Chapter 129 Writing and Reviewing

Running, eating, taking a shower, and running in the morning had a good effect of "adding magic", and the mental value immediately increased by fifty percent, and the duration of Yang Zijian's "writing magic" more than doubled.

From the beginning of the morning study at seven o'clock to the end of the first physics class, Yang Zijian wrote four small essays in one breath, and when the teacher Lin Kechun entered the classroom in the second class, Yang Zijian submitted these four essays.

"Teacher Lin, please correct."

Teacher Lin read it very carefully, and then, with a very complicated expression, sighed: "You ran with me in the morning, and immediately wrote four essays: "The First Morning Run", "Watching the Sunrise from Dongfeng Mountain", "Remembering the Middle School Writer Guo Juan" and "October Osmanthus Fragrance". I don't understand, isn't this one essay, how did you write four, this, this ......"

Yang Zijian looked directly at Lin Kechun and said, "Is there a problem with this?" Isn't it badly written? ”

Teacher Lin frowned and said: "It's a good job, this "First Morning Run" writes about the beautiful scenery of the campus in the early morning during the morning run, the passion of teachers and students for the morning run, and the vigorous school spirit and study style of our No. 1 Middle School; This "Watching the Sunrise from Dongfeng Mountain" describes the panorama of the junior high school teacher's dormitory, the large playground, both sides of the Minjiang River and Nanjian City in a fresh and beautiful and magnificent way, as if the city, the school and the rising sun are integrated, full of vitality and vitality, I am immersed in the scene and very excited. and "Remembering Guo Juan" and "October Osmanthus Fragrance", both of which are very well written...... However, I always feel that you are perfunctory to me......"

Yang Zijian hurriedly said solemnly: "No, because of the eruption of inspiration, I felt it for a while, so I wrote one article as four." Of course, the main thing is to facilitate publication in student journals, you know, essays rarely exceed 1500 words, if these four articles are put together, it is 6000 words, which student journal do you think will be adopted? ”

Teacher Lin's brows stretched out, and he understood, this kid has this problem: utilitarianism and greed for money. He wants to write four essays and earn four manuscript fees!

"Hehe-hee-" Yang Zijian smiled very purely.

Teacher Lin's face sank, and he scolded: "Yang Zijian, you just love to play this kind of clever, little trick, go back and reflect on it!" I want to change these essays! ”

Yang Zijian had no choice but to return to his seat, but he breathed a sigh of relief in his heart.

Mr. Lin asked him to write more than three student works a week, and he completed them in two hours.

At this time, Qian Li at the back table and Lin Yi on the right side of the same table immediately put two stacks of communication manuscripts on Yang Zijian's desktop.

Lin Yi only returned to school at half past seven last night, and he and Zhang Yimin, Chen Jiaoju and other four people had a small accident on the road, and there was a collapse on the country road, so they had to take a long detour, and they were several hours late. Fortunately, they were sensible and reported their safety to the school and home through the post office.

Yang Zijian glanced at Lin Yi, this trip, he seemed to be dark, obviously a little white face with curly hair, and he had been in the countryside for two days in the sun, and now he is about to become a "farmer brother".

So, Yang Zijian first reviewed the news work he led the first communication group to write: "Qingfeng Village Party Secretary Leads the Masses to Plant Peaches to Get Rich", the content is to the effect: When the whole people in Nanjian City planted oranges and mandarins, Lin Qixiang, the party secretary of Qingfeng Village, opened his mind and blazed a trail, and introduced peaches to Qingfeng Village under the recommendation of a relative of Agricultural University. Lin led the cadres, party members and league members of the whole village to do their work from house to house, and called on all villagers to plant peaches instead. It just so happened that the oranges couldn't be sold, so the big guy also worked hard and replanted all the thousands of acres of orange mountains in the village into peaches. In September this year, the fruit harvest was abundant, the supply of the town market exceeded demand, and more than a dozen counties and districts in the city had fruit merchants into the village to buy, with an average income of more than 3,000 yuan per household......

The newsletter is divided into four sub-headings: "Looking for a Way Out of Fruit Planting", "Doing Work Door-to-door", "Practicing Scientific Planting", and "Two Sleeves of Honesty and Integrity".

Yang Zijian glanced at Lin Yi with complicated eyes, all along, Yang Zijian felt that he was quite shameless, but he didn't expect that his table mate was better than blue, this newsletter was touting his father from beginning to end! It is no wonder that this girl later became one of the top ten outstanding young journalists in Fujian Province, and several reports won national awards.

Lin Yi's eyes were dark, he looked at Yang Zijian eagerly, and said a little nervously: "How is it, okay?" Zhang Yimin and Chen Jiaoju and I read hundreds of newspapers according to your requirements, kept imitating and revising ......"

Yang Zijian interrupted his words and praised him very seriously: "It's quite good, you used the style of writing martial arts novels on your father, your father is no longer Lin Zhishu, but Lin Daxia!" ”

Lin Yi blinked and asked, "What do you mean by that?" ”

Yang Zijian said: "Don't doubt it, I'm just praising you!" Writing character newsletters is so shameless, touting ordinary people as lofty gods, read the reports of Nie Weiping and Chen Jingrun, this is how they were touted as gods. ”

"Hehe......" Lin Yi immediately "smiled" very purely.

Yang Zijian seems to be familiar with it...... However, he would not be as "mean" as Mr. Lin, but patted Lin Yi on the shoulder and said, "Brother, keep up the good work and carry forward this style, you will become a reporter sooner or later!" ”

Of course, communication is not prose, and those flashy sentences should be deleted to make the communication more concise.

Then look at Qian Li's "Leader-Remembering Ning Guangle, Director of Dongzixiang Cement Factory"——

"The spring breeze of reform blows all over the earth, standing at the forefront of the trend of the times, Ning Guangle, director of Dongzi Township Cement Plant, in order to make 'Lingyun' brand cement invincible in the fierce commodity competition, in the face of practical problems such as difficult roads, drafts, sales, capital turnover, etc., repeatedly thinking, taking precautions, breaking out of a new way, in the first three quarters of this year, cement output, output value, sales revenue, profits and taxes increased by 9%, 13%, 10%, 8.8% respectively over the same period last year......"

Then there are four subheadings, all of which use characters as lines and vigorously describe her uncle's achievements in various aspects.

This is not so much an imitation of the newspaper, but an imitation of the article written by Yang Zijian, "The People's Heart is the Scale-Chengxi Police Station Strives to Create 'People's Satisfaction with the People's Police' with Remarkable Results", but the butt decides the head, they are a little biased, but there are partial benefits, and character newsletters are sometimes more newsworthy than political performance reports.

Yang Zijian just gave birth to a little sadness: things gather by like, people are divided by groups, those who are close to Zhu are red, and those who are close to ink are black...... My classmates have learned badly!