The eighty-first chapter of the main text volume is well written

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At this moment, Wumore Liuli is waiting very anxiously, so many days of hard work, what kind of evaluation is the final result, she is looking forward to it, and she is also very uneasy.

She looks forward to being able to satisfy Ye Su, her own creation, she has put in all the effort, all the seriousness, if such a work still can't be recognized, she is really helpless.

But the long-term continuous failure has made her lose most of her self-confidence, and she can only wait uneasily.

After a while, Ye Su still didn't reply, Wugen Liuli's hand was on the keyboard, and he subconsciously tapped it, wanting to urge to ask, whether it was bad or not bad - but she still endured it, Ye Su was looking at her short story, whether it was fast or slow, there would always be a result, so there was no point in urging, but it would make Ye Su feel very annoyed. Wugen Liuli didn't want Teacher Ye Su to feel annoying, so she still endured it and deleted all the content in the dialog box before sending it out.

Wugen Liuli didn't know how long she had waited, and in the end, Ye Su replied to her......

Wumore Liuli's heart, at this moment, was completely raised.

It's been a long time since I've felt this way.

She was even a little scared, and hurriedly raised her hand to block the screen, squinted, and secretly looked at Ye Su's reply from between her fingers-

The reply above goes like this:

Ye Su: That's a good job.

Although it was only a few words, the whole heart of Wumore Liuli was completely put down!

Well written!

This should be a good review, right?

Wumore Liuli couldn't help but think like this, although the word yes is a little vague, but at least it's much better than those bad evaluations.

Ye Su continued to reply, the answer sheet that has been written in so many days, of course, cannot be changed for just this sentence.

Ye Su: Although there are still some shortcomings in the novel, such as the details are too redundant, this seems to be your habit, you should pay attention to this in the future, this must be revised. Do you understand? But there are a lot of bright spots in the novel, and I can see that you are serious. After I give you a fixed frame, you dance in that fixed frame as if you were wearing a pair of shackles or shackles, and it must be very difficult to dance. Still, you're doing a good job.

Ye Su: These are two articles of a very high standard, you can grasp the style of writing, and show it to the fullest, I can see that you seem to have studied how to be able to bring such a subject into perfect play.

Ye Su: To be honest, I was a little surprised, I didn't expect you to be able to do this. I had to say a word, well done.

Ye Su: Finally, you can make a small change to the article, skillfully remove the faults of the details, and remember not to repeat the details again and again in the future. This has a great impact on the reading senses of the article, in addition to ......

Ye Su sent a lot of messages in one go, and Wugen Liuli looked at these messages seriously, and when he saw his shortcomings, he was naturally a little unconvinced, but if he imagined it carefully, there was really such a thing, and he couldn't help but feel a little ashamed, obviously he could already control this, but he still exposed it.

Ye Su saw a lot of things, he saw the seriousness of the five more glasses, and the five more glasses, from such an evaluation, he saw Ye Su's seriousness.

After looking at Ye Su's praise behind her, Wumore Liuli was even more happy, and her heart was very sweet, as sweet as eating honey.

This feeling made her happily can't help but look out on her face, and the smile on the corner of her mouth can't help but tilt up.

This made the five watch Hinata and the five watch Zhuxi next to him look at their sister curiously.

The older fifth watch Hinata couldn't help but ask: "Sister, sister, what happened?" Are you so happy? ”

"Is there anything up there?" The fifth watch Hinata leaned over the computer screen and watched.

The fifth watch Liuli covered the face of the fifth watch Hinata a little shyly, pushed her to the side, and said, "It's nothing." ”

"It's related to Brother Ye Su, right?" The shy reaction of the five watch glasses made the five watch Rixiang's eyes light up, and he asked subconsciously.

Wugen Liuli's face suddenly showed a little blush, and then he said a little annoyed: "What does this have to do with you, hurry up and go somewhere else to play." ”

"Alas~~ Obviously, I care about my sister's words, but my sister is so cold and boring." The fifth watch Hinata couldn't help but complain.

"I don't need your care." Wugen Liuli said a little funny.

"If you like that brother, go on a date." The fifth watch Hinata said directly.

"So--it's not like that, you're really nosy, aren't you?" Wumore Liuli said with some annoyance, and Wuwatch Hinata saw that the situation didn't seem right, so she quickly turned around and ran away.

"It's really ......" Wugen Liuli looked at her sister who left and said with a headache.

She returned to the front of the computer and typed.

Wugen Liuli: I understand the teacher, I will revise the content of these two chapters.

Ye Su: Well, after you revise it, submit these two chapters of the novel to some magazines.

Wugen Liuli: Alas? Submit to one of the magazines?

Ye Su: Yes, I think the "Insect Master" you have completed is already qualified to be serialized. Since it has been written, it is naturally going to be published, what's the problem?

Five more glass: No ...... There's no problem, it's just that such a novel, such a style, can it really be serialized?

Wumore Liuli is obviously a little unconfident in herself.

Ye Su replied without thinking about it: Serialization or not, that's after submission, if you want to be serialized, then you can submit it directly, maybe there will be an opportunity for serialization, maybe not, but if you don't contribute, then there will be no such opportunity.

Wugen Liuli: Teacher, you are right...... I'll contribute.

Ye Su: That's right.

Wugen Liuli: But if you submit, I will mark that the teacher is original. We are in a cooperative relationship.

Ye Su: Huh?

Wugen Liuli: In this way, the teacher will have half of the manuscript fee. I also thought about it for a while, since this is the teacher's theme, it is the teacher's creativity, if it is really serialized, or published for sale, then it must have the teacher's name on it.

Ye Su couldn't help but be a little amused when he saw this, but this was something that Wugen Liuli had seriously considered. He had no choice but to reply: In that case, it will be as you wish. I'll tweet it for you when the time comes.

Wumore Liuli: Thank you, teacher!

Ye Su quickly typed and said: This is what I should do.