A few more words were added......
In fact, the so-called old version, that is, the original version, that is, the second version, is actually the second version. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info
The first version is actually a pure heroine, and the protagonist is called Li Yue, a very strong girl.
But male readers don't read the heroine's article, and the protagonist's sexual orientation is more strange, and it's a lily text, so it is estimated that few female readers will read it.
So before it was published, I suddenly had an "idea", because the transformation text was still in full swing at the time, and I thought that it was a fusion of memories and a magical world anyway, so I would simply merge the sexes.
So Li Feng was born at that time, the name was quite arbitrary, the moon is against the wind.
I originally thought of the word "maple", but I felt that it was too feminine, so it was still windy, anyway, it was just as cheesy.
This article became a transformation article at that time, which is still niche, but it seems to be better than the heroine's article.
And it seems to be much more interesting.,After all, the integration of the sexes seems to be more interesting than the simple heroine.,The character description seems to be more interesting......
Well......
What went wrong was the second body.
Well, the scene is not easy to break, not to mention, it is not likable, and many readers who like that body seem to want the protagonist to use the identity of a man...... Belch...... Forcibly "OOXX", or...... Uh...... "self-attacking" ......
I didn't think I could write anything like that, so I finally decided to change it.
Now this version is actually the seventh edition.
There are many chapters that I have changed dozens of times.
I don't think I've been able to write anything spectacular, so I just want what I've written to be readable......
Now I'd love to write the eighth edition......
I've actually been hesitating to change the main character's name?
Change back to Li Yue or simply change your name to Li Feng?
Because the power of words is quite powerful, when you call Li Feng, everyone will forget that he is actually a very good-looking woman.
Also, should you change the personal address from "he" to "she"?
Same reason as above.
Originally, it was decided to use "he" to make the protagonist appear tough, and now a man and a woman are standing together, and the way of referring to them is also "them".
But what......
The power of words is powerful......
If this article were a comic, there would be no problem with that at all.
Oh, and the cross-dressing problem that Mr. Yanyu Liuye said......
In fact, in the first version, it was solved directly with a mask, and the mask followed the protagonist to the end, rather than inexplicably appearing in the middle of the current version.
I still think that the mask of the protagonist is very redundant at the moment......
At that time, the second version used pure male identity here, and the mask was not used......
Later, when I changed back here, I thought the mask was too vulgar, so I simply used the disguise technique.
The magic version, of course......
But it seems to be even more unpleasant, so should I change back to a mask......
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Well......
I had a long break in the middle of the shift, and a lot of things happened at that time......
Yes...... I'm not going to make excuses.
Anyway, I broke it for a long time unscrupulously.
I'm really sorry everyone.
I'm back now...... But I'm hesitant to change the ......
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Actually, I didn't mean to change it exactly according to everyone's request......
I'm just going to change what I think everyone is right, or I wouldn't have written about something like a transformational essay that is almost certain to die......
For example, I myself felt that the part of the male body above was too child's play......
And the place where you control your face...... Well, if you think about it...... "woman" and "muscle" are indeed not suitable for putting together, although the "control of facial muscles" in the text is actually a description of a little magic......
As for the original text that everyone said, it is better...... That's a matter of my ability – it seems that I have the ability to make something worse even worse......
Mr. Yanaa read the text very carefully, and the main character's personality was the same as what you said when the second version was originally set.
However, I didn't intend to let her be too affected by the female body, after all, Yeyue had always been so cold and indifferent to her female identity when she was a woman......
Maybe I'll change my mind later......
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I'm not going to change to heterosexual...... Don't worry......