"Love Metronome", Kasumigaoka Shiyu's debut novel. Pen, fun, pavilion www. biquge。 info

As a newcomer, her writing and plot design can be said to be very good, not only reflecting the distinctive character of the characters, but also through the reasonable undertaking of the plot, so that readers have a deeper sense of substitution and reading interest.

At the same time, in terms of the delicacy of the writing, Kasumigaoka Shiyu, as a girl, is undoubtedly born with a huge advantage.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu also gives full play to this advantage, and uses this delicacy very skillfully to describe the psychological activities of the characters, so that the characters in the book become vivid, and the reader seems to really feel the feelings contained in it through this delicacy.

At this point, Qin Ming also had to be amazed, is this really a novel that a newcomer can write?

If there really is a genius in this world, then Kasumigaoka Shiyu is definitely a genius in light novels!

But...... Qin Ming still said this, it was written too badly!

Kasumiko: Why do you say that? Didn't you praise me for writing good novels before, why do you now say that I write badly?

Xia Shizi, that is, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, after seeing this sentence, suddenly a feeling of being teased suddenly surged from the bottom of my heart, this guy, shouldn't he be playing with me? ? ?

Qin Shi Mingyue: Actually, in my opinion, the novel you wrote can be said to be very good, but it can also be said to be very badly written!

Kasumigaoka Shiyu was stunned for a moment, and the next moment he was full of anger and controlled his hands to beat quickly on the keyboard, if you really dare to play with me, you will die!

Kasumiko: You're kidding me!! If you don't give me a reasonable explanation, you're doomed!!

Qin Ming looked at this sentence, but he was also a little helpless, scratched his face, he decided to slowly guide this irritable girl juice to give birth to Ji.

After all, he was a good seedling, and Qin Ming didn't want to use too radical cultivation methods.

Qin Shi Mingyue: Then can I ask you some questions? You'll understand.

Kasumiko: What's the problem?

Qin Shi Mingyue: Well, in fact, these questions are also very simple.

Qin Shi Mingyue: What do you think is the main content of your novel?

Kasumigaoka Shiyu frowned, hadn't passerby A read her novel, why did she still ask such a question? It's just that Kasumigaoka Shiyu didn't bother much with this question and answered honestly.

Kasumiko: Well, my novel is actually about innocence, first love, and that hazy love.

Kasumi Shiko: The main content is to tell the story of a young girl, Sakura, who has been rejected by the people around her since she was a child, but in fact she is very kind in her heart, helpful but not good at communicating with people, although she wants to mingle with the people around her, but never has the opportunity. He is the only one, Natsume, a sunny boy with a hearty smile, who always gets along with her naturally. After that, Sakura not only gradually changed herself, but also finally made a group of close friends. And Sakura and Natsume have experienced many "firsts" together, narrowing the distance between each other.

Qin Shi Mingyue: What do you think is the most important thing about this novel?

Kasumiko: Well, I think it's Sakura's change, and the hazy relationship between me and Natsume, the kind of entanglement that I want to tell each other about my love, but I can't say it.

Qin Shi Mingyue: Then you now understand why I said that your writing is too bad, right?

Kasumigaoka Shiyu frowned, she didn't understand what he meant at all.

Kasumiko: What do you mean by that? Is it really a trick on me?

Qin Ming was also a little helpless, this guy was obviously very good-looking, why was he a dead brain?

Qin Shi Mingyue: Let's put it this way, I know why I obviously praised your writing for being very good, and the plot setting is very good in all aspects, but do you still say that you write badly? That's because your novels don't have a soul of your own!

Qin Shi Mingyue: Didn't you realize that the novel you wrote had been set into the world of "I Want to Tell You"? What you are writing now is not a novel that belongs to you at all, you just changed the way and wrote Mr. Qin Ming's "I Want to Tell You" in the form of a novel.

Qin Shi Mingyue: Although as a newcomer, the writing of "Love Metronome" you wrote is quite good, and the characters and plots are also handled very appropriately, but in this novel, I have not found your own real ideas and highlights at all, and the purpose is just a full sense of "I want to tell you". And this kind of work, in my opinion, is just a soulless, just dressed up in its own creation, in fact, it is a bad work adapted from plagiarism!

Black-bellied Little Fat Meow: Even if your novel can successfully pass the submission of QMFUN this time, do you think so many readers of QMFUN will agree with you? In their opinion, your novel can only be regarded as a novel version of "I Want to Tell You" at most, and what they remember will not be you, Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu, but Teacher Qin Ming! Didn't you write a novel to gain the approval of Teacher Qin Ming with your own strength? Is that all you have to say?

Xia Shizi, that is, Xia no Qiu Shiyu, looked at the news from passerby A, and suddenly her heart fluctuated, and the anger that was originally full of anger gradually dissipated at this time. She stared blankly at the comment in front of her, her beautiful eyes widened, and her eyes couldn't help but show a look of confusion.

No...... Soul?

Qin Ming didn't want to say cruel things, but Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu is a stupid person, obviously so talented in light novels, but he didn't find out such a simple thing, he is really a stupid person. Well, it's still a stupid person who can't get dirty.

Now, it depends on whether she can wake up, if she still drills the horns, then Qin Ming can only make some effort to continue to mess with her.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu is not a stupid person, on the contrary, she is very smart, otherwise she would not have become one of the top students in the school, and she showed a strong talent in her first writing. Before, she was just a fan of the authorities, and she couldn't see through the situation.

Now through Qin Ming's mention, she suddenly woke up, looking at the "Love Metronome" she worked so hard to create, she didn't have the love she had before, and her heart was only full of bitterness, it turned out that I had been completely immersed in the world of "I Want to Tell You" before?

"Now, maybe I'm really a fool." Kasumigaoka Shiyu couldn't help but laugh at herself

, muttered.

But even so, she still can't let go of the creation of light novels in her heart, just like someone who has sucked du, after trying the strong pride of creation, she has completely become obsessed with the road of creation that is obviously bumpy, but has infinite fun.

After thinking about it, she asked.

Kasumiko: That's ...... How can I write a novel that is truly my own?

At this time, Qin Ming, who already had some regrets in his heart for saying cruel words, saw this sentence, and finally put his hanging heart back in his stomach, it seems that this guy is not too stupid.

Qin Shi Mingyue: Then I'll teach you how to write.

Kasumiko: Really...... May I?

Qin Shi Mingyue: Of course you can!

Kasumiko: Thank you so much!

Kasumigaoka Shiyu looked at the computer screen, waiting for Qin Ming's reply. Anyone can say the truth, but not everyone can actually do it.

Although what Qin Ming said just now is the Tao, it does not mean that he can teach people to write novels. But since he dared to say it, teach her to write light novels.

So what will he do?

Kasumigaoka Shiyu has some expectations.