For Ye Su's short story, Kasumigaoka Shiyu can be said to be very impressed, although she doesn't particularly like this story, but she has to admit that Ye Su's story is very wonderful, whether it is the creativity of the story, or the portrayal of the characters, and the description of the details, it is very powerful. Pen & Fun & Pavilion www.biquge.info

What particularly surprised Kasumigaoka Shiyu was that Ye Su's short stories were written very straightforwardly, completely different from before, with few modifiers. But it is precisely because of that straightforwardness that this story is portrayed more perfectly.

However, such a powerful story can't get good results?

Before, Kasumigaoka Shiyu had already felt that Ye Su would win the crown of the short story this time, which was a matter of course in her opinion.

Although there are many contestants in this short story award, there are many strong ones, and there must be many wonderful short stories, but Ye Su's novels are obviously more unique, more outstanding, and reveal the profound heritage of a writer.

Although Kasumigaoka Shiyu thinks so, some private emotions are mixed in it, for her, Ye Su is naturally the best, but, on the other hand, as a professional writer, if Ye Su's novels are not so exciting, even if there are more private emotions mixed in them, she will not feel good-looking, and she will not be so respectful.

Instead, he will point it out directly, so that Ye Su can understand what is wrong, so that he can make more progress, and in this way, it is the best response to him.

In short, Kasumigaoka Shiha really thinks this short story is very good.

However, the results of the big awards, after they came out, were far from surprising Kasumigaoka Shiyu.

"Bad grades?" Kasumigaoka Shiyu asked in disbelief.

"Yes", Ye Su nodded and said, to be honest, he couldn't accept this result, he was originally full of confidence, but after discussing it with the editor in charge for a long time, after careful revision, the final result was actually just a consolation prize?

What is this!

As a writer's conceit, he is naturally a little unhappy with this result.

Could it be that he really underestimated the heroes of the world?

This time, the rankings of the short story awards were Gold, Silver, Bronze, then three Excellence Awards, and then the Encouragement Award.

Ye Su just received a phone call, and the original words of the editor in charge were-

"Mr. Ye Su, the results of this short story award have come out. The gold award has not yet been determined, but the silver and bronze awards, and there will be the ranking of the excellence award, have come out. Teacher, your ranking is an excellent award, to be honest, I was a little surprised...... It's a bit unacceptable that such an excellent work as a teacher is just an excellent award. ”

"Is that so?" Prior to this, Ye Su, who heard what the editor in charge said, responded lightly, but his heart sank slightly.

For a long time, Ye Su, who can be described as smooth sailing, really didn't expect that he would encounter such a Waterloo.

The editor-in-charge continued, "I will send you the comments of several teachers later, I think it should not be the teacher's work, but it is not in line with the taste of those judges and teachers." ”

"Okay." Ye Su didn't bother to say anything, so he hung up the phone.

The scariest thing for a novelist is not that he has a bad grade, but that he has a work full of confidence, but he has no idea what is going on and fails.

This is the biggest blow to confidence.

If you know what your shortcomings are, you can make progress and grow up gradually, even if you have poor grades, but if you don't know what's going on, it means that you can't continue to grow.

At this time, Ye Su encountered some such problems, which made him a little depressed.

Xia Zhiqiu Shiyu next to him, of course, instantly sensed Ye Su's depression, and immediately stood on tiptoe, stretched out his hand and touched Ye Su's head, and said with a smile: "It must be the partiality of the judges, so don't be sad." Good ......"

"Is there something wrong with your way of comforting?" Ye Su said funny.

"What's the problem? No problem! Kasumigaoka Shiyu said as a matter of course.

"It's like you're treating me like a child."

"But you're just a child."

"That's not what you said last night."

"Don't mention last night!"

"Let's go home first."

"Yes."

Kasumigaoka Shiyu and Ye Su quickly returned home...... Kindness...... Kasumigaoka Shiha's home.

Ye Su sat in front of Kasumigaoka Shiyu's notebook, logged in to his mailbox, and opened the email sent by the editor in charge, Sugi Chiya, which was full of comments on Ye Su's novel by those judges and teachers.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu also came over curiously, standing behind Ye Su and watching.

Kasumigaoka Shiyu's body leaned forward slightly, his head rested on Ye Su's shoulder, and his entire upper body leaned on Ye Su's body, the soft **** was also close to Ye Su's back.

Ye Su can kiss Kasumigaoka Shiyu as long as he has one side of his face, but he doesn't have too many such thoughts at this time, but Xiagaoka Shiyu's hair rubs him a little itchy, but fortunately, he can bear it.

"This comment is from Mr. Naoki Yasue? I read this teacher's work when I was very young. Kasumigaoka Shiyu said with some surprise next to him.

There is no doubt that those who can become review teachers are very old in qualifications, and they can be called literary masters and even literary heroes.

Naoki Yasae: "It's an interesting novel -- this novel reminds me of a lot of people who claim they don't have a choice when they do cruel things. But the truth is that we never have a shortage of options. The male protagonist can choose to ignore the weird call like his fiancée. But thinking that he was cornered, he resolutely swallowed the fly and started the game. He can also choose to stop at any time after the game starts.,But as the bonus rolls bigger and bigger.,The male owner also began to play more and more off the line.。

People are often misled into the illusion that 'even if I don't do it, someone else will'. As a result, everyone becomes more and more indifferent to 'hurting and being hurt'. Accidentally trampling an ant comforts itself: sooner or later it will be trampled to death. The beggar who passed by turned a deaf ear and thought: I am not the only one who has not given alms. Or they feel that they are just an executor, and the responsibility is not their own. "If I don't **** like this, I won't have a job", "What can I do if my boss asks me to do it......"

Naoki Yasu's evaluation is very high, and he praises Ye Su's novel from beginning to end.

This made Kasumigaoka Shiyu and Ye Su couldn't help but glance at each other, and they both saw the strangeness in each other's eyes, isn't this a good evaluation? However, what does it mean that such a good evaluation only has an excellent award?

Ye Su continued to click on the second teacher's evaluation.

The second teacher's name is Duankang Jinyi, this is a "living fossil" that is over 100 years old, and it is difficult for this teacher to be a judge at such an old age, and he still has the strength, which is really surprising.

Duankang Jinyi's evaluation is not so good.

Duankang Jinyi: "Free will is degraded, and you can only kill each other?" The selection of materials is good, but unfortunately the ending is a failure, the whole article, the surface is cruel, but in fact, there is an inevitable petty family spirit......"

Duankang Jinyi's evaluation very clearly stated the mistakes of Ye Su's short story, his words were very straightforward, completely ruthless, although Ye Su was a little unconvinced, but he also had to admit that this Duankang Jinyi, who was over 100 years old, did have some uniqueness.

The comments of some of the latter teachers almost all seem to echo the comments of this Duan Kang Jinyi.

After that, Shanmu Chi also sent a message, guessing that it was probably this Duankang Jin who didn't like Ye Su's novel, so the other teachers gave this living fossil a face, and Ye Su's ranking dropped again and again.

Shanmu Chi is also very depressed, in the literary world, this Duan Kang Jinyi has always been known for being gentle and likes to mention juniors, this time many judges and teachers have almost been mentioned by Duan Kang Jinyi, and they are deeply grateful to Duan Kang Jinyi. His tolerance for juniors has always been very great, but this time he is so difficult for Ye Su's short stories - it is abnormal.

"Bad luck."

This is the conclusion that Sugi Akaya has reached, otherwise, it is absolutely impossible for "Horror Game" to only have such a ranking.

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An old Japanese-style mansion.

In a garden, next to the pond, an old man in a kimono is grabbing a lot of fish and scattering them for the koi fish in the pond.

Large groups of koi fish are scrambling to eat their food.

Next to the old man, stood a middle-aged woman with a cold face.

"Do you think I'm going a little too far?" This old man is a very famous living fossil in the literary world, Duankang Jinyi, although he is over 100 years old and his hair is gone, his eyes are still shining and very spiritual.

"Excessive? What do you mean? The middle-aged woman next to her is the third wife of the old man, and she is also an assistant, and she worships this teacher Duankang Jinyi from the bottom of her heart.

"In the previous short story review, I won a good novel, from a silver award to a gold award, to an excellent award...... Duan Kang Jinyi said slowly.

"It's a thing." The middle-aged woman suddenly realized, and then said, "You naturally have your considerations!" ”

"......" The old man was silent for a while, and then said to himself, "This is a very interesting little fellow. Although he writes light novels, in the eyes of Lao Yu, whether it is a light novel or a traditional novel, there is no boundary in the strict sense......"

Many authors of traditional novels will despise light novel authors.

Just like those traditional novel writers in Ye Su's previous life, they would despise online writers, opening and closing their mouths means that online articles are rubbish, but in fact, the essence is nothing more than unproductive jealousy, and they can say such things casually, they are basically some self-righteous low-level writers of traditional novels.

It really doesn't matter if you really reach the level of literature, after all, your vision is completely different.

In their view, any form of literature is literature.

Whether it is a fairy tale, prose, light novel, traditional novel, or online text, it is a way to express a story in words.

"He's the guy's great-grandson, so I paid attention a few more times, and I wasn't surprised that it was so good." The old man Duan Kang Jinyi continued.

"So good?" The middle-aged woman next to her showed a surprised expression, although she didn't know who "that guy" was, but it was many years ago that her husband praised a person like this.

"It's very good, it even makes me want to meet this little guy." Duan Kang Jinyi said with a smile: "Recently, I heard that he has run away from home and left from that family, but I didn't expect to really come out of some doorways." However, I hope that he will be able to go further, and not lose his soul casually because of simple fame, money. In this way, his potential is limited. Although I think so, I don't know if I can achieve that effect. ”

"He will definitely appreciate your hard work, and this beating will definitely make him go further." The middle-aged woman hurriedly said.

"Let's hope so......"

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Ye Su didn't know at all, because he was walking too fast and too good, which caused Kang Jinyi to want to beat himself and hope that he would go further.

If he knew about this, he would definitely not be as depressed as he is now, and he would definitely be very moved to say: "Damn, mentally retarded!" ”

He has to go his own way, he doesn't need to be pointed at by others, and he doesn't need to beat or the like, even if he is a highly respected person like Duan Kang Jinyi, it is the same, even if he can understand it, he can't accept it.

Ye Su returned home in the afternoon, and ...... This is the home of Hexiao's burial, not the home of Shiyu of Kasumigaoka.

Along the way, he was thinking, should he tell Xiao Bury about having a girlfriend?

Isn't it too deliberate to say it like that?

After thinking about it, he shook his head, broke off this thought, and waited for Xiao Bury to ask, and then talk about it.

Even if they are brothers and sisters, they should have reservations about privacy in this regard.

Before going home, Ye Su suddenly thought of something - not far from the next door, he lived in the same publishing house as him, and the novel teacher who also participated in this short story award.

What's it called?

Yamada Irve!

It feels like I haven't seen this guy in a long time, and I don't know what he's doing?

I don't know, what is the result of her short story award this time?

With this in mind, Ye Su went to Yamada Irf's house before going home.

Ringing the doorbell, Yamada Irf didn't come to open the door for a long time, and the sound of the piano came intermittently from inside.

"This guy is obviously at home, and he actually ignores me?" Ye Su said a little speechlessly.

He pushed open the guardrail, went to the courtyard, and looked inside.

The curtains were not drawn tightly, and there was a very large gap, so that you could clearly see inside.

Teacher Yamada Irf, who was still naked in the whole province at this time, sat in front of the piano, devoted himself to it, and played the piano.

However, it seems to be a little different from the performance of Yamada Irfu that Ye Su heard before...... (To be continued.) )