Chapter 2 Swimming Pools

If it's a two-dimensional world, it's time for the deer to crash into the usual days of Crystal Palace anime. Pen | fun | pavilion www. biquge。 info Jiang Yucheng changed into his swimsuit early and soaked in the pool. And Yu Baochen hasn't come out of the locker room yet. The expectations of the male protagonists are often never disappointed - when the girls come out of the locker room, they are always wearing eye-catching outfits: sometimes it is a bold bikini, sometimes it is a cute swimsuit with a skirt, but what about Yu Baochen-

"Hey! You're changing so fast! ”

What caught Jiang Yucheng's eyes was a pure dark blue - sure enough, a one-piece swimsuit, and this color, if you add a name tag, it will become a dead reservoir of water! Jiang Yucheng once again confirmed the fact that Yu Baochen must have the potential to become a Coser.

(Of course, that's what he thought at the time, but he later found out that saying that someone else has the potential to be a Coser is a serious insult, similar to saying that someone else is a green tea or something.) )

However, it can't be said that it is bad - after a holiday, Jiang Yucheng's weight has increased by three catties, but Yu Baochen has not changed significantly, he is still the same as before, even if it is a one-piece swimsuit, it can't hide the pair of C+ dumplings. Her long black straight was tied up today and turned into a long ponytail, which made her temperament a little more refreshing.

The god general once announced that the defeat of Nana was a monument to Jiang Yucheng's life—no matter what Jiang Yucheng thought, at least she herself regarded this as a monument—and in order to celebrate the great achievement, Yu Baochen really kept a long black length, and if it was draped out, the satin-like hair could already pour down like a small waterfall. Although she always complains about "it's troublesome to wash her hair", "I don't know where to put it when I sleep", "I have to be caught by my mother to bake oil in addition to haircuts", but she still stays until now. Maybe that means she's actually having fun, right? …··

"Oh! You're out! Jiang Yucheng was a little embarrassed - because he found that his gaze seemed to be irrepressibly focused on the other party's legs and chest, or the white and tender neck - in the winter in the northeast, the light was very weak, and Yu Baochen's already fair skin appeared even whiter and tenderer. For a while, Jiang Yucheng's face was also a little hot. Really, this is not the first time - knowing that guy is actually a natural god of Baitou Mountain, why should he still be in love with that skin?

Yu Baochen first stretched out a foot to test the temperature of the water, Jiang Yucheng swallowed while staring at the curve of his ankle, and said:

"The water is warm, it's okay..."

It should be said that the five-star hotel does have its own commendable features - although the pool is not large, the water is very clear, and the water temperature is very comfortable. Because it was winter, the weather was cold, and the year was not over yet, there were only the two of them in the entire pool - it was almost like being alone. Yu Baochen jumped down from the edge of the pool lightly, and said with palpitations:

"The pool at Polytechnic is cold all year round, and it's the same in summer. The last time I swam for a while, my aunt was abnormal for half a month..."

I said, you are a little bit of Bai Fumei's self-consciousness, are you good! Don't talk to guys about big aunts and little aunts in the pool! However, the innate god changed his voice at this time and began to ask:

"Has the setting of the new work been decided?"

Sure enough, the innate god will still care more about the work than himself. A few years ago, Jiang Yucheng also discussed with him the development direction of the next work after the end of "War Queen Project". At that time, Jiang Yucheng also told her a few ideas - for example, the story of taking Ji Niang to the Cold War period and fighting against the steel torrent of the Soviet Army in the north, or taking Ji Niang to the story of fighting side by side with the New Fourth Army of the Eighth Route Army during the Anti-Japanese War... In short, the basic elements are similar - Ji Niang, a military and military literature that travels through history. Ms. Yu's response to these assumptions was to criticize them as usual — she pointed out that this was unreasonable, and that it should not be, but finally said that if Jiang Yucheng decided which one to write, she would respect Jiang Yucheng's opinion.

"So, did you finally decide? Was it the Cold War or World War II? ”

Yu Baochen didn't wait for Jiang Yucheng to answer, he plunged into the water, plopped and swam out - Jiang Yucheng also quickly chased her to the other side of the pool, saw her head sticking out of the water, and said:

"Not really—I have a new idea."

"Any new ideas?" Yu Baochen asked.

"Or, write through the magical world!"

"Magical world?" Yu Baochen asked rhetorically - hearing this answer, this time she didn't have a single fierce son to pierce out. "Magic World... Magical World..."

"This time, I want to write about the system flow—" Jiang Yucheng explained.

"System flow? What is a System Flow? Yu Baochen asked, "You can't be talking about SiS..."

"It's the system – it's not the silicon!! Jiang Yucheng admonished loudly. I almost forgot that Yu Baochen is a "knowledgeable" figure - maybe only Mr. Wang can compete with her in this regard! Jiang Yucheng found that he had a great desire to make these two guys into CPs, and he also saved Mr. Wang from "BMW Girl" and "BMW Girl" every day...

"System flow,That is, the male protagonist comes with an invisible summoning system.,You can use points and the like to buy the weapons and equipment you need from it - similar to real-time strategy games..."

"Oh oh oh, that's more or more...", and learned a new pose, and the natural god nodded exaggeratedly, "In short, this thing was developed from games like Red Alert 2 or Warcraft 3 from childhood memories!" ”

Probably eight or nine is not far from ten! Jiang Yucheng thought so in his heart.

"Magic World... Magical World... What kind of magic are you going to write? If you want to write Western fantasy, you can watch "The Lord of the Rings" or the prequel "Elf Diamond"... Have you seen it? ”

Jiang Yu hadn't read these books on CD - he had only seen the film version of Peter Jackson's trilogy, so he honestly shook his head.

"Why don't you go and see it!?" With a wave of his right hand, the Born God made a splash of water - this was not the first time this had happened. Whenever Jiang Yucheng came up with an idea, the god general would immediately reflect a few bibliographies, and then slammed the table/chair/computer/wall/pool water next to him, and shouted-

"Why don't you go and see it!?"

However, it seems that the style of an ordinary writer is different from that of a genius after all! Chef Chiang, who rarely had the opportunity to follow the teachings of the Divine General, spoke his mind:

"I'm not going to write about that authentic Western fantasy - how can I say it... It's the kind of fantasy world of Japanese RPGs and anime..."

"Oh... Finding that her suggestion was useless, the expression of the natural god general was slightly disappointed, but she quickly regained her energy:

"Ah, yes! I have been thinking about this for a long time..."

"It's... What's the idea? ”

"About the question of the male protagonist-" the god general said, "What is the background of the male protagonist this time?" ”

“… Soldiers..."

Since you want to travel to the other world, you can't die - let's change someone who can fight!

"Open the Crystal Palace?"

“… Of course it's going to be opened..."

"The character of the male protagonist, how are you going to set it?"

"Since you're a soldier, you must be more aggressive and domineering, right-what, isn't it?"

Before Jiang Yucheng finished speaking, he saw Yu Baochen shaking his head and swinging his fingers from side to side:

"Big-wrong-special-wrong! Totally wrong! My fears were right – you're still unaware of your problems. ”

How? Unaware? Jiang Yucheng was a little nervous.

"I was expecting you to be able to detect it yourself - it seems that it has to be broken: the male protagonist you created has too much gas in his stomach!"

"What's so much gas?" Jiang Yucheng asked cautiously.

"Angry! Too much anger! Violent Anger! Turn anger into mush! ”

Chef Jiang also thought that with such a wise and martial artist by nature, he must not have watched Mango TV soap operas such as "Huanzhu Gege" when he was a child - it seems that his guess was completely wrong. Not only did she see it, but she remembered it very well.

"Do you think that you usually think that you are the kind of person who chokes people with words when you don't have two sentences, is unkind to anyone, and has a disdainful face?"

"Of course not," Chef Jiang replied—of course not me! That's clearly God who wants to be yourself!

"Then why do you want to shape the male protagonist like that? Do you think that kind of male protagonist will be likable? Not to mention opening the Crystal Palace - the whole villain's face is determined to die! ”

After saying this, Chef Jiang seems to be a little conscious - he is not the kind of domineering character, so in writing, he subconsciously wants to show the male protagonist as domineering. However, perhaps because of the lack of kung fu, the domineering spirit could not be expressed, and it became angry again.

"Then later... Sure enough, it's better to change it? ”

"That's right! That's right... Look at your sister control text, the male protagonist in it is completely based on yourself," God will look at Chef Jiang with a "teachable" look, "Although there are no very outstanding features, but it is enough?" In this work, the male protagonist is portrayed as an "ordinary good person"! ”

"Hmm... Ordinary good people..."

"That is to say, this person has an ordinary outlook on life, an ordinary view of right and wrong, an ordinary love, hatred, joy and anger - although it may not add luster to the story, but at least it will not hinder it."

"So be it - set to be an ordinary good guy." Chef Jiang thought about it, but still accepted the teachings of the god general - as the saying goes, "the husband is not guilty of his guilt", if he is obviously not strong enough to write, but he prefers to control an image that he can't control, then in the end, what he writes, nine times out of ten, he will not even feel satisfied! is like what the god will say, is such a male protagonist who is too angry really the image he wants to create?

Moreover, the setting of "ordinary good guy" is also a common setting for the male protagonist in anime and GAL! There will be no problems with all the stability - for a writer of my own level, it is very suitable!

"I'm done with what I'm going to say for the time being-" After solving the protagonist's problem, Yu Baochen continued, "Then again, do you have any other ideas besides these?" ”

"Hmm... I've watched some works recently, and I have a new idea-" Jiang Yucheng thought for a while and said, "I'm going to go directly to some girls from the anime - of course, not infinite streams or summoning streams." These girls should have existed in this world, and they all have their own background settings in this world - it's just that their characters "just happen" to coincide with the girls in the anime. ”

"Well... Well, it's okay..."Yu Baochen nodded—her expression seemed to be mixed, "Although it's a bit cliché... But I think it can also make writing easier! Anything else? ”

“… Other? ”

Jiang Yucheng frowned - Jiang Yucheng didn't know what Yu Baochen's question meant, "... And what "else"? ”

"It's just something else!"

“… Nope. Jiang Yucheng thought for a moment and confirmed that he didn't miss any points, "It should be that..."

"That's it?" Yu Baochen stared at Jiang Yucheng and asked—Jiang Yucheng could hear it, and Yu Baochen's tone seemed to be faintly angry. How did you provoke her? Jiang Yucheng was a little puzzled.

“… Gone? What else do you need? Jiang Yucheng asked in confusion.

"Transcend!! What about your ideas?! ”

Yu Baochen asked sharply - because there was no one in the pool, it was very quiet, and her words were particularly loud.

"These things are all elements that have been written badly by others - you have to have something original!!"

"Originality or something... Do I have to have it? Jiang Yucheng was a little surprised for a while.

"You, you..."Yu Baochen hated that iron was not made of steel, "When I wrote the "Battle Girl Plan", at least I created the element of Ji Niang!" That's your idea, right? But how are you... How did you... How can you still ..."

The natural god will rack his brains to search for his own words, wanting to describe what a serious *** crime Uncle Jiang has committed by the traitor through the ages-

"Why is it not as good as a generation?!"

"It's... This..."

For a while, Jiang Yucheng was asked by Yu Baochen - yes, he could still have a flash of inspiration that others couldn't think of at all, but why can't he do it now? He couldn't help but ask... Wait a minute!!!

"Originality or something... and it cannot be eaten as food. ”

Jiang Yucheng muttered softly, "If you can't control such a huge theme, it's better to write something simple and easy honestly!" ”

Yes, originality is important – but the problem is that ingenuity alone won't solve any problem. The originality of "War Queen Project" can be said to be full, and there is also the illustration of the right hand king to help, but the final result, isn't it still tepid, and you can only rely on the low-income of the mother? In the end, even according to Yu Baochen's guidance, the structure was greatly changed and the setting was completed, but the result was only a little warmer in the evaluation, and whether it was the quality of the article itself or the results, there was still no major improvement...

"I said... What the hell are you writing for? ”

Looking at Chef Jiang, ah no—it should be called Uncle Jiang now—looked like a dead pig who was not afraid of boiling water, and the god general also rubbed his temples with a headache, "Now, what is the purpose of your writing?" ”

Jiang Yucheng didn't know how to answer this question all of a sudden - if someone else asked him this question when he was in the duel with Nana, then he would definitely answer firmly: "I wrote for Shanshan, for the right hand king!" But now, the duel is over - Xiaoqi has long chosen to admit defeat. Moreover, Shanshan has made it clear before that she will not draw illustrations for anyone other than herself - the picture of the congratulations she drew for Nana was only a special case (because "if Sister Xiaoqi speaks, it's okay to draw one").

Since Shanshan, or the right-hand king, has an unbreakable bond with herself, it is completely understandable that she "put the swords and guns in the warehouse and the horses in Nanshan" for a while! After all, racking your brains to think about "originality" is too much of a headache – you may not even be able to come up with an idea of "originality" when you think of your brain cells being murdered. If it's so thankless, why do you have to get any "originality"?

"Now..."After thinking about it for a long time, Jiang Yucheng gave this answer, "It should be for the manuscript fee... After all, you see, what about me, it's a little..."

That's right - unlike Bai Fumei like Yu Baochen, Jiang Yucheng is just a poor ** silk: he only has an income of 2,000 yuan a month, and with the price of the city, it is very difficult to eat something good. Not to mention that Jiang Yucheng really has a lot of places to spend money now - taking advantage of a special price in the east to grab a kidney 6 to replace the overwhelmed kidney 4 in his hand now; Buy more works by Nana (although the latest work Xiaoqi gave him a copy directly, but the past works still have to buy by yourself), as well as the Gaojiaoshe version of "Physical Chemistry" with a thickness comparable to a dictionary; Another example is buying Sansa some "small" gifts (like a new game or something...). ) as a way to express his gratitude to her as a brother and collaborator...

Now, Jiang Yucheng's savings have been emptied — and he desperately needs more income to rebuild his "little coffers." Even the subsistence allowance of Dianniang, who is disdained by many gods, can be regarded as a huge income for a college dog like Jiang Yucheng - you can imagine how exciting it would be if an office worker's salary suddenly increased by 60% every month!

"And, speaking of which," Jiang Yucheng asked rhetorically, "what are you writing for?" ”

"You, you..."

After listening to Uncle Jiang's heinous answer, the natural god seemed to curse a word that he didn't know what it was, and then slapped the surface of the pool hard, and his tone became low and bitter, "... You don't understand anything at all. ”

"Don't understand anything?"

Hearing this, Jiang Yucheng was also enraged, "Yes-you understand!" But the problem is that I'm just a layman - the online literature circle is also a layman's circle. If you're looking for a high style, then what kind of online essay do you write?! ”

"What's wrong with the laity?" The natural god will answer coldly, "The laity will follow the clouds, the laity will be confused, and the laity will not seek to understand and accept it?" - This is not a layman I know...·"

"Then you can go and find it! … Let's see if you can find it! Jiang Yucheng replied unceremoniously.