"You have a good foundation in ancient literature, and the travelogues you write are very readable, such as "The Ancient Well Under the Moon" and "Five Hundred Meters of Pontoon Bridge, Three Hundred Years of Spring and Autumn" are very beautiful. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 info" came and did not be rude, Ma Qiuyuan also touted Yang Zijian, "Of course, the most beautiful is the "Huchuan Sunrise" published yesterday, after I read it, my heart is cold, this prose language is written to the extreme is poetic, it is a beautiful text, just like Wang Bo's "Preface to the Pavilion of King Teng", every sentence is writing the scene, but every sentence contains deep meaning......"

Yang Zijian said modestly: "Hahaha, don't dare to be." Wang Guowei said in "Words in the World" that the third realm of learning: the crowd looked for him thousands of times, and suddenly looked back, but the person was there, and the lights were dim. Many times, once the inspiration for writing an article erupts and the passion is surging, I will involuntarily enter this state and write good sentences that I don't even believe in. ”

Ma Qiuyuan obviously hadn't read "Words in the World", and he said according to his own understanding: "There are many beautiful scenes, because they are common in my life, so I remember them deeply." You live in Nantang Ancient Town, and you are familiar with ancient houses, bridges, and temples. I have lived in a forest farm since I was a child, and I know the forests, mountain streams, streams, and chickadees around the forest farm very well. Once you have mastered the tool of language, you can write down what you see and think, and then sublimate it naturally. ”

But he changed his tone and said: "However, the theme of my writing is to praise nature and new life, and pursue the truth, goodness and beauty of the times, so domestic student journals are easier to use, for example, I just published an article "Hunting Hares with My Father" in "Juvenile Literature and Art". As for you, many of your works are sentimental and confused, and most of them are written about ancient buildings and ancient sayings, which are ancient things, which do not meet the requirements of education in the new era. I advise you to focus on modern life, otherwise it will be difficult for the best writing to be published in student journals. ”

Yang Zijian was taken aback when he heard this, this time he was really moved, this Ma Qiuyuan is really good, and what he said is very reasonable.

Once an emperor and a courtier, a dynasty and a kind of architectural life, their nostalgic works will be useful in local newspapers, after all, there is still the banner of local culture. But at the provincial level, it is more difficult, so he chose "Huchuan Sunrise" to describe the new scenic spot of the prose to submit to the Fujian Provincial Daily, and "Prose World" will also use "School Scenery", in fact, it is close to the theme of "new era".

Of course, provincial-level and national-level newspapers and magazines will also use historical prose, but generally write about famous cultural landscapes, such as the landscapes selected by Yu Qiuyu are historically representative, what Mogao Grottoes, Lushan, West Lake, etc., as for Nantang, how many people know?

"Thank you very much, I'll consider your suggestion." Yang Zijian nodded and said, now I understand that once a person reaches a certain realm, his moral standard will also rise, or spiritual sublimation, even if Ma Qiuyuan lives in an environment like No. 3 Middle School, he can get out of the mud without staining.

Ma Qiuyuan smiled: "You're welcome." There is no such thing as competition in literature, but there is composition, and we will have to compare it hard this time. ”

Yang Zijian stretched out his hand again and said: "Only with competition can there be progress!" ”

The two shook hands again.

Yang Zijian does not intend to let go of this real "little literary genius", the third middle school shines in various student journals from the provincial to the national level, there must be its mysteries, not only the understanding of those editors, but also the fact that he is very sensitive to the theme of the journal, and can always write articles that conform to the style of the journal, so he warmly invited: "I am the editor-in-chief of the Oak Literature Club at the school, and the first issue will be printed next week, and a copy will be sent to you at that time, please advise." In the future, I would like to invite you to No. 1 Middle School for a discussion and exchange. ”

Ma Qiuyuan was a little confused and said, "Are you in the Oak Literature Society?" Well, I'll definitely go when I have time. He hadn't heard of this literary club, and Jiang Wenming had always scoffed at this kind of class literary club, so he didn't mention it.

Yang Zijian smiled mysteriously and said: "Although the school magazine is big, there are many restrictions, but it is a class magazine, which can be more flexible and casual." You'll know when you see it. ”

Suzu -

The bell rang.

Two men and one woman walked in, and the main invigilator was the teacher of the fifth middle school, who held the exam paper and said about the precautions: "...... The competition lasts for an hour and a half, and if you want to go to the toilet halfway, you can raise your hand, and a teacher will accompany you to the designated bathroom. Okay, now you pass the exam papers. ”

In the sound of "rustling", the test paper of the proposition essay competition was handed down from the first table.

Yang Zijian got the exam paper, took out a copy, and then passed it to Ma Qiuyuan.

This was followed by two sheets of 16-carat white paper, which were used as drafts.

"If you don't have enough scratch paper, you can apply to me." The invigilator reminded.

Yang Zijian looked at the topic of this year's essay contest -

Write a narrative essay on the topic "New Changes Around Me".

Requirements: The number of words is more than 1000, and you can write your own subtitle, but it is not allowed to write poems and novels......

Yang Zijian read it and nodded, this topic really requires to be close to the new life, and it is also necessary to have some understanding of social changes, and the life experience must also be detailed and in-depth.

After thinking about it for a while, Yang Zijian found that he couldn't "recreate" from the works of later generations, nor could he borrow from others, because this was a new change in life that required 91 years, such as what electrical appliances were added to the home, what cement roads were built in the alleys, what buildings were built nearby, what shops were added to the streets, what cartoons were newly released on TVs, and so on.

However, this requirement is not difficult at all, Yang Zijian thought for a while, prose is not as good as concentration, and writing about one thing will impress the judges, so he immediately started writing and wrote:

"New Changes Around Me - BP Pager"

In March this year, the village chief's uncle bought a pager, and since then, "you can call me if you have something" has become his mantra.

At first, the family didn't think it was useless, but on the third day, it rained heavily, the road was blocked by a collapse at the exit of the East Valley, and five villagers were trapped in the valley and couldn't get out......

Now we all know the important role of the BP machine, its instant communication makes us have no distance of time and space, all the time, everywhere, can find people or be found at any time, greatly accelerating our life and work efficiency......

In June, the second uncle also bought it, and in July, the eldest uncle also had a ......

At the beginning, everyone used the digital pager, but the number code combination language was too boring, and in August, the uncle was the first to change the Dahan pager, which can send signals in Chinese characters, and every time it is taken out to show off, it is particularly fashionable, advanced and magnificent! ”