Words written before the second volume

Before I knew it, twenty chapters had passed, and I, who was using the first-person narration, finally realized the unpleasantness of this perspective......

I had a vague feeling that something was wrong long ago, and all the events that the protagonist encountered seemed to be sudden and unforeshadowed, and such a plot development might make most readers feel inexplicable and too jumpy. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 ｉｎｆｏ

In fact...... I'm going to do foreshadowing, the of the Fallen People Organization, the conflict between the Lost Group and the Fallen People caused by the protagonist, including the appearance of the police officer at the end of this story, I want to be a foreshadowing......

However, I started in the first person, but I didn't have the power to write in the first person, and many of the clues of the story were difficult to explain due to the perspective, so I could only leave a lead.

For example, the protagonist injures the members of the Fallen in order to steal food, which leads to the later questioning of the Fallen Group, and the surge of conflicts between the Fallen People and the Lost Group exacerbates the bullying of the former against the latter, and for example, the failure of the subordinates of the Downside Group to negotiate with the newly appointed police officer makes the police officer copy directly to the old nest.

Due to the limitation of the perspective of the first-person "I", these can't be written, and only a lead can be left to trigger the follow-up plot, so when I write, everyone seems to have a feeling of having no head and no brain, and can't grasp the rhythm.

Seeing this, some people may have to guess.

"This sinister single chapter scares Lao Tzu to death, you won't want a eunuch!" (Actually, no one cares about me at all, eunuchs are not eunuchs.) ）

"Is all this just to explain the coherence of the story?"

Ahem, of course not. A good writer does not need to open a separate chapter that is not related to the text to sort out the plot for the reader. I'm just setting the stage for what I'm going to say next.

……

Since Xiao Laogou is just an ordinary man, and he is not a shocking god of online literature, the narrative angle will be changed from the first person to the third person.

Ha...... After saying this, he was relieved and wanted to roar and vent.

I finally don't have to put myself in the shoes of this silly protagonist!!!!

I can finally get rid of this nightmarish first-person!!!

Ha...... Yes...... Ha (wheezing).

By the way, I think it's quite witty to do things like "change the narrative perspective after entering the second volume", which allows for a smoother transition in the novel, and doesn't feel as confusing to the reader as it is when you write and suddenly change the way you write. (What a!) Forcibly round the reason! You're just adding a split on top of the latter! ）

Also, after careful consideration, I decided to change the classification of this book to a primitive fantasy, because I originally wrote it with the mentality of writing funny light essays...... I didn't expect that the more I conceived the worldview, the more serious it became, and it was difficult to insert everyday jokes into it. Instead of being a four-like one, it's better to tell a story seriously.

When I wrote these, the text on the starting point was only sent to the seventh and eighth chapters, click 80, collect 15, recommend 2 (Ps: one of them is my own vote) The current results are quite average, I always feel that these twenty chapters are a little badly written, the more people may read it in the back, and I don't know how many people can see this, but thank you to the friends who stuck to this, I know that my writing is still relatively immature, but I will try my best to play my best.

Okay, that's pretty much it, it's about changing the classification and narrative perspective, and although I knew it would cause a loss of readers, I had to make a trade-off for the sake of the story.

I hope you will enjoy the story that becomes less boring later.

Come on...... The tragic journey of losing the collection, I am ready to realize!

PSss: At first, I was going to put this paragraph into the content of the chapter, and then write a few hundred words and upload it into a chapter, but under the strong condemnation of my sense of morality, I voluntarily gave up this lazy idea.

So, rejoice.

Ah, there's more.

Today is a day off.

XXXD) Bad laugh.