It's been a month and a half since this book was written.,The initial setting was a system otherworld.,But I found that I wasn't very familiar with online games and finally changed the setting.,So Monia has nothing to do with the golden finger of the system.。 Pen? Interesting? Pavilion wWw. ｂiquge。 ｉｎfo

This book was conceived for a short time.,It's basically a manuscript from two years ago.,I wrote a few chapters and found that it seemed to have tens of thousands of words.,So I chose to upload it.,The setting of the heroine is basically affected by the dark apprentice.,There is also the influence of the millennium sacrifice.,The setting of the background is affected by the Amber Sword.。

Because there is no outline, the plot has been in a rampage, the mercenary group duel incident is, Monia was captured, and the demon wolf incident is also, and the plot develops, and I find that I have made some mistakes, and I work hard to think about it, so they come out.

The characters are the same, Weina and Firth are all characters who did not appear in the original schedule, not to mention the three characters who appeared in the rampaging incident. Weina is okay, but her personality is not distinctive, and Feith was originally set to be just an experienced old mercenary, but as a result, he gradually went on a rampage, all kinds of unparalleled, and he simply slapped me in the face all the way.

The writing is not good, the setting is messy, the characters are not distinct, and the plot does not create conflict, so it's no wonder that I hit the street. 18w words less than 250 total clicks, 50 collections (return visits between authors, I don't know how much water), an average of ten clicks per chapter (some people estimate that they just click on a chapter and close it as soon as they see it), and the book review area is like stagnant water.

This book hit the streets, and I have the consciousness to admit this fact.

What does the person who writes the essay want? It's nothing more than spiritual and material satisfaction, materially I don't need it so much for the time being, although my family is not good, but I still have a little time to find a job; But spiritual satisfaction, to be honest, I have gained something, but I have never been satisfied. I burned once when I first recommended the ticket, cheered up once when I wanted to give up, and excited once when I saw the support of two or three replies in the book review section.

Besides? What else do I have?

Nothing. Anyway, it's a street fight, and I'll finish the two volumes with a little idea, and complete the promise to myself and the people who read my books. I think so and will do so.

I once asked a friend what I was lacking. He said:

1. The character portrayal is not clear.

2. The protagonist has no cuteness and characteristics.

3. The plot is too bland.

4. Too many settings.

5. There are too many characters and confusion.

6. The protagonist has always been passive.

I'll admit it except for the sixth, but the reason for not recognizing the sixth is that the protagonist's weak status dictates that she doesn't want to get involved in the strife, at least until the high-level mages don't change that.

I will try my best to change the above five points in the second volume, and I hope you can accept it. The second volume is not in the style of a fireside story, but in the style of exploring ruins, and the characters who appear will be drastically reduced compared to the first volume.

I want every supporting character to shine, and I want their death to be worthwhile and idealistic. It's just that the pen is limited, so I can only give up, at least in the second volume.

I'll try to present a different second volume. As for the future, I'll talk about that later. Finally, thank you for the readers who don't know whether it exists and read all the complaints of a street writer.;