Chapter 2 Nine-Dimensional System
"Uh...... What a wild grass......" Hu Qifeng said with a smack of his lips. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info
Lin Yi's handwriting is indeed very sloppy, according to Lin Yi, his brain is too fast, and his writing speed can't keep up, so he can only scribble and write as fast as possible. However, the result is that the characters written by Lin Yi are difficult for ordinary people to recognize, and even after a little longer, he himself can't recognize what he wrote.
But fortunately, this is the age of computers, and writing articles is all based on the keyboard, and there are not many opportunities to write with a pen.
"Hmm?...... Hmm......" Hu Qifeng seemed to see something suspicious, kept muttering, and then suddenly exclaimed, "Okay, great...... Come, Xiaomei, Xinmeng, and Dajun, look at it, with such a change, the whole story is alive, it's really good!"
"Really, how did you change it?" Yu Xiaomei said.
When Lin Yi, who was pretending to sleep, heard this familiar voice, his heart couldn't help but tremble again, and he still endured it without any movement.
"You see, we originally designed the hero and heroine to have some misunderstandings because of daily trivial matters, but the reason why this brother caused the conflict between them was not a misunderstanding, but a real conflict. Hu Qifeng said excitedly, "For example, because of the difference in life concepts, the friction caused by the other suitors on both sides, coupled with the help of other suitors on both sides, has almost pushed the relationship between the two people to a dead end, so that when they can finally come together, the emotional sublimation will be even stronger......
Thirty minutes of stage plays, ten pages of scripts, of course, Lin Yi could not rewrite all of them in ten minutes. Because of Yu Xiaomei's relationship, he did not meticulously craft all the lines of the entire script like in his previous life, this time he only changed the outline at most, listed the plot synopsis of each scene, and left a few key lines to finish, which can even be said to be perfunctory.
But even so, the two scripts are not on the same level at all, one is the daily scene on campus, and the other has risen to the level of thinking about what love is, so it is no wonder that Hu Qifeng is inexplicably excited.
"That's a good line, is love a hormonal stimulus, or should the mind and reason decide whether to be together?" said a male classmate.
"And this sentence, and this sentence, I only know that I miss you and want to be with you, even if not forever, I just want to hold you in my arms now!" A female classmate said in the tone of reading the line, "Oh, this line is so good, whoever wants to say this to me, I will let him hug ...... immediately"
Listening to a few people chattering and praising the script he had revised, Lin Yi felt a little proud in his heart. Although the script revised by the previous life itself is more elaborate, it seems that their praise in the previous life is not as exciting as this time. Having said that, in the previous life, he was quite strong, and the posture of a faction of pointing at the country first criticized the garbage of an old script, and then said a doctrine on how to write a stage script, and finally rewrote it word by word, which inevitably hurt the self-esteem of these guys, and under the resistance, even if their script is good, it is estimated that they have no intention of praise.
On the contrary, I didn't say a word this time, just wrote a little outline and two specious sensational lines, which made these guys worship beyond measure......
No, will it be self-defeating to do this? You have to know that you originally wanted to keep a low profile in front of Yu Xiaomei, isn't it a pen now?
But it actually feels good to load the pen......
"Tick, congratulations to the host, the first time you get achievement points, the system gives you a primary search opportunity, do you want to use it now?"
Lin Yizheng was thinking nonsense, but the prompt sound of the system sounded in his head.
"What primary search?" Lin Yi asked.
For example, if you search for 10,000 parallel spaces, you can find a person who is an excellent talent in a certain industry, and if you search for 10 million parallel spaces, you may be able to find an expert talent in an industry. Theoretically, primary search can find the best people in a certain industry set by the host. The system explained.
"Is it okay in any industry?" Lin Yi asked with excitement.
"Yes. Pls do you use primary search now?" the system said.
Lin Yi thought for a moment and said, "No, don't use it yet." How many achievement points do I need for a primary search?"
"A beginner search costs 1,000 achievements each time, an intermediate search costs 100,000 achievement points, and an advanced search costs 10 million achievements points each time. ”
A thousand points? is not much. Lin Yi asked again: "Then how much achievement value do I have now?"
"The host just revised the script and gained sixteen achievement points. ”
"It's only sixteen o'clock?" Lin Yi was speechless, well, Hu Qifeng and they came with a total of two men and two women, plus three in the same dormitory, seven people at sixteen o'clock, this is inexhaustible, who is jealous of his buddy's talent, so he didn't add achievement points to himself?
"Host, the achievement value is not calculated in this way, just now the host himself is proud, producing fifteen achievement points, and other people's appreciation of you is added together, and the harvest achievement value is one point, and a total of sixteen achievement points are generated. ”
"Uh......" Lin Yi was depressed, so many people praised him, and it was only a little achievement value to add a piece? This is enough to make up a thousand points, and you have to go back to the year of the monkey? But in this way, the primary search rewarded by the system is not light. Well, then you should cherish it and think of a good industry before using it......
What is the most important thing to be born again?
As a person who has come over, Lin Yi has a deep understanding that today's society is a money society, although money does not represent everything, but without money, everything has nothing to do with you. The so-called getting ahead, the so-called pinnacle of life, and even the so-called happiness or not, the most important point is reflected in money. Only when we live a rich life can we be qualified to talk about ideals, ambitions, and love. If you are so poor that you can't even eat, then all the so-called ideals and so-called happiness are nonsense!
Therefore, there is no doubt that his goal in this life is naturally to make money first, and then make up for other regrets.
But what is the most profitable industry, and what skills can make you rich overnight?
"Hey, by the way, I haven't consulted this brother's daimyo yet......"
Lin Yi was thinking about making money, but he heard Hu Qifeng say loudly again.
"Second, second...... Damn, can you fall asleep?" Ma Chunqiang shouted, "His name is Lin Yi, he has had a fever for two days, and it is estimated that there is calming in the cold medicine, don't mind, hehe." ”
"How come?" Hu Qifeng smiled, "You have helped so much, don't say anything else, let's go to the iron pot chicken together tonight, I'll have a treat." ”
"That's so embarrassing, we didn't help, we all changed it, hehe. The boss laughed.
"Old horse, don't you see it? I'll change the book when I go back, and I have to find you to polish it. Hu Qifeng said.
"The second child is still asleep, why don't you talk about it another day, what's the matter, and let you have a treat, then I'll see you outside." The boss laughed.
"Well, that's okay, I'll go back and change the book first, tomorrow night, you can help me take a look at it tomorrow night, and then let's have a good drink, especially this brother, I must be there, hehe." Hu Qifeng said with a smile.