it's because Yu Baochen's typing speed is too slow, or she has to think for a while to give an answer, anyway, it took her some effort to answer Jiang Yucheng)

【Red Lancers】

16:24:10

Let's use English grammar as an example

You have too many adjectives and adverbials here, so there are a lot of "of" in one sentence.

A main clause also carries several clauses.

This seems to be a drag.

Change all of these into simple sentences with a "subject-verb-object" and "subject-system" structure, and you're good to go.

······

(Oh...) Jiang Yucheng understood this, but after thinking about it for a while, he was defeated... ）

【Little Fat Man】

16:24:30

If you can, give me a demonstration.

It's a bit difficult...

【Red Lancers】

16:25:22

Do you think that's good?

Two huge fireballs exploded in mid-air - the missile was shot down ten kilometers from the battleship. However, this artillery was not designed to intercept missiles, and the enemy it was really suitable for dealing with helicopters and attack aircraft. Therefore, it is not surprising that the rest of the targets were able to break through this thin layer of defense.

(So...) Indeed, after she changed it like this, this paragraph is much more concise and smooth than the original, and the traces of Du Niang Encyclopedia have completely disappeared into intangibility. Jiang Yucheng really felt that a sense of gratitude was coming out - such a girl who didn't even have a penguin and might never read online texts could revise the text for me·····

However, it seems that it is a little too useless... ）

【Little Fat Man】

16:26:01

It's a good change, I feel like your writing is a lot better than mine.

(This pause was longer than before—could it be my compliment that made her feel a little proud?) Somehow, Jiang Yucheng began to make up for her blushing in front of the computer... ）

【Red Lancers】

16:29:11

Hawkers,You also have a good part of it... I don't think I can write this paragraph:

······ (Another long quote)

Jiang Yucheng only read the first two sentences of this text, and he felt a little sweat on his forehead and a little fever on his face - his fingers have always been very flexible, I don't know how, it's also a little not very good...

"Actually..."

The two ideas of "continuing to fight and explaining the truth" and "just concealing the facts" were fiercely struggling in his heart. Thankfully, in the end, it was the former who prevailed:

"Actually... This paragraph... It's me... Reference··· Nana··· The book··· Written..."

【Little Fat Man】

16:30:10

In fact, this paragraph is written by me with reference to Nana's writing...

Note 1: From the Chinese subtitled version of Uncle Lu's "Daily Show" series produced by Gu Da Baihua. In his subtitling for the 2012 U.S. election, he coined a lot of agricultural heavy metal-style translations. For example, the election is called "The Battle of Peanut Tun" (a homonym for Washington), and the names of Republican officials running for the candidacy are translated as: Newt Gingrich, Herman Cain, Tim Pawlenty, Rick Santorum, Mitt Romney, Michele Bachmann, and Ron Paul.

These seven people are also known as the "Republican Seven Guns". In the end, Rice Rong Ni stood out and ♂ competed with Commander ♂ Chavez Obama for the dominance of New Nippori, but was defeated by ♂ Commander ♂ Mori to launch a skill ♂ body speech ♂, and then was ♂ fried rice (foggy)···