I haven't been able to reply to the book review, and it shows that the points are insufficient and I can't reply, so I'll reply here. Pen ~ fun ~ pavilion www.biquge.info

First of all, I would like to thank the readers who left a message in the book review area, putting aside the content of the comments for the time being, as long as they commented, I am happy from the bottom of my heart, the author likes this interaction very much, especially a new author like me, I am eager for the reader's response, so that I can objectively recognize my own shortcomings, and I am truly grateful.

Let's get back to the point.

In view of the questions raised by several buddies recently, I have also seriously summarized and reflected, which can be roughly boiled down to two points: first, the protagonist is flowery and loves to hook up. The second main line is unclear, and the purpose of the text is not strong. Of course, there may be many other faults, but you haven't pointed them out, and I welcome your continued criticism.

Before answering these two questions, allow me to say a few words about my vision for the design of this book.

After choosing the theme of rebirth essays, I read almost all the rebirth essays that can have a reputation on the market, admired their works, and at the same time, I also seriously summarized them. I found that the current rebirth text is basically a road, copying songs, copying books, winning the lottery, and acquiring potential stocks in advance. Even if there are some other ways, they are all similar old trees and new flowers.

And I thought, when readers have already read too many similar articles, there will be aesthetic fatigue, can I change the way of thinking, put myself in the shoes of a character who has failed to start an entrepreneurial life, after experiencing a dramatic rebirth.

Every time before the codeword, I thought about what I would do if I were Cao Ming and his experience was attached to me.

First of all, "I" have "died" once, and I will be more detached from fame and fortune than ordinary people, so I want to be richer than Shi Chong, and my thoughts about power and power will be lighter, and I am more inclined to live in the moment, enjoy the gift of God to live again, and find back the fun of ordinary life that he didn't care about and ignored before.

Therefore, Cao Ming in this state of mind is more willing to enjoy the leisurely and aimless life of junior high school, with the addition of some plots and characters, the author just wants to make the world conceived in the book more full, so that Cao Ming's world not only has his own joys and sorrows, to say exaggerated, but also the appearance of all beings.

It can be said that the junior high school volume, which is basically a farming style, walks leisurely in the trivial, just like the title of this volume: At that time, when I was young, the flowers bloomed just right, and I enjoyed the campus and youth, nothing more.

Of course, since the reader raised the question of this first volume, I will strengthen the main plot in the next three volumes.

Then there is the problem of "flower heart", when I first conceived and designed the role of Cao Ming, he was never a perfect person, he was flowery, this is his biggest flaw, and it is also the fatal flaw that caused him to fall in the end, in terms of emotion, he is like Jia Baoyu, when he sees a beautiful girl, he ponders the rouge on other people's mouths, although he retains basic restraint on beauty, but lacks resistance, and we know that amorous is in a sense and ruthless. A lover pleasing a woman may mean offending the rest of the remaining women who have something to do with it, so there will be twists and turns, contradictions, and conflicts in his emotional line, so that the future plot can be naturally derived and promoted, rather than relying on me to change the map and continue to rigidly set the story framework.

Of course, since some readers have raised the issue of disgust and random hookup, then there must be a problem with my code words in it, and the author will learn a lesson in the future, and try to minimize the length of the communication and hookup between the male protagonist and other female partners.

Finally, thank you by name for Timojun who can jump in the book review area, and welcome everyone to continue to leave messages in the book review area