Perhaps most readers, when reading the previous chapters, will feel very aggrieved, the protagonist is not strong enough, or the protagonist is a bit of a wretch. Pen × fun × Pavilion www. ｂｉｑｕｇｅ。 ｉｎｆｏ

Originally, I didn't think this part would affect reading, but I received too many feedbacks, so I'll talk about it here, which can be regarded as an explanation to the book friends who have read it.

1. The question of the identity of the protagonist, when I first started writing, I really didn't expect this to be a poisonous point. Originally, I wanted the protagonist and his mother to live together.,In my initial setting,The protagonist's mother will be a person with a weak personality.,Otherwise, it wouldn't be with a big boss for so long.,It would make the protagonist's predecessor live so hard.,If she's a powerful character.,There won't be a paragraph that just opened.。 And the protagonist's initial personality is indeed influenced by his mother.

I admit that this setting is indeed not very well considered, and I regret the sense of disagreement caused by reading books to book friends.

2. The problem of the protagonist's personality, because it is the first time for me to write an essay on urban life, and I have always felt that the protagonist should have a growth process, so I put the protagonist at a low point at the beginning, and the rhythm is not well grasped, and I did not follow the golden three chapters of writing online articles, a few chapters with a small climax, and a progressive text formula, resulting in poor readability in the early stage.

But after all, this is a web article about tea, I think its pedestrian style is not suitable for other public classes, it is a niche article, especially the protagonist must have an understanding of the tea ceremony, in order to make and brew extraordinary tea soup, with his affirmation of tea and himself, he will slowly become confident.

That's all for the character of the protagonist.,I hope this answer,Can satisfy you.。

3, the problem that the protagonist was forcibly broken into by others, many book friends reported that the protagonist would only say that I want to call the police in this paragraph, and then let them leave, which made them look very aggrieved.

When I set this paragraph, I actually regarded the protagonist as a small person, and the protagonist broke the conspiracy of the two Fusang people the night before, and he was actually surprised when he saw them again when he got in bed, and at that time, the system had not let the protagonist open a teahouse, and the security of the house was not guaranteed.

Although the laws of this world are much more perfect than the protagonist's original world, outsiders will be severely punished for trespassing into private houses, but after all, the protagonist has just crossed over, and it is understandable that he does not know how to use legal means to protect himself.

4, the suppression of the tea ceremony system, in fact, every time the system is suppressed, it has brought benefits to the protagonist, I just wanted to write it more interesting, maybe my pen power is limited, I didn't write that feeling.

5. The reason why I wrote this book is indeed inspired by the supplier's fire text, and there may be some traces of its setting in the early stage, but after tens of thousands of words, it is almost impossible to see in the text, and some of the previous settings have been slowly diluted, I hope this can not disgust book friends.

6. There are also readers who oppose mixing some entertainment articles in online articles. This online article is actually in almost 80,000 words before I received the station short.,At that time, my heart was broken.,So when I coded words, I thought about how to like how to come.,Anyway, at that time, I was really going to write 100,000 words to apply for a contract.,If you can't pass it, you can cut the text directly.,So the article written during that period.,How much has a sense of patchwork.。

However, I have read everyone's suggestions in the book review area, and some of them have been read many times. Entertainment texts have been slowly diluted, and many of them are brushed aside.

That's all I can think of for now, and hopefully these explanations won't backfire.

My code word speed is very scum.,And now it's all using mobile phone code words.,It's impossible to write all day long.,I'll try my best to ensure that the update is updated.,If there's something that isn't done well.,Please bear with me.。

I thought that this book would be liked by everyone, but the results speak louder than words, and now I have put out that thought, and writing this book well is my current goal.

If you have any opinions, you can leave a message in the book review area, as for whether to build a chat group, it depends on everyone's meaning, I'm worried that after it is built, there is no one in the group, it will be embarrassing.