The first reader of the tenth chapter of the main text

4906841.html

Next chapter

Wumore Liuli secretly glanced at Ye Su, and couldn't help but show a puzzled look.

Looking at Ye Su's appearance, he looks sunny and handsome, he is so fashionable, and the clothes are a super brand-name custom clothes, and Wugen Liuli remembers that the price is probably as high as more than six figures.

Wumore Liuli once saw someone show off on the forum, what the brand is, Wumore Liuli can't remember, but I still remember the strange logo, definitely not a cabbage goods.

Just such a boy who doesn't have a trace of otaku on his body, actually writes light novels?

This profoundly made Wumore Liuli realize that what it means to be a person cannot be disguised.

However, this guy is so young, what he writes must be ugly...... At first glance, it looks like an amateur. In the heart of Wumore Liuli, he subconsciously thought so.

However, as the saying goes, subjective consciousness is often far from reality.

When Wugen Liuli finished reading the first sentence, he couldn't help but raise his eyebrows slightly.

She quickly read the second sentence, the third sentence, and the fourth sentence, and became more and more serious, and felt more and more that the beginning of this novel was really interesting, and she had never read a light novel with such a beginning before.

However, while she was watching, the printing of the novel was complete.

The boss put away the printed manuscript and said to Ye Su: "It's done, little brother." ”

"Oh, thank you." Ye Su nodded, walked over, handed over 1,000 yen, the boss took it, and found some change for Ye Su.

Subsequently, Ye Su left the print shop.

Looking at the back of Ye Su leaving, Wugen Liuli bit her lip, although she really wanted to see the follow-up to this novel, but just to see the novel, it still made her embarrassed to talk to a strange boy, and suddenly, Wugen Liuli saw something and hurriedly followed.

"That." Wugen Liuli chased after him and spoke.

"Huh? What's wrong? Ye Su turned around a little unexpectedly, and saw that it was the cute half-big Lori of classical Japanese style, and couldn't help but feel a little proud, it seems that he was attracted by his handsomeness......?

However, this is not the case, and the fifth watch Liuli picked up a bunch of keys and said, "This is your key, right?" ”

"Huh?" Ye Su looked at the key, was stunned for a moment, and touched his pocket, when he was sitting on the chair just now, did the key actually fall off?

"Yes, it's my key, thank you." Ye Su walked over, took the key, and said with thanks.

"It's not enough to just say thank you." Wugen Liuli said with a faint smile: "I think you should pay some price." ”

"Pay...... Some price? Ye Su was shocked at the time, has the recent middle school girl become so proficient in accosting?

However, what he didn't know was that at this time, in the heart of Wugen Liuli, he regretted very much what he had just said, he only needed to read his manuscript, but he had to pretend to be false and say such embarrassing words, he was really shy!

The little faces of the five more glasses are a little red.

"Well...... Treat me to an ice cream? Wumore Liuli thought about it and said.

This really means a bit of gratitude, but Ye Su is so happy, it's just an ice cream, to him, it's nothing at all, and if this key is lost, it will really become very troublesome.

Ye Su took Wumore Liuli to a nearby café, and on the way, the two sides briefly introduced themselves.

Subsequently, Ye Su discovered that the real purpose of Wugen Liuli was not to know him, nor to eat ice cream, but to read his novels.

It gave him a subtle feeling...... How to say it, a little inexplicably lost, but also a little happy.

I'm happy that my novel is able to attract such a cute half-big Lori.

Ye Su said: "You can be regarded as my first reader, right? I'll show you. ”

"The first reader or something, you're really pitiful." Wumore Liuli said. It was a real blow.

"No way, who told me to just write a light novel." Ye Su said helplessly.

"Huh? Are you writing light novels for the first time? Wugen Liuli looked at Ye Su with very suspicious eyes: "Didn't lie to me?" ”

"Why should I lie to you, even so, but I've written other types of novels before." Ye Su said.

"En......" Wugen Liuli sighed, and accepted this explanation, so he didn't continue to speak, but he was seriously looking at Ye Su's novel.

Wumore Liuli's expression is very focused, and he looks at the novel seriously, which is really cute.

Ye Su called two Buffy, gave Wugen a glass and a cup for himself.

Wugen Liuli read the novel very quickly, but even so, it took about an hour to finish reading the first volume of "The Melancholy of Haruhi in the Cool Palace".

After reading it, Wumore Liuli took a deep breath and said seriously: "Although I want to pick some fly in the ointment to complain about it, but I didn't find it, I have to say, this is really a wonderful novel, I have never read such a type of novel, the protagonist's way of complaining, is really in line with my taste." It's just the perfect spit. ”

The words of the five more glasses naturally resonated with Ye Su. He laughs and says, "I think so too." ”

Wugenliuli asked, "Are you going to submit this novel?" ”

"Yes." Ye Su nodded: "But because it's the first time to submit a light novel, I don't know which publishing house to submit to." ”

"Need a recommendation?" Wugen Liuli asked.

"Huh? Do you know an editor at a publishing house? That's a pleasure, of course. Ye Su hurriedly said.

"Although I know the editor of the publishing house, the editor of the publishing house, I'm afraid I'm about to forget about me." Wugen Liuli said embarrassedly.

"You've also written light novels?" Ye Su asked.

"Yes...... It was a black history that could not be looked back on. I'm never going to write that kind of shameful super-middle two-way work again. Wumore Liuli calmly told his black history.

"Is that so......" Ye Su nodded.

Wugen Liuli looked at Ye Su with some envy, and couldn't help but say, "I'm really envious." A person with outstanding writing talent like yours is obviously the same text, but in your hands, it can turn decay into magic. It's just amazing. ”

"It's not that powerful, as long as you practice and learn, you can do it, although talent is very important, but acquired learning can also make up for this." Ye Su said.

"Although the technique can be learned, I think that the spirituality in the work can never be learned." Wugen Liuli said disapprovingly.

"Spirituality sometimes. In commercial works, it is not a very important thing. Ye Su said.

"But for a masterpiece, it's a must, for example, in your novel, there is spirituality, which will make people like the novel from the bottom of their hearts, not a clumsy work with a strong sense of craftsmanship." Wumore Liuli insisted on his own opinion.