Chapter 84 [Zhang Ye Writes Essay for Primary School Students!]
Morning.
Experiment 2 has started.
The familiar music bell rang, and a female teacher in her forties walked into the classroom with a lesson plan in her arms, "Hello students. ”
"Stand up!" shouted a small squad leader.
Everyone stood up in unison, "Hello teacher!"
The Chinese teacher smiled and said, "Students, please take a seat." ”
Other people's children are very good, and when they talk about it, they sit down, but Xiao Chenchen of Zhang Ye's family always reacts half a beat slower than others, and his listless appearance is all hung on his little face, as if he has not eaten enough, anyway, Zhang Ye has never seen Chenchen laugh happily, not once, the only smile that can be seen is a ridicule or sneer similar to "hehe", and the little guy always has a small face.
Zhang Ye touched her, "Focus." ”
Xiao Chenchen sighed softly.
The female teacher heard a voice below, and when she saw that it was Chenchen, she was immediately displeased: "Be quiet, it's class time!" and then smiled again and said to the parents: " Hello parents, today is an open class for me, and thank you for taking time out of your busy schedule to participate, so what about the content of the class, I also want to use a more open way, I will come up with an essay question, and the students will write an essay of no less than 200 words according to the requirements of the topic, parents can supervise and give advice on the side, and create together with the children, which is also to let parents have a deeper understanding of the children's world and strengthen the interaction with the children. ”
Turned around and wrote on the blackboard.
Topic: Sing the praises of any plant.
Requirements: Clear topic, no less than 200 words.
Zhao Mei, the head teacher of their class, also sat in the back row of the classroom, paying attention to the children's performance.
Clapping his hands, the Chinese teacher said to everyone: "Okay, students can start writing essays, and if you don't know words, you can ask your parents." ”
"Daddy, I don't want any roses!"
"Yes, that's good. ”
"But I can't write about roses. ”
"Come on, Daddy will write it for you. ”
"Mom, Mom, I'm going to sing the praises of the silver fir tree, ah, the orchid is not bad, our pot of orchids is beautiful, didn't you say that it is particularly precious. ”
Everybody's starting to write.
Only Chenchen didn't move for a long time, she took the pen and ate for a long time, she didn't write a word, and finally she turned her head and stared at Zhang Ye, "Zhang Ye." ”
Zhang Ye asked, "What are you doing?"
Chenchen handed him the pen without blushing and without a beat, "You write it for me." ”
Zhang Ye glared at her, "The teacher asked you to write an essay, and the adults will point you to typos at most, you are really embarrassed, hurry up, write it yourself." ”
Chenchen said in a deep voice: "I won't." ”
Zhang Ye was kind and encouraged: "What's wrong with this, you see which plant is good, which plant you like, and then write how good and beautiful it is, just do it, aren't you usually very good, and your vocabulary is much more than that of children of the same age, you must be fine." "This little guy was dumbfounded the day before yesterday by a broadcast host like Zhang Ye who can speak well or work hard, Zhang Ye knows that Dao Chenchen is very smart.
But Chenchen just couldn't write, lying there and chattering for a long time, still didn't write a word, it can be seen that Chenchen is also a little irritable.
Suddenly, footsteps began to sound outside.
The school leaders came, and there seemed to be more than 20 people in the group of the Beijing Education Bureau, including men and women, young and old.
The Chinese teacher hurriedly said, "Director Liu, Principal Li." ”
Principal Li of the second elementary school in the experiment pressed his hand, "You go on, don't worry about us." ”
Zhao Mei, the head teacher, also got up to greet her, and gave way to the empty seats that had been arranged in the back row, "Sit here, the children are writing essays, this is a Chinese class." ”
Director Liu of the Education Bureau said with Yan Yuese: "Okay, then I have to listen to the children's compositions." ”
Zhang Ye glanced at the back, and understood in his heart that it might be because a leader came to inspect today, so such an open class was arranged.
Soon, the Chinese teacher looked at the watch, "Okay, it's almost time, whoever finishes writing, please raise your hand, I'll read it, hehe, let's talk about it first, because our class is an experimental class, so the first place in today's composition will be broadcast by the whole school tomorrow when the school broadcasts, which is a rare opportunity." ”
As soon as I heard this, the children were eager to try it and were very excited!
"I'm done!"
"I'm done too!"
"Read mine first, read mine first!"
Everyone is very positive, and the children are a bit "crazy".
Principal Li was very pleased and said to the leader: "Director Liu, this is the best experimental class in the second grade of our school, and the children are very motivated. ”
"I can see it. Director Liu praised: "Very good. ”
Only Rao Chenchen lowered her head and said nothing, her notebook was still blank, Chenchen looked at the classmates around her who were raising their hands and volunteering, her mouth pursed.
Zhang Ye couldn't bear to see it, gritted his teeth, forget it, I'll write it, I can't let the child raise his head in front of his classmates and lose this person, besides, the language teacher heard that she was also angry with Chenchen, she pouted again, Chenchen had to be excluded even more, this is a situation that Zhang Ye doesn't want to see, the landlord aunt reaches out to help him every time he is in the most difficult time, and Sister Rao handed over the child to a tenant out of absolute trust, Zhang Ye must not let the child go wrong in his own hands.
"Chenchen. Zhang Ye said in a low voice: "I said, you write." ”
Chenchen pursed his lips and nodded, it was rare that he did not contradict Zhang Ye this time.
What can you write about? What kind of plant do you praise? Zhang Ye's head was blank for a while, and after a moment of silence, he suddenly thought, by the way, let's do it!
Chen Chen urged: "Zhang Ye." ”
"Okay, don't worry, there you have it. Zhang Ye said: "Title - "Praise of Poplar", the poplar tree is really not ordinary, I praise the poplar tree!"
Chenchen writes very quickly, brushing the pen.
Zhang Ye continued, "The car is running on the boundless plateau, and what hits your field of vision is a big felt with yellow and green. The yellow is the soil, the uncultivated wasteland, the crust of the Loess Plateau, which was successfully accumulated by the great natural forces hundreds of thousands of years ago, and the green is the result of the victory of human labor over nature, which is the wheat field. The wind blows, turning up a round of green waves,—— at this time you will really admire the two words "wheat waves" created by the people of the past, if it is not a clever hand, it is indeed the essence of tempered language. ”
Some words Chenchen can't write yet, and she hasn't learned them, so Zhang Ye told her by hand.
……
Over there, the Chinese teacher had already picked up Dede's essay, "Dede was the first to raise his hand, I'll read Dede's essay first." "Violet", I like violet, once my parents took me to Europe, in a courtyard I saw it for the first time, it is so beautiful...... "After reading, the Chinese teacher praised: "The photo is good, I can see that Dede is attentive, and the text is also very good." ”
Dedemei is broken.
Dede's parents also smiled slightly, a little proud.
"Come, Tongtong raised his hand, I'll take a look at Tongtong's again. The Chinese teacher picked up a little girl's article, ""Praise to Cedar", cedar is one of the most cherished trees in the world, because of a large number of felling, many ancient cedars no longer exist......" After reading it, the Chinese teacher's eyes lit up, "Tongtong's essay is better, it has more connotation and environmental protection concept than Dede's composition, it's really good, keep going." ”
"Xie Lu, Mr. Xie. Tongtong said with a smile, and then glanced at Chenchen at the same table as if he was showing off. It can be seen that she has a very bad relationship with Chenchen.
A ......
Three ......
Five ......
The children's essays were read out.
At the end, the Chinese teacher said, "Who else has written what I didn't read?"
Tongtong suddenly said loudly: "Rao Chenchen hasn't read it yet!" she stretched out her hand and pointed at the same table.
Tongtong's father was beside him, looked at Rao Chenchen and Zhang Ye, his eyes were a little cold, and he said in a strange manner: "Yes, I also want to hear what classmate Chenchen wrote." "Last semester, Chenchen said that his family Tongtong had cried several times, of course Tongtong's father looked at them unpleasantly, this time it was obviously a matter of finding fault, "Chenchen's parents, it's already good, right? Then read it to the teacher, Chenchen's study is 'among the best', and the composition must be well written!"
In fact, everyone in the class knows that Lu Daochenchen is not good at studying, and he is one of the worst people in the experimental class!
A lot of children who can't play with Chenchen are gloating and coaxing.
"Chenchen Nian!"
"I also want to hear Chenchen's composition!"
The Chinese teacher doesn't want to miss Chenchen, Rao Chenchen's language level is not clear to her? That's the worst in the class, next year is estimated to be kicked out of the experimental class, today is an open class, so many school teachers and school leaders and even the leaders of the Education Bureau are listening to the class in the back, of course she wants to pick up excellent works to read, so it can also highlight her teaching strength, so she said: "Chenchen may not have finished writing." ”
Tongtong's father sneered: "I see that she has stopped writing and finished writing!"
Zhao Mei, the head teacher in the back row, was a little angry, what kind of parent is this? Why do you treat other people's children like this? Is it necessary to be so sarcastic? Yes, even if Chenchen usually has a bad mouth and has made your children cry, don't you know what to say? Besides, that is also the children's own business, how can you be an adult and help your own children bully others? What kind of words are you talking about! Since Zhilu told Rao Chenchen's life experience and family, Zhao Mei's attitude towards Chenchen has completely changed and has become very tolerant.
Zhang Ye was also angry, and suddenly stared at Tongtong's father and grandson, how can you talk! Find fault with me, right? Okay!
"Chenchen, you?" the Chinese teacher asked, giving Chenchen a look, signaling that as long as she said that she hadn't written it well, it would be fine.
But before Chenchen could speak, Zhang Ye spoke, "My child has finished writing!
The Chinese teacher was stunned, I damn it, really miss it?
Tongtong's father smiled: "Teacher, we are all waiting." ”
The leaders of the Education Bureau and the school leaders in the back couldn't stand it, and they also felt that the quality of some parents here was too low, so they were not ready to listen, and they got up to go out to inspect other classes.
At this moment, the Chinese teacher had already taken the composition from Chenchen's hand, and she was stunned at first when she saw it, nothing else, there were too many words in this composition, far more than 200 words, and so many words were written?
As soon as the first sentence came out, everyone was happy.
Praise the poplar tree? It's really extraordinary? You're so funny! A broken poplar tree is all over the street, and most of them are in the countryside, what kind of praise is this? Look at what a few classmates wrote, what orchids, what cedars, what lavender, and the worst and worst is to sing the praises of a rose!
What about you?
Singing the praises of poplar trees?
Khan, why don't you sing the praises of gutter oil!
Many children laughed one after another, and some adults, such as Tongtong's father, laughed dumbly and disdainfully like the children! A mixed child is a mixed child! I can't do anything! What a broken composition! I am not ashamed, can I compare with my child's composition?
The Chinese teacher also felt that there seemed to be something wrong with this composition, and the topic was not well chosen, but there was no way, and she was put on this by a few parents with ulterior motives, so she could only continue to read, but the more she read it, the more shocked the Chinese teacher became, and the more she read it, the more surprised her expression became!
This......
Is this prose?
She realized that this essay was not as simple as she imagined, although the text was simple and unpretentious, but there was something strange in it!
"It's a tree that strives to go upstream, with straight stems and straight branches. ”
"Aspen is not an ordinary tree. It is common in the northwest pole and is not taken seriously, just like the peasants in the north; it has a very strong vitality, it cannot be tortured, it cannot be oppressed, and it is also similar to the peasants in the north. I praise the poplar tree because it symbolizes not only the peasants of the north, but especially the simple, strong, and progressive spirit that is indispensable in our national liberation struggle today. ”
"Let those who look down on the people, stubbornly regressive, praise the aristocratic nanmu, and despise this very common and easy-to-grow aspen, and I will praise the poplar tree with a loud voice!"
The Chinese teacher closed Chenchen's homework book and said in a daze, "It's over." ”
The article is finished!
Everyone was silent at this moment!
Tongtong's father is stupid!
Other parents were blinded too!
The leaders of the Education Bureau, the school leaders and the teachers, who had all walked outside the classroom just now, didn't know who was the leader, they all stood there dumbfounded, and then ...... One by one, they all came back quickly, looking at the classroom in astonishment, and it was a bit of a ghost!
Zhang Ye got up on the contrary, and glanced at those parents who had just questioned Chenchen and his parents, and said in his heart, you guys are really looking down on people!
with me again!
Write articles with me? You guys are so funny!
Zhang Ye was not surprised by everyone's astonishment, are you kidding? This is "Praise of Poplar", if he remembers correctly, this is a famous article in his second-year junior high school textbook in the world, and the author is even more famous - Mao Dun!
Whoever can find fault with this article, Zhang Ye has to smack him in the face, "Poplar Praise" does not have such gorgeous rhetoric, and it is not like ordinary prose to pile up words, but because of this, it seems that this article is precious, and it highlights the ideological, educational and literary nature of the article!
An article in praise of things?
"In Praise of the Poplars" is the most inconspicuous!