In the blink of an eye, another volume has passed......

As I said in the previous volume, each of the next volumes has a teaser review chapter. Pen % fun % Pavilion www.biquge.info

And this is the single chapter of the third volume.

This single chapter was actually written a long time ago, but after I read it last night, I thought it was too much to talk about, so I deleted it and rewrote it.

In order not to stay up all night the day before yesterday, I specially told you about it, but I won't tell you what I wrote......

Originally, I blew up a black history, but now that I think about it, it's really better to put the black history back in the drawer.

Ahem.

Gossip is not mentioned.

According to the convention, let's make a long story short, and don't say anything if we can.

Anyway, let's recap:

The world written in the second volume is 'Thriller Game', and its original book is a somewhat nasty book, although the process is also quite thrilling, but because of the special benefits, it cancels out some of the excitement.

Personally, I don't like this kind of bad taste, so I changed the pace of the story without permission, and as a result, not only did I have less benefits, but I also made the protagonist always hurt in pursuit of the ups and downs of the plot.

But the ending is not bad, right? It's kind of an orthodox HappyEnding.

I read some of the comments, and some people felt that the ending was too hasty and a bit of a brush......

At this point, I personally think it's okay, after all, the more powerful players have been knocked out, and the rest are old, weak, sick and disabled, and if you continue to write a few more chapters, you will only repeat the previous plot.

Besides, I've used the meme twice in a row.,Forcibly increase the difficulty of the game.,It's not much fun to do it again, is it?

Well..... This is more or less the summary of the review of the second volume......

As for whether this volume is well written, it depends on your opinions......

Also, if you feel bad, please compare the end of the first volume, so that you can see that it is actually quite well written......

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Here is the third volume, which is the preview of this volume.

Ah, it's really hard to write a trailer or something......

I wanted to write some suspense first...... But the concubine is really powerless, because the plot of the third volume is so difficult to conceive, and she is still confused......

I'm almost a salted fish.

Anyway, let's start with a question:

The world of experience in this volume is chosen as the 'Crown of Sin'.

I believe that many people have already seen this work, and students who haven't seen it don't worry, just make up for it...... Well, just kidding.

The principle pursued in this book is not to read the original book, and it also strives to make it accessible to readers...... Hawkers,It's easy to say.,But it's hard to do.,So if you don't understand it, please make up for it......

In addition, since this is a secondary creation on the basis of the original work, the character design fluctuates slightly, and the personality may be different......

For example, the heroine 'Qi Qi', she will become more three-nothing (no mouth, no heart, no expression)

If you see a discrepancy from the original, please take this as the main thing.

Well...... That's about all for now......

Oh yes, I suddenly remembered one thing, and that was this book - is it a harem?

Heck, honestly, I have a lot of headaches when I talk about it......

I've said it many times before, and I don't like the harem either, but for some reason, the writing is crooked, and I start to write the journey of the harem king.......

Well, it's still a joke.

To be honest, I really haven't decided whether to have a harem or not, and my beliefs are always wavering......

If you don't have a harem, it means that you can't open up more lines, and the protagonist's personality will be relatively thin...... Well, because I've always thought that emotional drama is the best way to enrich a character.

The second is to fill in the memories.

For this reason, I am currently inclined to the harem, but there is a premise: you must really improve your opinion before you can be together (what a corny saying)

Don't take it without brains, and don't take it casually...... I guess there is one person at most in one world, or maybe zero.

And this requirement is not done well in the first two volumes, especially the first one.

I failed to write a very silent article, mainly because I was too vacillating, I didn't know whether to choose a son or a beauty, and I tried to write a balance, but in the end I didn't write well on both sides.

In response to that sentence: you seem to have chosen both sides, but in fact you have abandoned both sides......

I deeply regret this (shrug)

After much deliberation, in order to have a somewhat roundabout situation, I finally wrote the final chapter of the first volume, and there was a collective explosion.

The result is a myriad of ..... Well, in fact, there are not many readers...... All in all, it's enough to be sprayed with poison and disgusting people.

But my personal impression is not bad, and this kind of writing makes Miyamoto Li a little colorful, not as blank and false as before.

I also said before that I wanted to change the magic, but it still didn't change.

In fact, the content of the magic change has been written a long time ago, it is a very vulgar HappyEnding, everyone is not dead, and a happy ending is ushered in.

But after watching it several times, I finally couldn't upload it, so I clicked X.

As for the reason, you can find it from the above.

Will find time to fill in this hole later.

As for the second volume, it's okay, at least it's written seriously in the emotional drama.

From beginning to end, the heroine is Hermilia.

That hasn't changed.

It's just that the identity of this heroine is really a bit suspicious, because Hermilia's combat power is too low, and it looks like a vase, so I didn't spend much ink on her in the later stage......

On the contrary, it is Igarashi Risa, this completely original Lori character, which makes me feel that it is well written.

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Well...... To sum up, the harem is not a harem, and I still ask (also) to delay (no) and then (think) to talk (good)......

P.S. There is no change today, because the author wants to make up for it...... Oh no...... It's going out to take materials, and two more will be restored from tomorrow (calm)