"Ba Lao, many birds come to the world to do what they have to do, not to hide from the guns!"

As soon as this sentence came out of Govine's mouth, Ba Jin was stunned for a moment, and then he repeated it in a low voice a few times, and he couldn't help but laugh heartily, "Interesting, really interesting!" Hehe......"

So the whole room began to echo with Ba Jin's hearty laughter.

After a long time, Ba Jin stopped laughing, he raised his head with a smile, pointed at Gowen with his hand, shook his head and said, "You, you! It's really a lot of heart...... Really...... Alas, it's good to be young! ”

Barkin, as if he wanted to say something, suddenly stopped his words, and only let out a sigh at the end.

Hearing Ba Jin's words, Govin only thought that Ba Jin was praising himself, he was not hypocritical, a smile also flashed on his face, and he secretly made a decision in his heart - no matter what, I really made this comment a decision!

"But Govyn, this review of yours still needs to be revised. A lot of the text is very impulsive and intense, which is very bad, and the commentary is to narrate the problem from the perspective of a bystander, and cannot bring into the author's own emotions. Another point is that your word count should be condensed a little, otherwise it will look too trivial, the comment must be to the point, you must grasp the key, a hammer in the east and a stick in the west, it will affect the quality of your comment! ”

Barkin had already heard the strong will in Govyn's words, so he didn't bother to try to dissuade Govyn. What's more, Bargin really wanted to see what Govin could do. Although Ribagin said that he would not help Govyn, but if something really happened, he would still do some work. Barking didn't want Govin to be wiped out by public opinion. He values Govern, a talented boy who loves his country deeply.

So Barkin began to analyze the problems of his article for Govin. And Govin also listened carefully to Ba Jin's explanation, nodding in agreement from time to time.

This exchange lasted for nearly an hour, and it was not until Govin noticed that Barkin's face was getting more and more tired and noticed that Barkin's throat was a little hoarse.

Ba Jin usually gets up at six o'clock in the morning, sits at his desk at seven o'clock and reads the newspaper, and today he came in at eight o'clock and started to write reviews, and has been until now......

Govin glanced up at the wall clock. It's already half past ten, so the old man Ba Jin has been working for nearly four hours today!

Govin couldn't help but complain about his carelessness in his heart, and then quickly stopped Ba Jin, who was still very talkative. said: "Ba Lao, you can rest for a while." You've been working too long this morning! ”

Hearing Govine's dissuasion, Ba Jin couldn't help but look up at the wall clock on the wall, and then said as if he suddenly realized: "I said how do I feel particularly tired today?" It was almost eleven o'clock...... Yes. The old man listened to you and went back to his room and lay down for a while. You're thinking about this review yourself. ”

With that, Ba Jin stood up from his chair.

Govin quickly helped him, and then sent Barjin to the inner room to lie down, and then gently closed the bedroom door and sat back down at the desk.

Ba Jin's guidance was like a timely rain for Gowen, which saved him a lot of trouble in reviewing the manuscript himself, and after Ba Jin's guidance, Gowen began to be a little dissatisfied with the "Rise of the Poetry Group" he wrote. So he leaned down again and revised the draft.

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Little by little, time passed. The sun rose higher and higher outside the window, and the sunlight slowly moved from the sunny corner of the room to the middle of the room, and finally hit Govyn's back, and then leaped over his shoulders and sprinkled on the manuscript paper. In that sunlight, the smiling dust fluttered freely, making people see clearly.

Govyn narrowed his eyes, then moved his body to the desk where the sun did not shine, and then continued to revise the manuscript.

When the sun finally triumphantly occupied the entire desk, Govin also straightened up and let out a long sigh of relief - "The Rising Poems" was finally revised!

The original manuscript of more than 40,000 words has been revised and revised by Gowen and has become more than 20,000 words, which has shrunk by nearly half of the word count. However, the views and prospects in the commentary have not changed at all, but the text is more concise, the views are more distinct, and the crystallization of Gowen's thoughts shines throughout.

Govin put down the pen in his hand, put his hands behind his neck, leaned back in his chair and looked at the manuscript on the desk, only to see that the special symbols and words on the manuscript were all added by himself when he revised them later, and he could see that a large number of words were crossed out by himself......

I don't know if this comment of mine will be able to bring a little benefit to Hazy Poetry and Gu Cheng after it is published......

Govyn's thoughts unfolded, and his essay "The Rise of the Poets" combined all his knowledge and thoughts about poetry, and he considered the essay to be outstanding in terms of its ideological and literary value.

More importantly, in his commentary, by analyzing the formation, development and current situation of hazy poetry, Govin placed a precise position for hazy poetry in the modern poetry genre, and justified the value of hazy poetry in a real sense. In addition, he also pointed out a broad road for the development direction of hazy poetry, which not only opened up a long-term path for the development of hazy poetry, but also had reference value for modern poetry of other genres.

With the support of this review, I think it will definitely improve the situation of those obscure poets who have created poems but cannot publish them publicly, right?

After all, I have provided a real theoretical basis for hazy poetry, and those conservatives in the poetry world, those commentators who always like to associate literature and politics should be speechless in front of this commentary, right?!

A faint smug look appeared on Govin's face, and his shining eyeballs began to wander on the desk, the sun was dazzling but gentle, and the whole desk was filled with golden yellow.

Then Govin saw the stack of poems in the upper right corner of his desk, and then an inspiration suddenly crossed his mind.

Publish these poems in Harvest magazine!

Yes, if Harvest magazine could publish my "The Rise of the Poetry Group" and these hazy poems at the same time, it would definitely create a huge sensation! In this way, it can also be a real justification for the hazy poetry in form, you must know that the editor-in-chief of "Harvest" is Ba Jin, which is the most important pure literary journal in China!

I think that those authors who can't publish their own hazy poems will not refuse such a good thing, not only to get the manuscript fee, but also to get their works on the country's first-class pure literary journal, such a thing is a once-in-a-lifetime thing for them.

If it is indeed published, it will surely make those conservatives and diehards stunned!

Maybe it can also set off a reading frenzy and a creative frenzy for hazy poetry lovers!

Poetry should be something that our nation will inherit forever!

Govyn was deeply fascinated by his genius creativity, and if he could really realize his idea, it would definitely cause a strong response from all over China's hazy poetry lovers, which would naturally give hazy poets a huge confidence, and naturally make the poetry of this era burst out with greater energy!

It's like a huge volcano that has been suppressed for a long time, and it suddenly erupts with a bang......

Govin couldn't sit still, he was so drawn to his own thoughts that he got up from his chair, and began to walk up and down the room—

However, it is not easy to realize this idea. Ba Lao had already told himself just now, and he couldn't be sure whether his comment was correct or not, so he wouldn't help himself; And the manuscripts of these hazy poems are only a few outstanding hazy poems that Gu Cheng wrote down when he lived in Beijing, so these poems do not represent the hazy poems, nor can they represent the level of the hazy poets in China, since they plan to publish the cluster of hazy poems in the magazine "Harvest", they must get the best works from other poets and from the hazy poets in other regions!

And the biggest difficulty is how to convince the editor-in-chief of "Harvest", Uncle Gao Lin, to know that although every issue of "Harvest" magazine will publish some poems, most of those poems are not hazy poems, and even if all of them are replaced with hazy poems, it will not be able to accommodate all the hazy poems, and the page of "Harvest" to publish poems is too small! In this case, you need to do your own work, and you must really impress Gao Lin and even other editors, after all, Gao Lin alone can't really call the shots, he needs to report to Ba Jin, and he needs to be responsible to the editors below.

Barking said that he would not help himself, but he would certainly not embarrass himself; But other editors are different, everyone thinks differently, it is easy to convince one person, but it is difficult to convince a group of people.

Can you do such a job yourself?

Govyn was a little unconfident in his heart, and then he screamed in his heart-

What is success? Success is to act and practice! If you don't do it, you will definitely lose, but if you really do it, then you have the hope of success, and you may win!

I will definitely succeed, I will definitely win!

Suddenly, Govyn stopped his steps in circles around the room, stood there in place, his hands clenched into fists, silently raised his head high, and shouted loudly!

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This chapter was originally planned to be updated last night, but after halfway through it, I couldn't stay up anymore, so I went to sleep. This morning, I got up and went to the construction site again, and I didn't finish the second half of the chapter until I came back at noon. Sweat......

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