A long review of Hulu 22

About the house fight, it's all done step by step, but it's very well written, and An Ran is guiding a person who is not too stubborn and has some sense to speak step by step. But often after dealing with the house fight or the main line of love interspersed between the house fight, it is easy to produce the collapse of the character, the original set character, because of the deformation of the plot trend, after all, emotional love is easy to get out of control.

The gourd hopes that there will be no character collapse.

Because of Mary Sue or something, many articles with good beginnings have become seemingly one-to-one but actually np. (Hulu maliciously rejoiced that An Ran was not very beautiful, after all, many people became men and women who were sure that most of the other party was slowly attracted to each other after getting along with each other, and there was little love at first sight~ Not all men will like the same type of girl.) Otherwise, how can other women marry? ļ¼ˆć„’oㄒ)~

Uh-huh, that... The gourd is a bit 2. A bit of a chatter.

All in all, in short, I look forward to writing a man who is suitable for Enron (nagging again, hiding aside and being interested in something, Hulu doesn't like it very much, just hint that there is a person standing aside and watching, and there is no need to write so straightforwardly. Because,Every time I see a monologue written by the author to the male protagonist's heart: "Interested, interesting", I will intuitively begin to feel disgusted and begin to vomit. That one... I've watched the same plot too many times, and the reflection arc has established a meter with a way)

Love is very delicate, you can start from the side, and slowly reflect it in the subtleties in the description of getting along, and change what is the most cute little by little, don't write too straightforwardly, and don't be too obvious in psychological description. (Okay, this one is very difficult, but it includes a lot of expectations for the gourd 2)

In the end, I look forward to controlling the cool text and love essay very well, and write a different wealthy lady!

Gourd a little 2 salutations ^__*)

This book was first published by Xiaoxiang Academy, please do not reprint!

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