Shen Qi: Bingbing, why did you go?

Shen Qi: (Question?) ）

Shen Qi: ......

On the other side of the computer, he didn't get a reply even after sending several messages, and he estimated that Du Bing should have been disturbed by something, so Shen Qi didn't continue to send messages.

He bubbled in the group, which obviously made several reader groups more active, especially some new readers in the group, for Shen Qi's age, because he read Shen Qi's PS author's words in "Martial Arts Battle", he had an understanding, but he was not sure whether it was true or false. There are also readers who were added because of "The Ancient Immortal Emperor", and they are completely unclear about Shen Qi's age.

Now that Shen Qi is bubbling up, everyone's topic has shifted to Shen Qi, and this kind of thing has been mentioned by some readers, and new readers are shocked when they know it.

Among the readers, there are students who have just entered high school this year, and after learning that the non-attacking university they are chasing books is actually a high school student like them, there is no need to mention the shock.

Some readers, because the chat messages in the group rolled too fast, so they deliberately chatted about his questions privately, and Shen Qi also replied one by one.

It's actually nice to click on the chat boxes one by one, answer some of the readers' questions about the book, and chat with the readers about family life.

After clicking on a new chat box and seeing the message sent on it clearly, Shen Qi paused. Then he laughed.

The sender of this message, QQ name: Fengli.

He didn't ask questions, he didn't chat, he came with a request.

Fei Attack, I'm your reader, and I recently wrote a novel, and my grades are very poor, so I'm confused, can I ask you to help me take a look at what's wrong?

Below the message, a link is attached.

This Fengli, Shen Qi has seen it just now, is not a reader of his old group, but a member of the "Ancient Immortal Emperor" book friend group, when he appeared in the group just now, this Fengli said a lot of things, which made Shen Qi have some impression of him.

Thinking that this was his own reader, he clicked on the link.

Clicking on the webpage, as soon as he saw the four-word title, Shen Qi's brows furrowed.

"Starry Sky"

This...... What the heck?

Look down, the introduction is even simpler, his author's name is called Maple Chestnut, and the introduction directly reads: Chestnut is a newcomer, not very good at writing a profile, but Chestnut will work hard to write this book!!

This brief is not written in the content of the book at all, and there are even typos......

After reading the introduction of the title of the book, Shen Qi felt that he basically didn't need to read the content.

But with the attitude of trying, he clicked on the first chapter anyway.

After more than a minute, Shen Qi let out a sigh of relief after sweeping the first chapter.

As the synopsis says, this is indeed a pure newcomer.

The poisonous points of the online article are basically all occupied by him.

I used me at the beginning, which means that this is a first-person book.

The first person, when the online text first appeared, there were many people who could use it, but with the passage of time, it was gradually eliminated, and later, the first person was still used, that is, the supernatural text, which is extremely needy for a sense of substitution.

Now, in 09, the novel is basically in the third person, and the first person can already be said to be a poisonous point.

That's it, his entire chapter is abusing the protagonist.

It's true that the online article pays attention to the desire to promote first, and it is generally to let the villain Niu Bi coax first, after Niu Bi, the protagonist shines on the stage and begins to slap his face, the general villain is awesome, the more he despises the protagonist, the more his face hurts.

But there is a limit to this.

After reading the whole chapter, Shen Qi felt that this author and this protagonist had a lot of hatred, and they could abuse him so ruthlessly.

The number of words in this book is not much, just over 20,000 words, but after reading the first chapter, Shen Qi has no desire to read it.

Kaedeli: Non-attacking, have you seen it? What do you think?

After hesitating for a moment, thinking about whether this was his own reader, or not to say it too ruthlessly, Shen Qi replied first as a foreshadowing.

Non-attack: Chestnut, can I ask you if you write for your own entertainment or to make money?

Kaeduguri: I have them all (laughs)

Non-attack: That's good, if it's entertainment, this book can be written, just watch it and be happy, as for making money......

Fei Attack: I'm straight, don't worry too much, this book doesn't have any possibility of making money.

Kaedeli: Why?

Non-attack: What you wrote is too inconsistent with the aesthetics of online readers, to put it simply, I'm afraid that this book can't be signed at the starting point.

On the other end of the computer, the smiling face on a young man's face gradually retracted.

He is Fengli, 20 years old this year, dropped out of high school, and now he is working, he usually likes to read novels, and by chance, after adding an author group, he knew that writing novels could make money, so he opened a book in his spare time and wanted to give it a try.

He was very happy to be able to let the author who had been chasing books help him take a look at his book today, but when he saw Shen Qi's reply, he was a little unhappy.

He thinks that this book is written very seriously, and after thinking about it for a long time, he is very satisfied with it, how come it comes to your mouth that you can't even sign a contract?

Thinking about it, he immediately stopped talking, but when the mouse clicked on the x of the chat window, another thought popped up again.

The author who chases the book by himself is not attacking, he is already an old author who has finished a book, and his grades are very good, he can be called a god.

Great god, there's no need to deliberately harm yourself as a newcomer, right?

He hesitated a little, and didn't delete the chat window, ready to see what this non-attacker would say.

People are like this, when there is a person with the same status and achievement as you who says that you are not good, you often don't care at all, and what you think is: You yourself have the same virtue as me, and you still say me?

But when someone who has a lot better grades than you does something wrong, you tend to agree with him.

Shen Qi on the other side didn't know this person's psychological activities, because this was a reader chasing his book, and he felt that he could help or have to help, so he was very serious about helping him find faults.

Non-attack: First of all, the title of a book is very important!

After all, the first thing readers see is not how your content is written, but the title of your book.

The title of your book: Starry Sky, to be honest, can't give others the slightest attraction, completely ignorant of what to do.

Secondly, there is the introduction.

If writing an essay is compared to building a house, the outline is the skeleton, the main line is the wall, and the content is the decoration, then the plot synopsis is undoubtedly the façade of your house.

And what about your profile? didn't even mention anything about the content of the book, but just said that you are a newcomer and will work hard, how can readers care if you work hard or not? They just want to know what your book is about through the introduction.

The content is even more problematic, in the first person, too abusive......

Shen Qi listed the problems one by one.

On the other side, Feng Li's thoughts also changed little by little with the problems he listed......

At first, he was still unconvinced, thinking that why did you say that there was a problem with what I wrote, but as Shen Qi pointed out all the problems, he was surprised to find that it seemed to be the case.

He has also read a lot of online novels, and according to Shen Qi, when he thinks about the online novels he reads, it seems that they are all written like this.

Thinking about it this way, what I wrote seems to be really problematic?

He gradually became convinced.

Non-Attack: Well, that's pretty much the problem. Chestnut, I said it a little harshly, don't you care.

Kaedeli: It's okay, it's not a big deal, thank you for helping me point out so many problems.

Non-offensive: It's a trifle.

Kaedeki: After I make a careful revision, can I still ask you to help me take a look at it?

Non-attack: After you change it, contact me if I'm online (laughs)

Kaedeli: Thank you very much.

The chat came to an end, and Kaedugi went to the website and read his book by himself.

I didn't feel anything before, how to look at my own books, how pleasing to the eye, and how to write so well, but now I was picked out a bunch of faults by non-attackers, and when he looked at it again, he actually had a feeling in his heart: Damn, this is a feeling of garbage fiction written by which comic comparison.

Change!

Immediately, he began to revise his work.

While revising, he was still thinking in his heart, no wonder people have good grades, so many people read his books, and now when he looks at it, the great god is the great god, and he easily picked out all the faults in my book.

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PS: In order not to affect the reading, put the PS at the end of the chapter. Really, I'm very moved today, so far, today's recommended votes are 1194, 1,200 is certain.

When I opened a single chapter yesterday, I didn't think there would be so many at all, after all, last week, a hundred tickets were mixed up every Monday, and when I opened a single chapter, I wanted to have three or four hundred votes, and I was satisfied. The results were far beyond my expectations.

To be honest, this is not my first book, but it is my first book with more than 300 or even more than 1,000 daily recommendations.

This is too much incentive for me who is about to be on the shelves, so I am even a little scared, for fear that the plot written when I code words is not right, and I will wilt directly the next day, and then still sink.

Today's four more have been sent, here to ask for tomorrow's recommendation votes, do not dare to ask for more, only hope that tomorrow can maintain the momentum of today's recommendation votes.

PS2: There will be three changes tomorrow.