Chapter 38 of the text volume, Teacher Xia Shizi's private chat

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Ye Su soon returned home, this time period was still very early, and his sister Xiao Bury had not come back yet, put down the schoolbag, Ye Su opened the unfinished novel, and read it.

This novel called "The Life of the Disgusted Matsuko", Ye Su has read most of it today, and about a quarter of the content is left unread, and now that he comes back, there is nothing to do, so he simply reads it in one go, and then returns it to Kasumigaoka Shiyu tomorrow.

"The Life of the Disgusted Matsuko" is a traditional novel, not good-looking, not good-looking, the storytelling is undoubted, and the writing is so good that it is not like words, it is not at all comparable to some light novel writers, at least Ye Su is ashamed of himself.

I have to say that traditional fiction writers also have the strengths of traditional fiction writers.

Of course, it doesn't mean that the writing of all traditional novel writers is very good, and the writing of a large number of traditional novel writers is not as good as Ye Su, but those few masters make Ye Su have to obey.

The so-called writing is not a simple choice of words and sentences.

Use some boring and flashy words without any practical meaning, pile up sentences, paragraphs, is the so-called good writing?

It's simply the biggest joke!

Many people have a big misconception about writing, thinking that a well-written sentence must be very high, and even have a large number of rare words, a large number of classical quotations, and flowery rhetoric.

But in fact, it's quite the opposite.

The so-called writing, in Ye Su's view, contains two meanings, one is that the style of writing is very good, and the other is that the plot article is very good.

The writing here should be more about the understanding and use of words.

There was once a master who said to Ye Su that there are roughly three levels of standards to measure the quality of writing.

The first level is accuracy – the ability to express exactly what is in mind.

The second level is reasonableness - what the text describes should be logical.

The third level is beautiful - it's catchy to read, and it's a pleasure to read.

A novel that can make people feel enjoyable is a really good writing.

This is also a mistake that many newcomers to writing are prone to make, and Ye Su in the past also pursued some so-called gorgeous rhetoric, and only then did he wake up.

At this time, the book in Ye Su's hand is obviously a master's work, and the writing is really good - even if it is Ye Su, I have to say and admire.

However, it's just admiration.

Ye Su didn't like this kind of story very much, although the content was different from the novel in his previous life, but what they wanted to express was the same.

Tragedy, pain, helplessness, reflections on life.

It's a depressed novel.

Unlike many novels, which moaned innocently, this novel is accurate to the point, and it does have some value - but even so, Ye Su still doesn't like it.

It can even be said that it is annoying.

This is not to blame Ye Su, in fact, the essence is still Ye Su of the previous life, the three views are still very different from the three views of the Japanese people, this is an unchangeable fact, some of the content of the novel that may be deafening in the eyes of the Japanese, but he can't accept such values and worldview at all.

It's just that...... From an artistic point of view, this novel still has a lot to offer.

Closing the book, Ye Su sighed a lot, at this time, Xiao Bury seemed to have already returned, she saw that her brother was reading the novel seriously, she didn't bother, took out some snacks, and started playing the game......

"Coming back?" Ye Su looked at Xiao Bury and said.

"You're back a long time ago, huh?" It's a small burial in the PS5 game Dark Souls 6, and he said without looking back.

"Hungry?" Ye Su asked.

"A little bit." Xiao Bury said.

"What do you want to eat?" Ye Su asked.

"As long as it's made by my brother, I'm willing to eat any little burial!" Xiao Bury said.

"Is curry okay?" Ye Su asked.

"Absolutely!"

Ye Su went to make curry.

When it was done, the brother and sister sat down at the table, clasped their hands together and said, "I'm moving."

After finishing speaking, Xiao Bury was not in a hurry to eat curry, but looked at his brother and asked, "Why do you say that I started?" ”

"Huh?" Ye Su was stunned for a moment, "What did you say?" ”

"I said, why do you say, I'm moving, this sentence?" Xiao Bury asked curiously

"It's table manners." Ye Su said as a matter of course.

"I know it's table manners, but, why do you say that?" Xiao Buri continued to ask.

Ye Su thought for a while and said, "You can understand, this is a thank you for the food. ”

"Thank you for the food?" Xiao Bury asked.

"Yes, in literary terms, it is - thank you for extending my life. With the life of animals and plants, we continue our own life. Ye Su said.

"Thank you for extending my life...... "Xiao Burying muttered this sentence, and suddenly realized: "I see, but why don't you say this?" ”

"You are really a hundred thousand why, give me an honest meal, eat time, don't speak!" Ye Su said speechlessly.

"Why don't you talk during meal time?"

"Hit you?"

"Brother, I was wrong!"

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After dinner, Ye Su cleaned up the tableware, came to the computer, turned on the computer, and clicked on line.

LINE popped up private messages one after another, which was nothing more than some things about the union. Ye Su glanced at it a few times and expressed his opinion.

After a while, to his surprise, the teacher Xia Shizi actually chatted with him privately.

"Hello. Blue and white thorn teacher, online? "This is a private message from Ms. Kasumiko.

This reminded Ye Su of a stalk, when he wrote online articles in his previous life, the personality signature of every editor was: Don't ask if you are there, just say things.

Ye Su couldn't help but smile, shook his head, and typed.

"What's the matter?"

Xia Shizi: That's right, I've been writing a new book recently, I wonder if I can get the advice of Mr. Qinghuathorn?

Blue Thorn: Of course it's my pleasure! However, why didn't Ms. Xia Shizi find an editor?

Kasumi Shiko: Editor...... Say I'm not fit to write such a novel.

Blue Thorn: Huh? Has Ms. Kasumi changed the subject?

Kasumiko: Yes, this is a novel with a different world theme.

Blue and White Thorn: A novel with a different world theme, I didn't expect Teacher Xia Shizi to be writing about a different world.

Kasumiko: It's my first time writing it, so I've had a lot of jerky things, but I'm still really interested in writing this novel.

Blue and white thorn: Then write it according to your own meaning.

Kasumiko: I thought the same thing, but the editor didn't agree with me writing ......

Bluespinos: Why?

Kasumi Shiko: He said that I am not good at writing this genre, and that I changed it to the original subject.

Blue and white thorn: frontal ...... Anyway, no matter what kind of content, send it to me first.

Kasumiko: Okay.