Maybe my book has a lot of questions, typos, and sick sentences in front of it. Pen, fun, and www.biquge.info

But if you mention it, I'll fix it.

But you're so brainless to spray me.,Say that the hero is a bag or something.,I can't do it.。

I'm in the creation of the mix.,A few months ago.,The home page can be seen in the urban classification of the recommended book, and the hero is either a special soldier.,It's the king of soldiers, mercenary killers, reborn and crossed.。 Which protagonists have excellent psychological quality.,That is, you can kill people and pick up girls.,It's not a problem to soak a few girls at the same time.,Flower hearts can spend rhythm.。

I can't write the kind of protagonist.,I want to write about the protagonist of the gradual growth of normal people.,Maybe it's a heart.,But the girl I met likes him instantly.,And it's not like a pig.,Say what you have me psychologically, I'll be satisfied.,If you want to marry a few, marry a few brain-dead women.。

The protagonist's nest? Please, the rebirth of a normal person means that if you become an official, you will be an official, and if you say that you make money, you will make a fortune in a muffled voice?

Any normal person, don't tell me anything about the rebirth of the special forces soldier king killer, this TM is an ordinary person, ordinary people are OK, ordinary people can make the relationship between earning money and picking up girls perfect? Are you dreaming? I admit that this is just a book, why do you take reality so seriously in the book?

But aren't you annoyed? I don't know the starting point.,I recommend those books on the creation of the world.,Just the introduction writes the hero's character experience.。

When readers read books, they treat the protagonist as if they were reading it.

Let me ask you, are you the king of soldiers? Are you special forces? Are you killers?

Are you not afraid of zombies for the first time? When you were just starting out, were you forced by the officials to ask if you were empty-hearted? You don't even care about your mother in order to make money, who bullies you and has no brains?

At first, you said that my book was bad, and I put up with it, because I didn't revise it carefully, but I revised it two or three times, and you didn't even say the reason for scolding me these days.

Preconceived, seeing the negative comments of previous readers, a little bit of bad looks, you can expand infinitely, even if there is a good one, it will be ignored because of other people's words.

Scold, I don't know how to correct it.

Of course, I also give some brainless readers who spray me in the creation world, I don't know what you do in reality, you are a special soldier? Is it an official? Is it the boss of the group?

Can you be born again and handle everything perfectly? Since you are willing to scold me after reading my book, it means that my book is qualified to scold, which means that you have at least read it, and you are willing, you can write me a message about the shortcomings of this book, and I will change it depending on the situation, and delete all those who have no brains.