Yamada Ilve's natural tone made Banzuki and Sugi Chi a little speechless, and at this time, he happened to see Mr. Blue and White Thorn who had just entered the editorial department - he obviously heard this sentence too, and immediately smiled bitterly, it was really a bit of a coincidence. Pen @ fun @ pavilion wWw. ｂｉｑUｇE。 ｉｎｆｏ

Ye Su was approached by Akaya Sugi to discuss the short story.

This short story is a work written by Ye Su by borrowing the plot and creativity of a movie, modifying and adjusting, and its background and some details, as well as some aspects of the plot, have also been replaced by Japan, and Ye Su is also the first time to write such a novel, and it is inevitable that there will be some problems in details.

After a cursory look, I'm afraid it's hard to find, but if you look at it repeatedly, you will immediately find a lot of problems, and after repeated scrutiny, there are many illogical places that need to be revised.

Since I participated in the short story competition, I can't say that I don't have much hope of winning the award, but I am not responsible for the excellence of my work, and I must pursue perfection. This is also a responsibility of the editor to the author, which is the view of Akaya Sugi.

Ye Su didn't refuse, and was very happy to come over to discuss the issue of the novel - but he didn't expect that as soon as he came in, he heard such words, and couldn't help frowning, what was going on?

As a writer, it was most uncomfortable to hear such words - he looked at Yamada Irf's back and wanted to know which teacher this was who dared to say such words, this is a girl, and it is blonde, although there is no face to see, only the back, but the length of this blonde hair is a little familiar......

"Eh, if you say that, the blue and white thorn teacher behind you is not convinced?" Banzuki said with a smile, pointed to Ye Su who came behind Yamada Ilf, and said.

"Alas??!!" Yamada Irfu was stunned at the time, and quickly turned his head, and suddenly saw Ye Su, who had just entered the editorial department, "Teacher Blue and White Thorn?!! Is he a blue-and-white thorn teacher? ”

Yamada Irf was embarrassed and shocked at the time, and he didn't expect that he had just said such a sentence and got such a result, and the blue and white thorn teacher was behind him, which was simply too coincidental.

In fact, when Ye Su saw Yamada Irf's face, he couldn't help but be stunned......

This face is somewhat familiar to him!

But I was just stunned for a while and remembered!

This is not the same naked that I saw last night. Is it a body maniac? Although the figure is simply speechless, it would be perfect if it could be developed, but as a girl, being naked at home is really unorthodox -

Because I'm wearing clothes, I almost didn't recognize it just now!

Yamada Irfu didn't know that his body had already been seen, and at this time he smiled a little embarrassedly and said, "I'm sorry, Mr. Blue and White Thorn, I didn't mean that......"

"Nothing." Ye Su shook his head with a smile and said, "Are you ......?" ”

"This is Yamada Ilf-sensei." Ye Su's editor-in-charge, Shanmu Chi also introduced.

"I'm the editor in charge of Mr. Yamada Irf, see you in the half moon, hello Mr. Blue and White Thorn." Half Moon said.

"Hello." Ye Su said, glanced at Yamada Ilf again, and couldn't help but think, it was actually that Yamada Ilf - as a super genius in the last session, her name is still very famous, and Ye Su has also heard it. However, such a person actually lives not far from himself, and is still a nude person who likes to wear no clothes. Lu perverted, I have to say that the opportunities in life, sometimes, are really very ingenious.

Teacher Yamada Irf is very beautiful, like an elf or a fairy in a fantasy work, with pointed ears, snow-white complexion, delicate facial features, and beautiful blonde hair, belonging to a super first-line beauty.

As for the choice of clothes, it is even more dreamy, she wears red and white, Lolita clothes with a lot of ruffles, and the black Lolita clothes of Wumore glass, her choice is softer and more girly, mainly pink and red.

Although she is beautiful without clothes, it is clear that Yamada Irf is more beautiful when she wears clothes.

Yamada Ilf's works belong to the super dead house direction works, a large number of must be killed, a large number of soft girl bridges, and a large number of fantasy content full of undisciplined manipulation. Ye Su thought that writing such a work would definitely be a fat house with eyes, but it turned out that it was not at all, it was actually such a beautiful girl, which was really surprising.

When Ye Su was surprised, the legal Lori editor next to him, Banyuejian, said: "Since you have written it, take it, and I will fight for another place for you." ”

"Huh? Is that okay too? Yamada Irf was stunned for a moment, she thought that she was going to PK with the blue and white thorn teacher, the winner was qualified, and the loser withdrew from the competition, but there was still a place!

"Absolutely." Half Moon said expressionlessly.

"You're not kidding me, are you?" Yamada Irf said.

"How is it possible, come with me to the conference room and read your novel - if it's bad, I won't have to apply." Banyuejian said lightly.

"How could I be bad-! Joke! Yamada Irf exaggerated at the time: "Who am I, I am Yamada Irf, who is the number one bestseller on the best-selling list - my work is very poor?" ”

"It's not number one anymore." Half Moon said.

"Sooner or later!" Yamada Irf snorted and said unconvinced.

"Okay, let's go." Half Moon said.

Ye Su saw Hanzuki and Yamada Irfu leave, and then looked at Sugi Akaya.

Sugi Chiya said with a smile: "You shouldn't be thinking, why is my editorial department half a moon?" ”

"That's what I think." Ye Su nodded.

"Hah...... You're really honest, many authors have such thoughts, but when it comes to her hands, they don't think like this. She's a lot tougher than I am. Sugi Chiya said embarrassedly.

"Yes......" Ye Su said.

"Let's go to the conference room and discuss this short story." Akata Sugi said.

"Okay."

Subsequently, Ye Su also came to the conference room and began to discuss his short stories.

Shanmu Chi is not a very good editor-in-charge, he has a good eye, and he has found many problems that even Ye Su did not think of - these are indeed his negligence.

The discussion took a long time, and Ye Su and Shanmu Chi also drank several cups of coffee intermittently before it was over.

Although it took a lot of time, the result was very remarkable, the short story "Horror Game" was more perfect, and both Ye Su and Sugi Akaya were more confident that this short story would win the award.

(To be continued.) )