This version is already the eleventh version, and although there is still the urge to change it again, there is also a confidence that it will not be said to be a bad novel, so I held back. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

The whole text is equivalent to a rewrite, and the first forty-eight chapters have been changed slightly because they have been placed at the starting point. Of course, there are also some chapters in between, which are basically equivalent to rewriting them.

And at the beginning of the fifty chapters, it has been cut and rewritten, and some plots that were originally just hints are clearly written this time.

The outline has also been adjusted, and some events that have been placed too far back have been brought to a more reasonable position in the front.

Of course, I will try to keep the characters and events of the first edition as much as possible, so that readers who like the first edition will not feel abrupt.

The reason why I always change is because I feel that each version is not well written. (Especially the first version, of course, the first version of the setting consciously barely passed.) ）

The main problems lie in the following two points:

The first is that the writing is not beautiful enough.

The second is that there is also a problem with the narrative. Especially in the later chapters, four or five bright and dark lines are mixed together, which makes it seem very chaotic to read, so that the reader cannot find the point.

Novels, the fluency of the narrative comes first.

So I will write the bright line at a glance in the future.

I won't write the dark line as vaguely as before, but will write more obviously.

This is probably the last time I have changed my text on a large scale, and if I feel that my writing is not good in the future, I will write a new book. So please feel free to watch.

(The book was sealed yesterday, so it wasn't updated, sorry.) ）

(If you use the mobile app to read but can't see the new version, it's because the old version of the book has been ordered in advance, as long as you select it in the bookshelf and press and hold my book for about three seconds, there is a "download/update" option, click and wait for the update to finish to see the new version.) ）

(After reading it, if you think it's good, just vote for a recommendation.) ）

(After restarting the update, it has been ranked first in a number of inconspicuous small lists, thank you for your support.) ）

March 2, 2016

Ignorant