First of all, I would like to say that this book is over, but at the same time, at the same time, please listen to the little cockroach for a while!

The results of this book are very scummy...

As for why, it's not me who is wrong, it's the world that's wrong!

Well, don't be, in fact, it's me who is wrong, I didn't know how to short-circuit my brain at the beginning, so I opened this book, which made me a bit of a dilemma. Speaking of which, it's a bad fate...

Regarding the reasons for hitting the street, the little cockroach also summarized a few points, in fact, it was wrong at the beginning, and there was a lack of consideration in many places, which led to the result....

1: First of all, the first point: that's the character who crosses over, and the time travels to become the protagonist in the original work (that is, Saitama), and then, this result is very daydog!

After all, there are often readers who can't tell the difference.,That's the protagonist of this book.,That's the protagonist of the original work.,Some complain that it doesn't match the character of the original protagonist.,Some say that the protagonist is too ruffian.,Tarnished the original protagonist...

In fact, what the little cockroach wants to say is that it is set to be a pit in this way, and it is difficult to master, because if it is exactly the same as the character of the protagonist of the original book, it will not reflect the protagonist of this book, which is equivalent to not crossing such a thing.

So when it comes to distinguishing which protagonist is the protagonist (maybe it's better to use the original name of the protagonist in this book, but it's a bit shameless to take Saitama's name by force.) ...,The point is to reflect the character of the protagonist of this book.,Is the character of the protagonist of this book?,That's the house.,The kind that is more house-like than the original Saitama.,With a stronger heart.,Of course, it's also the kind of people who don't offend me.,I don't offend people.。

It's just that when you're really ruthless, you'll still be able to do it, stick to justice or something, and it's not as strong as the original Saitama, because the protagonist of this book is also a bit of a middle two, and because he's a person whose soul has passed through.... You should be able to see it.

So. The two protagonists are different, and their personalities are also different....

1.2: "There is also a difficulty in crossing over to become the 'original Saitama', that is, Saitama Sensei is set to be invincible, that is, the beginning is boring, and there is no need to pursue power at all, and there is no need to level up.

In addition, the protagonist of this book is also home.,Resulting in little change in the first few chapters.,(Made,It's good to set the protagonist to be stuffy~/Sao.,It's best to be a little lively.,So that you can go around and take the initiative to fight monsters!) ）。 In other words, in the first third of the book, there is basically no goal and no direction.

Another thing that is difficult to deal with is that Saitama is invincible with one punch... This is very sprinkled.,After all, it's Saitama who appears.,Monsters come in seconds.,No amount of monsters is enough!

But in seconds, a battle that lasted two or three chapters seemed watery.

In other words, if you make some original monsters, the kind that is very strong, Saitama may not be able to defeat them. But to be reasonable, Saitama is an invincible existence, and besides, that kind of big monster appeared at the beginning, and it was over after two or three upgrades.

All in all, it's a big failure to travel to the protagonist of the original work, Mr. Saitama, (even if you travel to become Sonic, King, or even someone from the original world, it will be better, right?) It's a big deal to open a cheat! ）。

2: Secondly, the second point of failure is the character of the protagonist of the setting, which should be canceled if it is too house, no need to be home. Because of the relationship between the house, the opening plot has not changed much, resulting in the rejection of most readers, and even some readers come up and scold plagiarism...

In this case, no matter what is written later, no matter how good it is, it will leave directly!

But it can't be helped, it's my fault, I admit it! Admitting mistakes, the little cockroach is still very sincere, no way, who called me thick-skinned?

3: Well, the book is still failing in the third point... This failure is also crucial, that is, to travel through the timeline, and the timeline setting is similar to the original work, and it is a vaccine person from the beginning, which creates the visual sense of the original work.

If you move a little bit back, or a little bit forward, it won't be the way it is now!

Personally, I feel that the timeline crossed by the opening chapter is set to a year before the appearance of the vaccine man, that is, the period when Saitama has only been exercising for more than a year, and at that time Saitama was not invincible, but he also had not weak strength.

In this way, it is better to develop a personal original plot, but because the timeline is set incorrectly, the protagonist is set as an otaku, resulting in little change in the opening and the original plot cannot be inserted. (Actually, there are still some brain holes and original ideas of the little cockroach). Although, at the beginning, I was also in a strong fast forward, until Saitama was in debt, and I had to make money...

But it's too late to say these things now, in fact, these three mistakes above can be announced as eunuchs, so that few people will see it at all, and few people will see the back. Of course, the little cockroach also thought about the eunuch, and at that time I remember that it stopped for a few days...

But who am I? The pit you dug yourself will be written even if you kneel!

All right! Although the ending is not perfect, because of the existence of these three failures, it is possible to fill the hole like this, and I personally feel great. (Reader: Written like this?) Do you still want to be shameless? ）

Of course, at first, I thought about changing the previous content, but at the beginning, my brain was short-circuited, and it was written like this, which involved too much, and if you want to change it, you basically have to change it all, which is undoubtedly equivalent to writing a new book, or writing another one.

Even,Little Cockroach also thought about writing a variety comic.,But the personal control of the variety is extremely poor.,Well,Actually, I just can't write!

But in the end, with perseverance, the little cockroach still gave an explanation to the friends who supported him, and it came to an end!

Again, I would like to sincerely thank the readers who have supported me so far, if it weren't for you, I might have been eunuchs a long time ago! It is precisely because of your expectations that the little cockroach has continued to the present.

Sincere thanks, thank you for your rewards, and even subscribe, vote for the friends, and thank you to those readers who insisted on leaving halfway, this little cockroach is not well written, and it didn't make you like it, but that's not the point, the point is that the next one may not be to your liking.

The little cockroach is learning with perseverance, and no matter how hard it works, I just want to bring better to everyone... Cockroaches, born for dreams!

All right! Actually, none of the above is the point.,The point is that the cockroach feels personal.,I'm not writing the same material.,It seems to have some limitations.,(Maybe I'm obsessive-compulsive!) I feel constrained to write.

Maybe it's psychological!

I don't feel like I wrote my own original work smoothly, of course, in my humble opinion!

So, I feel like I'm really not fit to write fandom...

So next the little cockroach launched its own two-dimensional original work, yes, you heard it right! As for the title of the book, I will send a single chapter to inform you in two days, I hope you can have a good time with anything! Thank you!