Chapter 293: Is It Really Okay to Write Like This?

The dim glow of the lamp on the desk shone on Govin's body as he crouched in front of his desk, casting a huge shadow on the bedroom wall.

That night, Govin did not put down his pen and go to bed until three o'clock in the morning.

Outside his room, Lin Yiming, who had spent the two-person world, had already come back to rest.

As soon as this kid came back, he twisted a tango and danced very excitedly. However, when he found that the door of Govine's room was closed, but the light was still shining from under the door, the excitement on his face quickly faded, and his movements became even more gentle.

It was still early, Lin Yiming quietly sat on the sofa in the living room and looked through a magazine, waiting for Gewen to finish the manuscript. But after waiting for a long time, he still didn't see Gowen come out, Lin Yiming saw that the time was not early, so he went back to the house to sleep.

This Govyn is really not crazy and can't survive!

The next day, when Ge Wen opened his eyes dimly, he felt that there was a person sitting at the desk in his bedroom, and when he looked closely, it turned out to be Lin Yiming.

Lin Yiming was sitting at his desk reading the manuscript of "Bright Sword", as if it had been a long time ago, and he had always been the first reader of Gowen's works.

To be honest, Govern's "Bright Sword" this time surprised Lin Yiming.

It was the first time he had seen a novel that positively depicted the Kuomintang, and positively portrayed the heroic deeds of a Kuomintang officer in the War of Resistance Against Japan. What surprised him even more was that this was the first time he had seen someone dare to write about my middle-level officer of the Eighth Route Army so life-like, closer to reality, and more flesh and blood.

The Japanese inflicted a little loss on Li Yunlong today, and he will do everything possible to retaliate tomorrow. In the face of the Sakata Wing, which had killed his comrades, Li Yunlong launched a frontal counter-charge when the enemy was charging, covering the artillery to kill the Sakata Wing Captain and leading the whole regiment to break through. The raid on the headquarters of the Eighth Route Army by Yamamoto's special forces in Daxiawan caused his old comrade-in-arms Kong Jie to block the gun and be dismissed, and Li Yunlong ambushed the Japanese observation group with his backhand, killing more than 100 Japanese officers led by a major general and six large generals. As soon as the Yamamoto special forces took Li Yunlong's regimental headquarters on the front foot, captured his newlywed wife Xiuqin, and seriously injured the political commissar Zhao Gang, Li Yunlong organized tens of thousands of troops on the back foot to directly attack the county seat, and annihilated all the Japanese troops in the city, including the Yamamoto special forces.

Li Yunlong's story of retribution and daring made Lin Yiming look very happy, and also made Lin Yiming empathize.

This mud-legged general, who can be called "illiterate", is cute and not vulgar, lacks virtue and is not hateful, strong and gentle, bloody and strategic, and very down-to-earth.

It is natural for Lin Yiming to have such a reaction.

Not to mention the extreme dogma, old-fashionedness, and routines of military novels in this era, the portrayal of our party and our army has always been glorious and upright, tall and complete, and almost all of them have become gods, which makes people very tired of watching it. In the era of advanced information in later generations, people have never been exposed to anything new, but this is the case, when the "Bright Sword" TV series is broadcast, it can cause a ratings frenzy and become popular all over the country.

If such a masterpiece is placed in this era, it will naturally surprise and be fresh to the people of this era.

It's just, from an editor's point of view......

Govin stretched on the bed, then sat up.

While getting dressed, he asked Lin Yiming with frowns: "How was the battle last night?" Is there a safe base? ”

"On base?" Lin Yiming was startled by Gewen who suddenly sat up, and then asked Gewen with some confusion.

"It's just whether you and Gan Xin had a conversation last night, or even go one step deeper......

"Fuck off!" Lin Yiming figured out what Gowen meant, rolled his eyes, and unceremoniously gave a middle finger.

"Haha......" Govin laughed as he lifted his pants.

In terms of the acceptance of popular words in later generations, almost no one can compare with Lin Yiming, I really don't know if this kid's sullen temperament is born like this, or if he was influenced by Gowen, who is close to ink.

"Hey, get down to business." Lin Yiming put the manuscript in his hand back on the table, and then turned to look at Gowen.

"Isn't this the right thing, where have you and Gan Xin come to this? Talk about it, hurry up and talk about it. After that, I can teach you some pickling girls for free, this is my secret biography. Ge Wen got dressed, sat down on the edge of the bed, and urged Lin Yiming to come.

Lin Yiming looked at Gewen Monkey's anxious appearance, and couldn't help but despise him and said: "What kind of secret do you have as a bachelor, and you still pick up the Dafa of girls, you can find a girlfriend first!" ”

"I rely on ......" Lin Yiming's taunt directly brought 10,000 points of damage, leaving Gewen speechless.

Speaking of which, after Govyn came back from time travel, he really didn't think about finding a girlfriend. At the beginning, he was a black household, and he had difficulties in survival, so how could he be in the mood to fall in love. Later, my identity was bleached, and I was busy creating, and I was afraid of a lot of things, and my ideas were even more complicated, so I didn't have the heart to deal with an object.

It's been so long, of course, Govyn has had impulses, and he has dreamed of it a few times, but he really can't do it if he asks him to find a random woman to be his girlfriend!

Xu Zhimo has a very good saying - in the vast sea of people, I will find the only partner in my life, I am lucky, I lose my life.

In terms of love, Govin is an idealist.

Whether it was in a past life or in this life, he wanted to find that dreamlike emotion. At the root of it, this is a bit of a pretentious bastard.

If in a previous life, Govin could still seek a one-night stand in a bar to vent his physical needs, but is there a bar in this era?

In my previous life, there was such a joke - to fall in love without the purpose of marriage is to play hooligan. In the 80s, this is absolutely true, if you dare to play hooligans, you will never be able to escape the **** of the people's government and public security organs.

Therefore, Govin could only hold back very hard.

Hearing Lin Yiming's contempt at this time, Ge Wen was speechless, he couldn't say that Lao Tzu had already been killed by a hundred people, what qualifications do you have to say Lao Tzu as an innocent little virgin, do you know what an old man cart is, what is Guanyin sitting on a lotus, what is 69, what is **********?

Lin Yiming saw that after finally striking at Gewen's obscene gossip psychology, a trace of refreshment flashed on his face, and then he thought of his previous doubts, and opened his mouth to ask Gewen: "Gewen, is it really good that you wrote "Bright Sword" like this?" ”

"What?"

"In "Bright Sword", you not only praised the Kuomintang officers, but also wrote about the generals of the Eighth Route Army...... Such a ......" Lin Yiming didn't know how to describe Li Yunlong, and after thinking about it for a long time, he still couldn't come up with the right words.

Ge Wen smiled, and he finished speaking for Lin Yiming: "Do you think that I portrayed Li Yunlong as too 'folk' and too recklessly, and I don't look like a Communist officer at all?" ”

"That's right! How do you write like that? Is there a problem with writing like this? ”

Gowen asked rhetorically, "What's the problem?" How can there be a perfect person in this world? The high-ranking generals of our army are not without shortcomings. ”

"However, how do I think you have blended the shortcomings of almost all the problematic generals of our army onto Li Yunlong? Although it looks very cool, it also makes people feel very uncomfortable, too individual, and seems to be out of place with the times. ”

Lin Yiming pointed his fingers and began to count: "When Li Yunlong was demoted to the director of the quilt factory, he shouted that the division commander would not move him when he came, but as soon as the brigade commander came, he was so frightened that his face bloomed. If he couldn't grab the main attack, he scolded the deputy regiment commander, scolded the political commissar, and scolded the chief of staff. He always fights with people when he doesn't agree with each other, and the monk, Zhao political commissar, and Kong Jie have all fought each other, and when he recruited Duan Peng into the army, he always provoked the monk to fight with Duan Peng. No one wants to take away what Li Yunlong has in his hands, no one wants to go back what he has stolen from others, and the cavalry troops he has stolen do not have the share of the deputy regiment commander Kong Jie, and when the friendly troops rob his spoils, he will let his subordinates directly fight back and beat people in full view of everyone...... You are not writing about a general of the Eighth Route Army, you are simply a bandit! ”

Ge Wen disagreed: "Li Yunlong is not a hero in the traditional sense, he is just a principled reckless horseman, I write like this, don't you think his heroism is even more sufficient?" Writing like this can make Li Yunlong accepted by readers, and now everyone is almost disgusted by the formulaic things in military novels and wants to vomit! Besides, our party and our army originally came out of the common people, and at the beginning they were a little reckless, which became more real. , write a little bit of soil first, and slowly erect Li Yunlong's military talent and theoretical talent, so that the growth experience is more real and three-dimensional. ”

"I can't tell you...... Still, I think it's too risky for you to write like that. I'm afraid that there may not be a publisher who dares to release this set of books. ”

"Ha, you don't know this, "Bright Sword" was serialized in the veterans' foundation's journal "Colleagues". This novel is for veterans. ”

"The Foundation's journal? "Fellows"? When did this happen? How did I not know? Lin Yiming was a little confused when he heard this.

In the past few days, the two have not sat together and chatted. During the day, they are busy with each other, and at night, one is in love and the other is writing a manuscript, so Lin Yiming has never known about "Fellow Robes". If it weren't for the fact that today was Sunday and Lin Yiming was resting, I'm afraid I wouldn't know about it.

So Gowen told Lin Yiming about "Fellow Robes".

"You mean Beidao is coming to Shanghai?" Lin Yiming asked with some surprise.

"That's right, it's been a few days, and he's been living in that little bungalow rented by the Foundation." Govyn nodded.

"Damn, you don't talk about this? Don't you know that Kitajima is my idol? Slip a little, hurry up and wash up, and we'll go see the great god in a while! Lin Yiming couldn't sit still, he urged Govin to quickly pack his things.

"You weren't active this morning?" Gewen was pushed out of the bedroom by Lin Yiming and asked strangely.

"It's about to be the Spring Festival, and the "Reading" magazine has been busy lately, and she is working overtime this morning." Lin Yiming said, pushing Govin into the bathroom.

"You guy of the opposite sex and inhumanity, you used me as a substitute! If the beauty is fine, go to be courteous, and if the beauty has something, come to me, it's too bad! ”

"Brush your teeth!"

With a bang, Lin Yiming closed the bathroom door.

(To be continued.) )