Chapter 85: Improvement of Writing Skills

The Taoist Tower, which is full of Gowen's pure heart, his cherishing of national culture and his deep affection for the motherland, has been completed, and three days have passed since he began to have the idea of writing historical and cultural essays.

During these three days, Govin had temporarily put aside the translation of Walden. Although it only took him half a day to write the essay "Taoist Tower", in the process of collecting and researching those historical materials, he accumulated too much depression and grief and indignation, and he could not calm down at all, and he could not achieve the heart like water, and tranquility and ease are the indispensable states of mind for translating "Walden".

Ba Jin naturally noticed Gewen's abnormality, not to mention that Gowen also asked him for the contact information of the scholars who studied Dunhuang cultural relics. It's just that Barkin doesn't understand Govwin's true purpose. I don't know what's going on, this little man even kept himself a secret this time, saying that he didn't want to let himself help him, he wanted to surprise himself, and he just had to wait patiently on the side. This xiaozi!

It looks like the surprise is finally coming. Barkin's eyes narrowed as Govin stood up from his chair, stretched his back, cleaned up the manuscript on the table, and then walked over to him with a few pages of manuscript paper.

"Ba Lao, I just finished an essay, you can read it for you." Govin respectfully handed over the manuscript in his hand with both hands.

"Oh, is that the surprise you were talking about?" Ba Jin took the manuscript with interest, and at the same time was still chattering, "I want to see what amazing work you have written for three days!" There was no news at all beforehand! But your Xiaozi's current shelf is getting more and more bullish, and even the old man's words are regarded as floating clouds......"

Hearing that Mr. Ba Jin actually burst into foul language in front of him, and also used the "floating clouds" that he had inadvertently said a few days ago, Govin couldn't help but burst into a cold sweat - the old man's mind is extremely open-minded, if he is used to some colloquial language in later generations, wouldn't it become my sin? Thinking of the scene where Ba Jin opened his mouth and closed his cup at some work meeting, Govin suddenly felt a few crows flying above his head.

As his gaze moved line by line on the manuscript paper, Barkin's nagging grew lower and lower, and it was clear that he was caught up in Govyn's article.

In just over 4,000 words, Ba Jin quickly read it.

Govin watched Ba Jin's every move nervously, this "Taoist Tower" has completely changed in his hands, not only the theme has changed, but also the specific plot content has been expanded and improved. It can be said that this article contains a piece of knowledge about creation that he has learned after crossing over, and has accumulated his greatest efforts and achievements, and it is impossible for him to write a more refined and valuable article than this "Taoist Pagoda". So at the moment, he was in a very worried mood, for fear that Ba Jin would say something bad.

Ba Jin didn't notice Govyn's nervousness, he smashed his mouth, didn't say anything, and then frowned and read the "Taoist Tower" again from the beginning.

And Govin also breathed a sigh of relief in his heart, since Ba Jin did not squeak and did not point out the problems of his article at the first time, then it means that his article is passable, and it is not miserable.

After reading this article containing deep feelings again, Ba Jin sighed softly, then closed the manuscript in his hand, looked up at Govine, and exclaimed: "This is really a surprise!" I didn't expect you to write your prose in addition to thinking about xìng's comments well! Not bad, good article. Enough to be on the table in any magazine in the country. ”

"Haha...... In fact, I also write very good poetry......" Hearing the praise of the worshipping idol in person, Govin scratched his head with a somewhat embarrassed smile, and then, as if remembering something, suddenly stopped laughing, and asked eagerly: "Ba Lao, do you mean that this "Taoist Tower" can be listed in the "Harvest" magazine?" ”

It's no wonder that Govin was so urgent, his first and only job after crossing the border was as an editor in the editorial department of Harvest, and at the beginning of his application, he was already determined to become a writer. Writers, writers, don't they just rely on their works to prove themselves? Only when your works are listed and read by readers can you prove your strength and be worthy of being a writer.

It's not that Govyn hasn't written articles, the "Generation" that was inadvertently plagiarized doesn't count, and among the other works, the two newspaper reviews are not exactly works, and in addition, he only has a few short stories that he said have been featured in "Folk". What kind of magazine is Folk? It was just a popular reading publication, and it couldn't be compared to a pure magazine like Harvest. And every time Govin writes a satisfactory xiao statement, Li Yu of the editorial department of "Harvest" will look at it, and he just thinks that one day he can use his own strength to publish his works in "Harvest" magazine. It's a pity that every time I get Li Yu's evaluation that "other magazines are fine, but pure magazines like "Harvest" are a little worse".

How many times he was defeated and how many times he was saddened, this was about to become a problem for Govine, and he dreamed of relying on his own strength to publish an article in the magazine "Harvest".

And then today, he actually heard from Ba Jin's mouth that his "Taoist Tower" could be expressed in any magazine in China, and didn't this mean that even "Harvest" magazine was no exception?

Like a desert traveler begging for rain to fall from the sky, Govin looked at Barkin with blank eyes.

"Such a good article can naturally be listed in Harvest magazine!" Hearing Govine's question, Ba Jin raised his head and glanced at Govin a little strangely and said. Then he stared at Govin with all his thoughts, and then said with a little surprise: "Hey, Govyn, I see that you are a little unconfident!" Young people can not care about anything, but they must believe in themselves and must have self-confidence. There is no one who does not improve after going through hard work. For so many days, you have accompanied the old man and me to study and read every day, haven't you realized that your writing level and cognition have made great progress and improvement? ”

As soon as Govin was lectured by Barkin, he still couldn't help but carefully recall his experience during this period of time. At this time, he realized that he had already carefully read all the Chinese books on the bookshelf that occupied one wall in Ba Jin's house. It turns out that not only is my mood much calmer than before, but even my writing level has improved a lot unconsciously.

It's no wonder that when writing "Taoist Tower", in addition to the two and a half days spent collecting historical materials, the time I really spent writing "Taoist Tower" was not enough for half a day. You have to know which of the short stories on "Folk" in the past has not been repeatedly revised!

Govyn suddenly came to his senses, and then there was a burst of joy.

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