A note on the mess
It was even on the front page of the new book.
However, the results of this book are really not very good.
Don't charge for props first, even if it's free, there are very few - fewer clicks, fewer collections, and fewer flowers - so it can be called "free three less".
Of course, there are many reasons for this, but the main one is that it is written ugly.
Let's start with this book. Some books are written by people, and the protagonist goes from nothing to everything - that is, all the way up, and finally the dick blows up and then the book ends; Some books are about things, writing about one thing, and when the thing is over, the book is over.
There are many people who write about the former, such as the most popular fantasy of cultivating immortals, even most of Jin Daxia's martial arts novels are like this (Guo Jing practiced all the way to the point of being side by side with the Five Uniques, Yang Guo became one of the new Five Uniques, and the dog mongrel practiced to become invincible in the world, etc.); The latter doesn't seem to be too popular on the Internet, martial arts novels used to be read, Gu Long is to write things, like Chu Liuxiang's adventure and Lu Xiaofeng's solving the case, a case is an episode, there is no process of cultivating peerless martial arts, science fiction like "Wesley" and "Asian Eagle" are also like this, and "Zichuan" in Zichuan Xiuyi is also a master (I still remember that the beginning is about him ambushing the mastermind of the enemy army).
This book clearly falls into the latter category. The main thing is to write about one thing, and when this thing is over, then the book is also over—it seems to be the thing of rebirth. The advantage of this is that it should not grow to the extent of going against the sky; The disadvantage is that there is no such refreshing feeling as the counterattack of the dick.
Rebirth text,I've seen it before.,Like the older "Sleepy Dragon Ascension" or something.,But it's basically that the protagonist is reborn.,The previous life was just a dick.,Of course, after rebirth, it will become awesome.,Beauty counts money and counts until her hands cramp and so on.。
That kind of template is also everywhere. The question is, along with this sense of exhilaration, those template-like books make a fatal mistake, and that is: if you were really born again, would you really do what the book says?
I don't think I will. I don't have that emotional intelligence, and I don't have that peace of mind. If I were really reborn, I think I might go crazy, let's say I would be reborn back to twelve, which looks like twelve on the surface, but the mental age may be sixty-two, and from this point of view, I can't talk to people who should have been friends at all - so there is a high probability that people who were originally friends will no longer be friends after being reborn - even if they are the original iron buddies, and the older ones I want to make friends with will not be able to bird me, a little guy who is only twelve years old. So there's a good chance I'm going to go crazy alone. Otherwise, I would have thought about why I was born again. Find out the source. Even doubt the reality of this world. Of course, suicide is also possible.
So from my personal point of view, being born again is not a good thing - if such an unreasonable thing does happen, it will cause a lot of psychological stress. It's entirely possible to have psychopaths or behavioral disorders.
This book is based on this perspective.
Of course, because this book is in the first person, the perspective is relatively small. Because I'm not very organized, and I'm a first-person perspective, it inevitably looks messy. In fact, in my opinion, the first person is to write about what the protagonist sees, hears, and thinks, and as for those things that are not present or have never heard of it, it is impossible to write it.
Another point is that the system itself is rather chaotic. Things like rebirth, supernatural abilities, and the like have appeared, and it's hard to say whether there will be science fiction or fantasy for the time being.
There's a reason for that, and that's based on the premise of being born again. "Rebirth" has appeared, and other abilities, whether they are supernatural or ghostly, are of course entirely possible.
Let's talk about the characters in the book. Many of the characters don't have names - of course, those passers-by don't need names, they're just little tricks anyway; And those who have names should be the ones with heavier roles, even if they disappear for a period of time, there is always a chance to return to the field of vision again, and even go to the end. This is also because this book does not change maps, and basically only develops in one city (basically, there will be a small number of other places), so the circle of people is relatively small.
Of course, what is more important is the direction of the plot. For the time being, there doesn't seem to be any specific direction. It's just that my roommate verbally said he was going to save me; And then I met some miscellaneous people, and at the same time encountered some miscellaneous things, which looked chaotic, like a mess. It's just that there is always a thread in this mess, and that is the reborn roommate.
As for why it's a mess, it should be explained soon, after all, it's more than 100,000 words, and it's estimated that the first volume will end when it's about 200,000 words. The first volume is named "Awakening", which means that there is a chaotic process before awakening. In this confusion, the people who should appear will almost appear; When it should happen, there will be signs. Of course, this confusion is entirely caused by a guy who does not belong to this era.
Ever imagined what would become of a person if he died over and over again and was reborn with his memories over and over again? If that person hadn't gone crazy or jumped off a building to commit suicide, then he must have been an extraordinary person—the pain and fear of death and the chaotic memories themselves were torturous. The "roommate" is just such a person, but he doesn't have the consciousness to save the whole world - because it is too hard, he just doesn't want to see his companion who blocked the knife die in front of him again. So he saved over and over again, and failed over and over again.
Well, so many words were written before I knew it.
If you like it, you can collect it, and you can even vote for flowers, it's free anyway. Of course, this book is a bit slow. As for the question of whether there will be eunuchs, I don't think that will happen. After all, it's the first book here. Of course, it's not some nonsense like "think for a few years" or "think for a few months". The appearance of this book was nothing more than an impulsive thought and my confused mind. Well, that's it. Thank you.
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