Kunlun didn't believe that someone could rush to the top ten of the online novel click traffic list just after opening a new book!

Even if the number of clicks will be the most during the free period of the novel, but this is a new book that has just opened!

Kunlun clicked on the rice bowl and found that the newly written "Breaking the Sky" was released at more than 11 o'clock last night!

It's past eleven o'clock!

It's only been more than seven hours now!

In less than eight hours, Nima's just-released novel can rush to the top 10 of the entire network click traffic list? Kunlun is a cliff and don't believe it!

There's no way anyone else can do that!

I remember that the most awesome new book of the female frequency god Midnight also took three days, and it took three days to reach the top ten of the whole network click traffic list after the operation of the largest overlord in the online literature circle at that time!

And now the rice bowl's "Breaking the Sky" took less than eight hours, and it took less than eight hours to reach the top ten!

And the most important thing is what this book "Breaking the Sky" writes! Essay for elementary school students? Who can't write such a vernacular text!

Did the donburi win the gold medal draft and start to float! It's a hairy thing to write! Bah! Mao is not!

At this time, not only Kunlun saw the new book of donburi, but also the first god of the female frequency of Jianghu novels Midnight, the first god of 18k watched chess and was silent, the first god of the Phantom Sword God League fell leaves, Wuling, Xiao Kun, Fengyun Fury, Zhan Fengyun, Sanliang and so on!

But when they looked at the content, they were all confused!

It's all the same idea as Kunlun, this is a hairy writing! Mao is not! This is clearly a high school student... No.... ..... junior high school students Forget it, this is the level of elementary school students!

Midnight is the first to speak out below the click traffic list!

Midnight, the first top popular god of Jianghu female frequency: What is this "Breaking the Sky" written about! I don't have any literary literacy at all, the whole thing is fighting and pretending, and the plot is unreasonable, I can't resist scrutiny at all, IMHO, this book is really not good!

Kunlun also quietly followed: En, and it was in the top ten of the click traffic list overnight, it's brushed!

Even if the 18k god who was an ally before was silent, he also expressed his disbelief at this time: This "Breaking the Sky" is really not very good, the literary quality is too low, if such novels can be popular on the Internet, doesn't that mean that elementary school students can also write online articles?

The great god of the Phantom Sword God Alliance: I am not optimistic!

As soon as these few gods who can be called anti-Ding in the online literature circle spoke out, all kinds of negative remarks about "Breaking the Sky" followed!

"I thought the new book of rice bowl would be some kind of awesome masterpiece. It turned out to be an essay for elementary school students! ”

"That's it! Really Temo garbage! This kind of novel also has a face to move out! ”

"Haha, it seems that Jiang Lang has run out of rice bowls!"

"Well, the rice bowl is old, it's not good!"

"How many great gods have appeared in this online literature circle, but the latter few books are not godlike, and they are not in the crowd!"

"It seems that the rice bowl is also proud, he won the tiger Song Tiansheng as soon as he debuted, and he began to swell!"

"Well, the donburi has lost its way!"

One of the elementary school students who thought "Breaking the Sky" was very good-looking said: This book is very good, anyway, our elementary school classmates like to read it!

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"What do you know as a primary school student? Midnight Kunlun these gods all said that they couldn't write, do you think you have a better vision than them? ”

"That is, don't talk if you don't understand, so as not to be laughed at!"

"Really, children's families, don't interject when adults speak!"

......

There are many rebuttal voices on the Internet, but any netizen who says that "Hidden on the Steep Slope" is good-looking, no matter how big or small, will be crowned with an obviously insulting "primary school student" hat!

At this time, many fans who supported the rice bowl didn't know how to fight when they saw this scene!

Because this is an academic problem, how to write an online article, they don't know it!

Anyway, they read "Breaking the Sky" and thought that this book was interesting and powerful! Pretty!

No matter what others say, they are still silently supporting the rice bowl!

......

Fengyunyue also woke up, and after she turned on the computer and went online, she found that there was already a lot of noise in the boutique author exchange group!

Fengyun, whose prestige is second only to rice bowls and Fengyunyue, said angrily in the group: What about rice bowls? What happened to him? The novel I wrote this time really doesn't work! The plot is good, but the text is too straightforward, it should be polished!

Zhan Fengyun: That's right! Agree! After all, online literature also belongs to literature! It's not an essay for elementary school students, ahem.... Brother Donburi, I'm not looking for excitement, I'm just kindly suggesting! Don't scare me!

Three or two: Ahem, I have the same opinion as Fengyun, please don't be scared!

"Women Like Water", who also ran over from the rivers and lakes a few days ago, also said out at this time: Is the rice bowl there? Do you still know me? I am like water!

"Is the rice bowl just finished for Jiang Lang?"

"This writing is really bad!"

"Hey, without the previously talented and invincible donburi, then it is estimated that we will soon be squeezed out of the position of the three giants, are we here by mistake this time!"

"I'm doubting that decision was made, too!"

.....

Feng Yunyue looked at the discussion in the exchange group, especially Feng Yunfu, a great god who has been precipitated in the online literature circle for more than ten years, and said that the writing was not good!

So Feng Yunyue planned to persuade the rice bowl, and she also felt that this time the new book, the rice bowl was written a bit too straightforwardly!

Fengyunyue clicked on the private chat interface with the rice bowl and typed and said: Online dating husband, is he not there? Come back to me, I'm looking for something for you!

.........

The bright sunshine in the early morning was shining on Tianmei School, and Zhuo Xiaowu had just finished washing, he pushed open the door and greeted the female students who went to eat in the cafeteria!

Most of the female students know Zhuo Xiaowu, and because the treatment needles do have a good healing effect on their private diseases, coupled with the powerful side effects of the treatment needles, many female students who have seen Zhuo Xiaowu are not stingy to send a flying kiss over!

The beautiful He Xiaoxiao made a grimace at Zhuo Xiaowu and said: Hehe, does Brother Xiaowu want to give me an injection again, it's okay, when Teacher Han Ziyun goes to class in a while, I'll go to you! I've missed you too!

Ha? Miss me for a long time?

Can this not be so ambiguous? I'm a doctor!

Those who are not virtuous cannot be doctors!

Zhuo Xiaowu hurriedly waved his hand and said, "Ahem, you're not sick, don't come over every day for injections, a thousand yuan for one injection, do you have so much money?" You already owe me 6,000 this month, when will you pay it back? ”

After listening to this, He Xiaoxiao pursed her lips and said aggrievedly: "Little fifth brother, you also know that I was born in a poor family, my parents are farmers who work every day at sunrise and sunset, and they can't earn much money in a year, so you are allowing me to owe a few days......"

Before He Xiaoxiao could finish speaking, Zhuo Xiaowu interrupted and said, "Yes, put away your pitiful little look, I was almost deceived by you last time, your parents are farmers?" I'll go... Are there any farmers who drive Maybach 62? Go and go, don't explain to me, don't listen! ”

Then the two of them opened their eyes and talked nonsense for a while, and then they dispersed!

Zhuo Xiaowu returned to the computer desk and found that Fengyunyue's QQ chat interface popped up!