Chapter 13: Teach Me What Love Is!

"Ming, teach me to draw comics!"

Zhenbai suddenly walked next to Ji Ming, and asked Ji Ming with a solemn face. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

"Teach you how to draw comics?"

Smelling the comfortable body fragrance coming from the girl's body, Ji Ming was a little stunned.

"I ran for the Comics Newcomer Award before, but I was eliminated. ”

Shiina Mahaku's voice was still so small, but the frustration in his tone could be heard by anyone.

"In this way, if you don't mind, you can bring the original manuscript to me and show it, and I will give you some suggestions appropriately, after all, I haven't submitted it yet, maybe I will be eliminated like you, and I really dare not teach you. ”

After thinking about it, Ji Ming happily agreed to Mashiro's request, after all, they will all be friends who live under the same roof in the future, and at the level of this world, he should still be able to guide this girl who fights the street after reading the comics of his previous life.

"Hmm!"

"Give!"

After a short while, Shiina Mashiro took a thick stack of paper and handed it to Ji Ming.

"Okay, wait for me a little bit, let me read the manuscript first. In Mahaku's expectant gaze, Ji Ming sorted out the order of the papers and began to look at them from the first page.

The girl in front of her must be very fond of drawing, otherwise she would definitely not ask for the self she just met with her three-no character, Ji Ming, who was thinking so, began to look at the real white comics seriously.

As soon as Ji Ming saw the beginning, he couldn't help but nod with a sigh.

The girl's painting style is beautiful and realistic, and the male and female characters are impeccable in terms of body proportions and expressions.

So, what's the problem?

Ji Ming, who had some questions, continued to scroll down, if he was the editor in charge of the girl's comics in the comic club, he would have signed it without saying a word when he saw this beautiful painting style.

With this idea, he looked at it very carefully, and even thought about whether every sentence of the characters in the comics had any deep meaning and foreshadowing, thinking about how the male and female protagonists would develop their relationship, and whether there would be an unexpected turn of God at the end.

But gradually, he read the comics faster and faster, and even jumped to read them in the end...

"That's, Miss Shiina. ”

After reading it, looking at the girl who lowered her head and didn't dare to look at her, Ji Ming said with a little pain in her head.

"It's boring, isn't it..."

Shiina Mayahiro lowered her head and couldn't see her expression clearly, and said in a nail.

"Hmm... It's really boring. ”

Although he couldn't bear to look at the girl's appearance, Ji Ming still said honestly, because he felt that it was useless for him to lie in this plot...

"Miss Shiina, let's talk about your strengths and weaknesses first. ”

Slowed down a little, Ji Ming's tone became serious, although he is a plagiarist, but it is no problem to guide this girl who fights the street! Completely substitute his role into the teacher, Ji Ming, who took out one of the original manuscripts, said to Shiina Mahaku.

"Hmm!"

Hearing that Ji Ming was going to teach her, Shiina was a little cute with a white little head, and her tone became serious, like an obedient student, trying to listen to Teacher Ji Ming's teachings with a straight face.

"First of all,Miss Shiina, your drawing skills are absolutely fine.,I can't teach you this, and it's okay for you to teach me.,But if a comic only has an excellent painting style,,Then it's destined to only make your work temporarily attract editors or readers.,The important thing is the character shaping aspect and the plot.。 ”

"And in this regard, I even want to give you a 0..."

Speaking of this, Ji Ming frowned, he didn't know how to guide the girl, after all, the basic skills of painting can rely on talent or acquired efforts, but in terms of plot grasp and character building, he can only rely on the author's own life experience or experience.

"Miss Shiina, let me ask you, you are the only supporting character in the whole play except for the male and female protagonists, a rival in love, do you know what a rival in love means or what role it has in the comics?"

Looking at Ji Ming, who was slightly oppressive when he talked about the excitement, Shiina Mahaku shrank his head and shook his head in confusion.

“……”

Seeing the girl's reaction, Ji Ming, who twitched at the corner of his mouth, was silent for a while, took a big sip of water and continued: "Okay, let's not talk about the rival first, what about the relationship between the hero and heroine? On the way to school, they accidentally bumped into each other, and then fell in love? Okay, although this is a bit outrageous, but it is barely acceptable, but what about the twists and turns after they fall in love? In this way, the two get married directly after falling in love, and the whole work is over? Do you know what marriage represents, my Miss Shiina! With all due respect, except for the beautiful painting style and characters, I even read such a work as a kind of torture!"

“…”

"My editor said the same..."

Mashiro was criticized for being useless, although she was a little discouraged and lost, but after a while, her eyes were full of desire and fighting spirit, she wanted to become a cartoonist!

"What did your editor say?" asked Ji Ming with interest.

She said the same thing as you, but not as rudely as Ming. ”

"Hey, is the faux pas talking about me, are you saying that I'm not wrong!"

"Then let your editor teach you the rest, after all, I still don't have enough weight to speak professionally. ”

complained about it, and after hearing that the editor was a woman in Zhenbai, Ji Ming subconsciously breathed a sigh of relief, after all, with Zhenbai's character, if the other party is a man and still has ill intentions to guide her, she is likely to suffer!

PS: His pronunciation is different from hers in Japanese.

"Don't!"

"I want Ming to teach me!"

"You want to teach me what is called a rival in love, what is a relationship, what are the twists and turns of love, what is a knot..."

"No, no, no, I refuse!"

didn't wait for Zhenbai to finish speaking, Ji Ming, who was in a cold sweat, broke the flag without hesitation!

"Please!"

Seeing Ji Ming's refusal, the girl bowed a ninety degree to Ji Ming in a little panic.

"You're so cunning to do that!"

"Okay, okay, you get up first, I will teach you everything, teach you what feelings are, and what are the twists and turns of love. ”

Ji Ming, who had a toothache, hurriedly helped the girl up, and wanted his father to see this picture, maybe he would do something to himself!

"What about marriage?"

"No, forget it!"

"But Ming Ming taught me everything..."