Chapter 63 of the main text volume Ye Su's teaching time

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The content of the first sheet is some detailed settings, if the first one is a little fresh, it looks interesting, then the content of the second, third, fourth, and even many, many papers that follow, are all settings, then it's not interesting at all, complicated settings, detailed to the extreme, these contents are piled together, it's just drowsy.

From the moment Ye Su frowned, Wugen Liuli naturally discovered this, his heart twitched slightly, and he subconsciously leaned over and read the content of the manuscript with Ye Su, wanting to find out what the content was that made Ye Su frown so much.

Because of the relationship between the five more glasses and the one who came over to watch together, they were very close to Ye Su, and their whole face was completely pasted. This action is a little ambiguous.

After returning home, Wugen Liuli changed the previous gothic Lori costume and turned it into an ordinary girl's shirt, and the neckline, because of this action, was completely in front of Ye Su now.

A large area of white greasy, just a slightly bulging chest, delicate collarbones, and even a faint bit of cardamom red, are fully displayed.

Although the girl's body is really lacking in some temptation, such a picture can be regarded as beautiful.

But unfortunately, Ye Su didn't notice this at all.

And Wugen Liuli didn't seem to realize that he used this action, so he showed so many benefits to Ye Su, and what was even more annoying was that he didn't find it.

Ye Su continued to look at these settings.

Ye Su read it quickly, and he already understood one thing, that is, there is no need to read these settings carefully, this is a novel, not a game background setting, and there is no need for these at all.

After sweeping most of the settings, Ye Su sighed helplessly and said, "You have to understand that you are writing a novel, and the important thing about a novel is the story, not the setting. You should think about how to make a story more exciting, rather than working on the setting-"

"Shouldn't you put effort into the setting? But it's a novel story, and the most indispensable thing is a novel setting, right? Wugen Liuli frowned slightly, and also expressed his opinion.

Ye Su said without thinking: "There is indeed nothing wrong with saying this, but what you have to understand is that no matter how good the setting is, if there is no interesting story, it is just some interesting settings, not an interesting story." ”

Hearing Ye Su's words, Wugen Liuli couldn't refute it anymore, she bit her lip lightly, nodded anyway, and asked, "Could it be that these settings of mine are completely useless?" ”

"It's not that it's completely useless - it's just minimal, and if you want to cram all that much into your novel, it's a disaster for your novel." Ye Su thought for a while and said.

"Yes." Wumore Liuli nodded.

Ye Su continued: "This is a very simple truth, if you read a novel, all of which are settings, how will you think, will you feel bored, or will you watch it with relish? ”

Wugen Liuli thought for a while and said, "I'll watch it with relish." ”

"......" Ye Su was speechless and couldn't help but glare at her.

Wugen Liuli thought for a while, and couldn't help but say, "Isn't this wrong?" ”

"It's not just wrong, the direction is completely wrong, it's good to have a good idea, but an idea is an idea, if you turn these ideas into settings and shoehorn them all into the novel, the damage to the story itself is irreparable, you have to understand this." Ye Su said helplessly.

Wumore Liuli nodded half-knowingly.

To be honest, hearing Ye Su say this, she was still a little disappointed, which was tantamount to completely negating her previous efforts.

"Writing a novel is hard, but it's also simple. Learning to write novels, learning to write good novels, these are two different thresholds. And you're still outside that threshold. Ye Su said mercilessly.

Ye Su said this, which means that Wugen Liuli can't write novels. This silenced her, and her expression darkened for a moment.

Ye Su ignored this low feeling, if Wugen Liuli couldn't even pass his own level, then don't learn from him to write any novels.

Ye Su continued: "You have to understand what a light novel is - this is a light-hearted story, and if you write a good novel, you must tell a good story. If you can't tell a story well, what novel do you write? ”

Wugen Liuli raised her eyebrows slightly, and asked in a low voice, "How to write a good story?" ”

Ye Su said with some amusement: "This question, I said it in Chinese class, right?" ”

"Is there one?" Wugen Liuli asked.

"Of course." Ye Su nodded and said, "The novel is centered on the portrayal of characters, and the genre of reflecting social life through a complete storyline and environmental description. Characters, plot, and environment are the three elements of a novel. The plot generally includes four parts: beginning, development, **, and ending, and some include prologue and epilogue. The environment includes the natural environment and the social environment - and what do I see in your novel? Setting, setting, in addition to setting, or setting, the first thing you need to do if you want to write a good novel is to throw away your setting. ”

Hearing this, Wumore Liuli hurriedly took out a notebook from the side and recorded it carefully in the notebook.

After finishing writing seriously, Wugen Liuli raised his head and asked, "What else?" ”

Feeling the seriousness of the five more glasses, Ye Su's mood was a little delicate, he thought about it and continued: "There is also the fun of light novels. Fiction is the way traditional novels are written, but light novels are different. ”

"What's the difference?" Wumore Liuli asked again.

"Naturally, it's funny, Cheng Dù doesn't understand." Ye Su explained: "Traditional novels, the content they contain, the ideas they want to express, are often very weighty, but light novels are completely different, light novels don't need such heavy thoughts, of course, you can also express those thoughts, but you can't use heavy ways." You have to learn to tell a story that is light, funny, and enjoyable. ”

"En......" Wugen Liuli couldn't help but think for a while.

Ye Su continued to say something, which was nothing more than a few points that needed to be paid attention to.

Writing a novel is not an easy task, forming sentences one by one, then sentences by paragraph, into articles, and finally gathering articles into a novel of huge length, which itself requires the skills that are indispensable.