Chapter 17: Novel Review

"This unlucky kid is here to trick the reply. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. biquge。 info"I didn't expect to click into the comment area just now, and the first one I saw was such a funny comment. And this comment has been pushed up by many people, and it has been placed in the first row and cannot be sunk.

Xia Ye smiled and selected this comment and clicked in, and the reply below the funny comment quickly came into view.

"The landlord has put pen to paper, and the appraisal is complete. ”

"Top. ”

"Even if it's true, don't say it. ”

"Don't worry, I won't let you sink. ”

"Oh, I'm sorry, this is our hospital, I accidentally ran out, and I took him away immediately. ”

"Hospital?

"Aoyama's, Aoyama Psychiatric Hospital. If you want to book a bed, I can get you a VIP. ”

"Poof, now the hospital still has VIPs. ”

“……”

At the bottom of the comment, a large number of strange replies converge here, and with some strange replies, the entire comment post is getting more and more crooked, but this post is directly at the top of the comment area.

I roughly flipped through the comments below, and the further down I went, the more crooked the building became. didn't finish the comment, Xia Ye glanced at it roughly, closed the comment with a smile, and clicked on the second comment.

[Who is this cover? It's so beautiful? Who drew it, ask for a high-definition picture.] 】

"Seek the same high-definition big picture. ”

"The cover seems to be the protagonist's sister, right?"

"Upstairs is the right solution, the cover is the protagonist's sister Kasugano Dome. ”

"Why is it my sister, why isn't the cover the heroine?"

"Who knows, but my sister is very cute, and I like this sister so much. ”

"Upstairs +1, my sister looks so cute, I can't say anything when I look at the cover. And it's also very cute in the novel. ”

"It's a pity, it would be nice if my sister was the heroine, so cute. ”

"I've thought too much upstairs.,My sister is just a sister after all.,It's a pity that the author's cover is so cute.。 ”

“……”

The second post is all about the cover of the novel.,It seems that the fact that the edge of the sky can rush to the ninth place in the list so quickly should have a lot to do with the cover of the dome girl.。 A lot of people probably clicked on the cover because of the cover.

Closed the second post.,Summer Night continued to scroll down one by one.,Began to look through the more popular comments.,I didn't expect it to be just a new book uploaded yesterday.,It's already so lively today.,The popularity of the comment area even exceeds that of many novels in the front of the rankings.。

[This book is poisonous.] 】

"This book is poisonous. It's addictive to watch. At first, I didn't think it was good, but when I saw it, I couldn't stop at all, and it was absolutely toxic. Obviously, from the beginning to the present, the plot has no ups and downs at all.,It's just introducing the background and characters.,But why do I have a feeling of wanting to stop?,It's as if the pictures and characters in the novel automatically appear in my mind.,I seem to see the two brothers and sisters Yu and Qiong.。 But the update is so slow, it's so hard to wait. ”

"I'm poisoned too, so I'll update it in early summer. ”

"It's the same poisoning, and the early summer is very powerful. ”

"It's poisoned. In early summer, the writing was super strong, and it directly attracted me. In other words, early summer is not going to be the vest of a great god in the literary world, right?"

"It's poisoned into the bone marrow. Maybe it's really possible, but this kind of writing can't be new. ”

"Poison, poison, poison, poisoning. But which great god could it be? This kind of writing and writing style doesn't seem to have any resemblance to any great god. ”

"Poison +1"

"Poison +2"

……

"Poison +10086. It doesn't matter if he's a great god's vest or not, as long as it's good-looking, it's updated in early summer. ”

……

[By the way, who is the heroine of this book?]

"At the moment, there are several female characters in the book. The shrine maiden Celestial Maiden, the neighbor's big sister and ex-girlfriend Iyuan Nao, the daughter Miss Nagisa Kazuha, the maid Nogizaka Hatsuka, the squad leader Kura Naga, and the grocery store Kanban Niang Ifukube Hachihiro. Let's guess who is the real daughter of the protagonist. Personally, I like the goddess of the sky.,After all, it's a witch.,Witch Saigao.。 ”

"No, I think it's going to be the class leader Kura Yongshao, and it's a classmate, and a class leader who can take care of things, so there's a great chance. ”

"According to the upstairs, the contact should be more with the neighbor's big sister, after all, she lives nearby. Isn't the chance greater? ”

"You've all thought too much, it's definitely the eldest lady. The protagonist's parents are both dead.,Early summer will definitely arrange a good partner for him.。 As an eldest lady with a deep background, she can write a sweet pet essay, or she can write an abusive essay because of the difference in identity, which is the most perfect heroine. ”

"I'm more supportive of the big sister at the grocery store. It's so personal. But why do you feel that there are so few opportunities to play, tears. ”

"Hey, hey, hey, our sister shakes (maid), sister shakes is the king, okay. ”

"Well, is the landlord missing a female character? and the protagonist's sister Kasugano Vault?"

"Poof, there's something upstairs to be funny. Is it okay for a sister to be a dome?,Have you read this book seriously?。 ”

"Funny +1. How can my sister be the heroine. ”

"That said, the heroine is really still a shrine maiden. ”

"No, it's not right, it's supposed to be my sister. ”

"The squad leader is right, squad leader. ”

“……”

"Hehe, that's interesting. No one believed that Dome Girl would be the heroine. Laughing and looking at the comments in the comment area, Xia Ye's face showed an expression of successful prank. When the follow-up plot comes out, maybe everyone will be surprised.

I continued to flip through the next few comments.,Most of the rest are urging changes.,Although tens of thousands of words were sent on the first day of the summer night.,But for readers, tens of thousands of words are only a few minutes to be able to read them all.。

And the better the book, the more it will feel like it's not enough to read.,That's the main reason why readers urge more.,If it's written in general.,Readers probably just collect it with meaning.,When you think about it, go and look at it.,Basically, I won't insist on chasing more.。

Leaving the comment area with a smile, Summer Night exited the novel interface, and his eyes stayed on a few works on the list, and then he entered the writer's background of the mobile phone novel network without any nostalgia, and began to continue to write the story that belonged to the Dome Sister and belonged to the empty edge.

He's looking forward to it now, looking forward to what kind of expressions readers will show when they see the fiery relationship between the two siblings, and maybe the comment area will be even more lively than it is now.