Koji Yoshida's mood was very entangled, as if 10,000 grass and mud horses were running over wildly.

He never expected that it was just a simple love comic, and Wei Miyachuan could actually write such a newspaper script.

He looked at Wei Gongchuan's expectant face, and the negative words were swallowed into his stomach again.

"Mr. Emiya...... How did you come up with this story? ”

Xia Chuanyu blinked: "Of course, it's based on real life to extract materials!" ”

Koji Yoshida thought of the cascading courtyards when he first visited, and suddenly understood why Emiyagawa's love manga was so distorted.

Because in the place where he grew up, I'm afraid there is no free and pure love.

Koji Yoshida instantly fell into a pity.

He pondered for a moment and said, "Mr. Emiya, I hope you can understand that this story is a little darker for teenagers. ”

Xia Chuanyu nodded, he understands this, after all, the stories of those people in his hometown are all adult love.

"If you really plan to use this story to participate in the Love Comics Contest, I will tell you frankly, I am afraid that the results will not be very satisfactory."

Xia Chuanyu was stunned, he looked at the script he wrote, and sighed for a while: "I'm sorry." ”

Koji Yoshida waved his hand again and again: "Please don't say I'm sorry, it's rude for me to say it." ”

Koji Yoshida blamed himself with a face: "You came from a family, and the people you used to contact were limited, and when you reached the age when you should enter junior high school, you became a manga artist early and worked all day long, I heard that you also wrote scripts in school?" If it weren't for the fact that work takes up your time, you can't enjoy student life and feel the taste of the rainy season, I am afraid you wouldn't have written this kind of script, right? ”

Xia Chuanyu tilted his head, what does the editor mean by this?

"It's a dereliction of duty for me, as your editor, not to be aware of this!"

Koji Yoshida is really annoyed at the moment, mainly because Heimaru is too much of a bastard, after allowing Heimaru to go on a trip once in the first half of the year, he can't help it anymore, he wants to go out to play all day long, and he starts to slack off again, his attention is attracted by Heimaru Ichi, and he actually ignores Emiya-sensei's side, it's really ...... Unforgivable!

Koji Yoshida's eyes burned with anger: "As an apology, I will definitely help you win the first place this time!" ”

Xia Chuanyu: ".................." seems to be wrong.

Koji Yoshida read the story carefully, and finally said: "Teacher, this competition is a short comic, you don't need to set it up so complicated, hostility or something, family hatred or something, just ignore it, or set it to grab something." ”

He said seriously: "At the beginning, the two of them were teenagers, childhood sweethearts, helping each other to train, secretly communicating behind their parents' backs, they agreed to reconcile, and made an agreement that after the man got something, it would be given to the woman as a dowry, and the woman would take that thing back as a dowry, so that the treasure would belong to the child." ”

Xia Chuanyu was stunned when he heard it.

"About fifty pages of comics, let's focus on the last explosion!" Koji Yoshida spoke very quickly: "First of all, after the male protagonist got something, his father said that he wanted him to marry, and he was just about to refuse, and the married woman appeared in front of him and said that he had his child!" ”

Natsukawayu's mouth opened wide.

"The married woman and the female protagonist are good sisters, and the male protagonist remembered the wrong person that night, and mistakenly thought it was the female protagonist! Then the marriage woman took advantage of this to propose marriage, the male protagonist agreed to the marriage under the pressure of the family and the child, the female owner knew that she was angry and went to the secret base of the two to find the male owner, but waited for the trap set by the marriage woman, and then the woman desperately escaped, ten days later at the wedding, the female owner killed the married woman at the wedding, and the real lover of the married woman killed the female owner angrily, and the male owner knew that the child was not his, and all of them were fake, he completely collapsed, killed the lover, and burned the wedding scene, As a result, all the big men of the wood clan died, and the patriarch of the fire clan avenged the woman and razed the wood clan, and when they won the war, they encountered natural disasters again, and as a result, both the wood and fire clans died! ”

Koji Yoshida looked at Natsukawayu: "What do you think of this story?" ”

Xia Chuanyu gasped, this is the master of the newspaper reads;!

He said euphemistically: "In this case, you can't finish painting in one sentence." ”

"Then divide the conversation!" Koji Yoshida said decisively: "A hundred pages should end this story!" ”

Natsukawa Yu looked at Koji Yoshida, whose fighting spirit was almost on fire, and said weakly: "This story is darker than my initial version, put it on jump...... No problem? ”

"No problem! Anyway, the first word is a pure and fresh style, there must be two little guesses, you can make people laugh when you look at it, the picture must be beautiful, regardless of the male and female protagonists, you must add close-ups, and you have to be sweet to death! Koji Yoshida said excitedly: "So that when the ending comes, everyone will be surprised!" ”

Yes, I'm covered in black mud, how can I not let readers feel the black mud* of Mr. Emiya too?!

Koji Yoshida secretly thought that if it was a pure love story, the game would not have exploded.

The corners of Xia Chuanyu's mouth twitched, and he scratched his head: "Okay, then draw like this." ”

It took Natsukawa a week to complete the first episode.

He set the character of the patriarch of the fire clan as Hinata, and the patriarch of the wood clan as Ning Ci, the first words of the two childhood sweethearts who had no guesses killed everyone, watching the interaction between the two children, everyone couldn't help laughing, and the half-middle vacation of the game looked at the sketch drawn by Xia Chuanyu, and his expression was particularly subtle.

He said: "I really didn't expect you to draw such a pure little fresh love story?" ”

Xia Chuanyu wanted to laugh when he thought of the follow-up storyline, he pursed his lips, tried to suppress the smile on the corner of his lips, and said slowly: "Huayue has contributed a lot of materials. ”

Although Huayue had to learn a lot of things in his childhood and didn't have time to play, he had a bamboo horse and a bamboo horse! What will you say when you are playing, what will you play, what is your mood when you escape training, what you think after you hook each other and hang a little secret, Hanazuki knows best, thanks to Hanayue, the first words are really sweet as honey.

Asakura stretched out his hand: "The second script, I know you must have written it." ”

Xia Chuan didn't raise his head, drew the latest issue of Hokage with one hand, and took out a notebook from the stack of books on the table with the other hand and threw it to Asakura: "Look." ”

Ten minutes later, Asakura looked up expressionlessly and threw the notebook in front of Xia Chuanyu.

"What's on the last twenty pages?"

Xia Chuanyu laughed: "How? Doesn't it feel particularly sour? ”

Asakura closed his eyes, and when he opened them again, the anger in his eyes had disappeared, and he hehe: "I have a feeling that I want to eat candy but eat a bite of mustard." ”

Xia Chuanyu smiled and said: "So this is the song of the Warring States~"

Asakura: "You're really bad. He got up and leaned over to Natsukawayu: "This is the latest issue of the Hokage's manuscript?" ”

"Well, you want to see it?"

"Did you sue me for three generations to die?"

"Not dead."

"It's a pity, reads;." Asakura pouted: "There are no dead people?" ”

Xia Chuanyu shook his head: "It's not the time to die. ”

Asakura said casually: "Do you have to wait for a long time?" ”

"Of course not." Xia Chuanyu said as a matter of course: "Naturally, he will die at the hands of his apprentice." ”

Now in the plot, the three generations are still eating bento, and the fifth generation is the attending physician, if the third generation really swallows the lunch, then the fifth generation will be in trouble? So Natsukawa thought about it carefully and decided to wait for the three generations after Tsunade came back to eat the bento.

In this way, the three generations will not die in the hands of the five generations~

Tsunade had not been treated for many years, and when she returned to the village, she had killed her teacher, so her fear of blood intensified and she left the village again.

After listening to the general plot of the back, Asakura couldn't help but nodded: "That's right, the political struggle has always been so dark and cruel, how can the five generations of Hokage really help the three generations, sure enough, according to your setting, the three generations of Hokage have three disciples, and these three disciples are actually Hokage competitors, the opponents of the five generations." ”

The more Asakura said, the more he appreciated: "Three apprentices, Orochimaru was exposed to human experiments, Tsunade was plagued by hemophobia, and Jiraiya, who just appeared, has a dissolute personality and a bad reputation...... This fifth generation is really a guy with great skills. ”

Shin Five Hokage Natsukawa Fish Emiyagawa: ".................."

He said with difficulty: "In fact, even if the five generations don't have a black hand, the body of the three generations can't do it." ”

In fact, after Orochimaru attacked Konoha back then, the body of the three generations did collapse, if it wasn't for him and Tsunade joining forces to save him, the three generations would definitely receive the bento,

After that, even if many wars were fierce, the three generations never dispatched, basically sitting in the office and writing jiàn, or guarding the rear with the help of many upper ninjas.

The main thing is that Orochimaru's sword is really accurate, if it is even one millimeter more to the left, the third generation will really die.

Asakura snorted coldly: "I'm quite optimistic about the fifth generation, he will be the final boss in the future, right?" ”

……………… How can Madara Uchiha be embarrassed? The legendary Otsuki Kaguya is going to cry blind, okay?

Xia Chuanyu's mood is very delicate.

He coughed repeatedly: "It's still early, I won't spoil it." ”

Asakura's attention shifted to the tutor again: "Speaking of which, I was at Xie Pila-kun's place, but I didn't know that there were so many stories between you and the boss called Penglie?" ”

At this moment, the storyline has progressed to the point of parting ways with RA to develop Pengle, and among the family members, Nakel and G are already in place, and the thick-thighed Elena is about to be launched.

Xia Chuanyu nodded: "Actually, it's a good child." ”

Asakura glanced at it a few times and put it down again.

He wasn't very interested in this kind of story that he knew at a glance, or whether the Hokage was more interesting.

"I met Dilumudo in the village of Pachi."

Ma Canghao talked about the Psychic King Competition, and his face was full of smiles: "That spirit is really good, and it will help Ye a lot to improve his strength." ”

Speaking of Dilumudo......

Xia Chuanyu said in surprise: "Ma Cangye can use a two-handed sword?" "It's progressing fast, reads;!

"No, it won't." Asakura shrugged: "But those two swords can bring anger to Ye, I'm very satisfied." ”

He said meaningfully: "The angry leaf can burst out with great power, this is half of my body." ”

Xia Chuanyu was too lazy to deal with his brother, and he had to say to this kind of person: "Of course, that's your brother, speaking of which, I haven't officially met your brother." ”

Asakura glanced at Xia Chuanyu: "There are many opportunities after the official game starts." ”

Xia Chuanyu's eyes flashed slightly, and he smiled: "Then I have to take a good look." ”

Asakura said suddenly, "You can ask Shirou to open his eyes." ”

Xia Chuanyu was silent for a while before he said, "Forget it, Shirou started school at that time, and there was no time." ”

Asakura nodded, turned his face away, and the corners of his lips were slightly raised.

If he's not mistaken, the Holy Grail War is next year?

"Psychic King...... Contest? ”

Emiya Shirou was peeling potatoes while talking to the paper figure in front of him.

"Xiaochuan won't let me go?"

Paper Man Asakura: "yes, your brother doesn't seem to want you to touch these too much?" He said in a vicious tone, "Maybe your brother doesn't believe in your abilities." ”

Emiya Shirou was silent for a while before he said: "Xiao Chuan also took me to the demon slayer party, which shows that he has recognized my ability, but everything has to be done slowly, and Xiao Chuan probably wants me to adapt myself." ”

Paper Man Asakura: "Haha, you're broad-minded, but do you want to see your strength in advance?" In the Psychic Contest, you will find the Heroic Spirits from the last Holy Grail War. ”

Emiya Shirou's eyes lit up: "Really? ”

"Of course it's true."

Emiya Shirou frowned: "The game time is too tight, I can't hide from Xiaochuan to go to the uninhabited island." ”

Paper man Asakura Yoshi: "Don't you have a cat?" Let the cat record it for you again. ”

Speaking of cats, Asakura is a belly of anger, in the eighteenth century, the cat pit him almost missed the preliminaries, this revenge he has not yet revenged.

Emiya Shirou was stunned: "Cat again...... Will it be discovered by Ogawa? ”

"It's up to you."

Hehe, it's good to be discovered, and it would be even more wonderful if Wei Gongchuan could beat the cat again.

Emiya Shirou thought deeply for a while, in view of the success of the cat and bell bugging device last time, he decided to buy the cat and bell video recorder this time, and wait for the cat to come back and watch the video.

But there is a very real problem.

……………… He ran out of money.

Here I would like to solemnly explain the financial problems of the Wei Gong family.

The two brothers of the Weigong family plus a boarding house in the Wind Bird Courtyard Flower Moon, the source of money for the three people mainly depends on Xia Chuanyu's comic manuscript fee and single book income, Flower Moon has extra money, but neither Xia Chuanyu nor Emiya Shirou asked Flower Moon to ask for it, after all, the Blackbird Courtyard is a reads for boarding fees in the middle of the night;.

Flower Moon's expenses should be spent on the card of the Blackbird Courtyard in the middle of the night, and most of the comic money of Xia Chuanyu is used to buy magic materials, part of it is deposited in the bank to eat interest, and the last part is the living expenses.

Although Emiya Shirou also went to the field for training, he didn't have a penny of income when he went out on a mission, and it was all counted as the teaching fee of the field.

In the daily living expenses,The Ice Emperor tuition fee for two people accounts for a large part.,After all, the Ice Emperor School Park is a private aristocratic school.,The food and clothing are too poor to make the students look down on it.,There are also the purchase fees for the items needed for club activities.,And the guidance fee delivered to Sunset Kagome.,The annual maintenance fee of the old house of the Emiya in Fuyuki City.,The worship fee to the Yahara Temple, etc.。

To sum up, in fact, the annual expenses of the Wei Gong family ...... It's very big, the reason why Emiyagawa and Emiya Shirou can live a good life with such expenses is because the field door helps them save a lot of communication costs - after all, legally speaking, Xia Chuanyu is underage, and the communication expenses with many family forces can be represented by the field door - and the considerable amount of inheritance left by their father Emiya Kiritsu.

However, Xia Chuanyu didn't dare to use too much, theoretically speaking, there was still a part of Illya's inheritance, and he couldn't spend it all!

Emiya Shirou doesn't have much living expenses, if it's just a home life to buy vegetables and cook, that money is enough, but if you want to get something else...... Naturally not enough.

Now the only way for Emiya Shirou to make money is to become a demon slayer, but he must not take on tasks through Guò's field, otherwise he will not get a penny.

So he set his sights on ...... Natsume.

If he's not mistaken, Ogawa said that Natsume was living with a relative, right?

What if he runs out of money?

"Draw talismans to make money." Natsume's answer was simple: "My healing talisman can be sold for a lot of money. ”

Emiya Shirou hugged the phone in distress: "What about this?" I feel like I've got some experience in slaying demons, and I want to try to take on tasks alone, but I don't have a customer source......"

"I know a demon slayer who sometimes lacks assistants, so if you want, I'll recommend him to him?"

"Ah, thank you, Natsume, you've helped a lot!"

"You're welcome." Natsume paused, and suddenly said, "Wei Gongjun, I have a confused ......."

"What's wrong?"

“…… I'm sorry if I'm offended, but there's a question that has bothered me for a long time. Natsume said in a low voice: "If a person lacks strength but still wants to save people, will he cause trouble to others?" ”

Emiya Shirou thought for a moment and said, "It's quite troublesome, but ...... It is precisely because there are such people in this world that the demon slayer will work hard to cure the monsters and protect the human race. ”

"Don't let those kind-hearted humans die at the hands of youkai again, isn't that the reason why we are waiting for Zài?"

Natsume's eyes widened suddenly, tears flashed faintly, his voice trembled slightly, but the corners of his lips were raised high, revealing a bright smile.

"Ah, thank you, Wei Gong-kun."

The demon slayer recommended by Natsume is named Natori Monday, and he is a well-known ...... Star reads;.

"I've found that people in ...... [other world] have so many different occupations."

The first time they met, Emiya Shirou felt very wonderful, and his first reaction after shaking hands with Mr. Natori was ......

"Whether it works out or not, can you give me an autograph?"

It's a lot of money after selling it=v=

Natori laughed on Monday, took the notebook and wrote his name in a chic manner.

"You are the brother of the legendary His Highness Chuan?"

Emiya Shirou was surprised: "Legendary? ”

The introducer, Natsume, also widened his eyes: "His Royal Highness Chuan? ”

Natori looked at the blank expressions of the two teenagers and couldn't help but smile again.

"Ah, you don't know."

At the moment, the three of them were sitting in a café, the café was quiet, the three of them were sitting behind potted plants, and almost no one could see them.

Natori smiled and looked at Emiya Shirou with a smile: "Your younger brother has the favor of the gods, and in a certain way, he is the spokesperson of the gods, if he joins the Shinto, I am afraid that he will immediately become a great priest." ”

Emiya Shirou said in surprise: "Great priest? ”

Natsume still didn't understand: "Then why are you called Your Highness?" ”

"Because the gods can appear in the human world through Guò Emiyagawa and call the gods...... How dare you not use honorifics? ”

Emiya Shirou frowned, he thought about it carefully, and finally said in frustration: "...... I don't know at all. ”

Natori smiled on Monday, and he changed the subject: "Listen to Natsume, you want to be a demon slayer?" ”

"Yes."

"But aren't you a disciple of the Field Sect?" Natori is well-informed in the circle on Monday.

Emiya Shirou said helplessly: "If I go out on a mission in the name of the field, all the work funds I get will go to the field, and I won't get a penny." ”

Natori was stunned for a moment, and said clearly: "I see, should it be said that it is worthy of the field where interests are paramount?" ”

He said: "Since you are interested in being my assistant, I am also very happy, but I don't know much about your strength, so you didn't share the first order, if you prove your strength after the first order, then in the future we will be three or seven points, how about it?" ”

Emiya Shirou nodded: "Okay!" No problem! ”

Natori Monday said curiously, "Aren't you afraid that I will pit you?" Just believe me? ”

Emiya Shirou scratched his head: "Since you know about Xiaochuan, I don't think you will cheat me." ”

Natori was dumbfounded on Monday, yes, who wants to be sent to Huangquan Country for a day trip by Her Royal Highness, who is highly valued by Queen Huangquan?!

"Then it's settled."

Without Natsukawa's knowledge, Emiya Shirou found a new way to make money, and by the time school started in September, he had already made three missions and successfully bought a small video recorder.

At the same time,Shonen Jump's love comic showdown activities are also all over.,Starting from August,Each issue of the magazine will add an author's love comics.,Some authors are finished in one sentence.,Some authors are finished in two words.,Lasted until the end of October.,All authors have finished serializing.,Enter the final voting stage.。

Jump came up with three rankings this time, the first ranking: the manga you think you want to fall in love with the most after reading it, the second ranking: the manga that you find most impressive, and the third ranking: the manga you most want to change to a full-length serialized manga.

In the three rankings, Xia Chuanyu won the first place in all of them.

"Mr. Emiya, this is the ranking result."

Xia Chuanyu couldn't stand up with a smile when he saw the ranking.

The first ranking, the Warring States Song ranked first from the bottom.

Quite a few readers have given comments that......

[I didn't expect Mr. Emiya's love manga to be so dark, and after reading it, I was completely desperate for boys! ] 】

[Is Mr. Emiya out of love? 】

[The first half of the story is sweet and dead, and the second half of the story is suddenly dark, Mr. Weigong, what's wrong with you? ] 】

[After reading it, I was completely dead set on love. 】

……

In the second ranking, the Warring States Song ranked first.

Readers' comments:

[I'm very impressed, as soon as I close my eyes now, it's the picture of the heroine killing the female partner.] 】

[Among these comics, the story of Mr. Emiya is the most shocking, and the story is indeed very bloody and old-fashioned, but why am I full of ...... after reading it? Anger at tearing books? 】

[In a group of stories that describe the sweetness and beauty of love, the only one that describes the despair and madness of love is worthy of Mr. Emiya. 】

……

The third ranking, the Warring States Song ranked first from the bottom.

Readers' comments:

[I don't want to see this long story at all, the short story is sad enough, and the long story is simply unacceptable.] 】

[The contradiction of this story lies in the sudden turn and sudden outburst, and if it is changed to a long story, it will not have this charm, and it is not supported to change it to a long story.] 】

[Teacher Emiya still concentrates on painting the Hokage, the tutor is also very good, as for this Warring States Song, please forget about it! ] 】

[I feel as uncomfortable as being forcibly poured a belly of black mud, and I am completely desperate at the thought that I will drink black mud every day after becoming a long story. 】

……

Koji Yoshida smiled.

"I'll just say, the teacher must be the first!"

It doesn't matter if it's positive or reciprocal, it's number one anyway.