Xia Chuanyu modified a lot of things under the good construction of Macang before, and what he modified was the basic setting, the overall story direction, the development trend of the story, and the overall difficulty of the story, and the character design has also changed a lot, but there is no detailed follow-up script content.

In Xia Chuanyu's busy rush to the draft, the field Jingji also added fuel to the fire: "Don't forget that you have already passed the guò transfer exam and become a six-year student, and you will take the entrance exam in March next year, if you go to an ordinary public school like before, we can still help you get past, but if it is a private middle school......"

He smiled wickedly: "Aren't you going to school with your brother?" If you invite him to go to school in Tokyo, why should it be an excellent private middle school? Private high schools have their own entrance exams, so you have to study some of them. ”

Xia Chuanyu: "......"

What else could he say?

Shadow Split/Body* is good! Let's get to work honestly!

The field of Jingji is indeed capable, Xia Chuanyu has not been in school for many years, that kind of attendance is impossible to graduate, but the field Jingji has already helped Xia Chuanyu and Tokyo Ice Emperor Private High School to say hello, the principal has made it clear that as long as Xia Chuanyu can pass the guò entrance exam, there is absolutely no problem, and it is okay to ask for leave, but a quarter of the attendance must be guaranteed.

――Because Natsukawayu's attendance rate in public elementary schools is 0.

Natsukawa is worried, but thinks that Emiya Shirou will be drawn into the Holy Grail War...... He sighed, but decided to go to school anyway.

Koji Yoshida welcomes Natsukawa's plans to continue his schooling, and the elementary school manga artist sounds great, but on the other hand, he is also suspected of not doing his job, and it would be even better if Natsukawa could go all the way to high school and college.

- He's dreaming.

Since you have to go to school, the profession of comics has become chicken ribs, and it's a pity to abandon it if it's useless, but Xia Chuanyu is not a person who gives up halfway, he gritted his teeth and admitted it, isn't it just to draw Naruto's rabbit cub, can you still get him?!

Natsukawa began to draw manga diligently.

There is a part/body technique plus a god, Xia Chuanyu's efficiency is extremely high, and in view of his re-design, the story of the first episode has been changed.

He lowered Naruto's IQ and increased his EQ, Sasuke's IQ increased, and his EQ decreased, and the two matched just right, given that Konoha was grouped in groups of three, Natsukawa still made Sakura a member of Naruto Sasuke's team, but this time!

In order to embody the essence of the shonen manga and follow the guidance of the editor, Natsukawa Yu set Sakura as the heroine.

Yes, as a shonen manga, at least the protagonist setting of one man and one woman is basically the same, and beautiful female characters can also attract a lot of popularity!

Given that Naruto is the male lead and Sakura is the female lead, the two of them are a couple...... Hehe, let's talk nonsense.

Naruto, who has a lower IQ, will make a lot of funny moves, and he is not as handsome as Sasuke, as long as Sakura's eyes are not blind, she will definitely like Sasuke instead of Naruto.

So Naruto and Sasuke became brothers for Sakura?

Xia Chuanyu lay on the manuscript and laughed like a dog.

He finished writing the script of the first three episodes and resubmitted it to Koji Yoshida, who let out a sigh of relief and his eyes lit up after reading it carefully.

"It's fun, it's very interesting, it's great, let's ask Emiya-sensei to keep up the good work!"

The story content of the first episode has also been adapted, eliminating the excessive political problems and infighting problems at the beginning, and increasing Naruto's hard school career, including Naruto and Sasuke fighting, and then Naruto lost to Sasuke, but he still boasted in front of Sakura that he would be able to succeed in the exam tomorrow, and Sakura said he didn't believe it.

The next day, when Naruto really relied on his own strength to complete the exam, he was falsely accused of plagiarism by [Second Brother] Sarutobi Konohamaru, Sasuke stepped forward, put his hands in his trouser pockets, sneered, and said to Shinobi Saru, Tobi Konohamaru: "Naruto is indeed stupid, but he is my admitting opponent, I believe he will not cheat!" ”

Sarutobi Konohamaru was furious and had another fight with Sasuke, Naruto was very moved, and when most of the people in Konoha hated him and the girls he liked didn't believe him, the bastard Sasuke actually stood up!

Naruto was encouraged and said firmly, "I just didn't plagiarize, it's a big deal to retake the exam!" ”

So the wise and martial arts of the five generations of adults took the second exam, after the exam, the five generations looked at the test paper, very pleased, and personally gave the forehead protection to Naruto, and at the same time the five generations also untied the knot for Naruto and Konohamaru.

Konohamaru's father died on the night of the Nine-Tails, but Naruto was not the murderer Demon Fox, on the contrary, he was the hero who sealed the Demon Fox to save the village.

And in order to celebrate Naruto's success in the exam, Konohamaru gave Naruto the collection of the three generations of grandfathers, the scroll of the multiple shadow split/body technique, and the three generations first burst into a rage after knowing it, but then smiled softly at the photo of the fourth generation and the eldest son.

At the end, Goyome is standing in the Hokage Building, facing the slightly drunk wind, watching Naruto in the distance show off to Sasuke with his forehead guard, and Sasuke ignores Naruto's fried appearance and shows a relieved smile.

Although the depth of the plot is reduced, it increases the contradictions, highlights the charm of the characters, and adds two ninja battles, with a positive theme, which is very in line with the psychology of current children and teenagers.

The first episode is finally finalized.

Xia Chuanyu breathed a sigh of relief, to be honest, he hadn't thought about things like this for many years, and the cartoons drawn for children really didn't need so many psychological turns, the truth was naturally revealed, just go straight.

After determining the first word, the rest of the content will be easy to do, he first let the doppelganger/body write the idear, and go to the field Jingji himself.

"Are you sure you want to move in now?" Shizuji was a little surprised: "Wouldn't it be too early?" ”

The middle school will wait until April next year.,If the comic is serialized, you can let the editor run away.,Xia Chuanyu just stays at home.。

Xia Chuanyu shook his head, and he said, "It's better to prepare early." After a pause, he added, "This year I want to invite Shirou to celebrate the New Year together, and I haven't seen him for more than two years. ”

By the way, Amway and Shirou went to school in Tokyo together, presumably Shirou would not refuse, and that guy Asakura might come to him, if he always stayed at the field house, it would be inconvenient for him, Asakura Yoshi, and Shizuji of the field.

Shizuji thought for a moment and said, "I asked Sunset Kuta before, and he said that it is not convenient to live in his house, do you have any other plans?" ”

In fact, Sunset Grass is also very depressed, he is very welcome to Wei Gongchuan to live in his house, but the problem is that there is a deadly well at home, and there is a deadly dog brother-in-law! A big dog demon who forced his sister to send the chubby [cat] to a relative's house because he was a dog!

If Wei Gongchuan lives in the house, and one day the dog's brother-in-law and sister come home, the dog's nose sniffs and smells the smell of a strange demon slayer......

…… Brother-in-law will definitely overturn the beams of the house!!

And Wei Miyagawa is also a person from the main family, what is his attitude towards monsters?

Sunset grass thought too much and refused.

It's a pity that the summer river fish is a pity, but the food made by Sunset's mother is great, and it has a very homely taste.

He said, "In that case, let's live in Shinjuku." ”

He still went to his little friend Jian Shibei.

Shizuji nodded, "I see." ”

Xia Chuanyu paid for it, and the field came forward to help Xia Chuanyu buy a two-story villa in Shinjuku, and there was a small garden and a garage at the back, although it was a little small, but it was exquisite enough, and Xia Chuanyu was particularly satisfied after seeing it.

Packing up his research over the years, half a month later, Xia Chuanyu lived in a villa in Shinjuku, Tokyo.

After spending a day settling down, Xia Chuanyu sent a message to Ma Canghao, telling the other party that he had moved, and that he should not throw himself into the net and run to the field, but this time no one would open an enchantment for him.

Asakura's reply was very fast, and he only said that he knew and would come to visit when he was free.

But Xia Chuanyu didn't expect that the day after he arrived in Tokyo, Sunset's mother pressed Sunset Grass to come over to visit.

Xia Chuanyu frowned slightly, and smiled again: "Thank you for your kindness, but it's ......"

"Ah, my grass is too real, it's no problem for you to come and borrow it, he just thinks too much." Sunset's mother warmly invited Natsukawa to live at Sunset Shrine: "You're still young!" It's not safe for children to live in such a big house, so let's come and live in my house! ”

Sunset's mother said while glaring at Sunset Kusata, she didn't know that Wei Gongchuan's child was going to borrow it, her own daughter was indeed a little troublesome, but her daughter didn't live at home every day, Kusa studied in Kumamoto again, and she and her grandfather were at home, how lonely it was, and it was good to have a child to live in.

And Sunset's mother has another idea, Kusa needs the elders of Emiyagawa to bother a lot on Kumamoto's side, and she naturally has to take good care of Emiyagawa.

Xia Chuanyu looked at Sunset's too bitter look, and then looked at Sunset's mother's warm and loving face, hesitated for a moment and said, "That's good, I'm here when I work on weekdays, and I ...... on my days off."

He bowed earnestly: "I'll leave it to you." ”

That night, Sunset Kusota came running again.

He said apologetically: "I'm really sorry, there was a reason for rejecting you before." ”

Xia Chuanyu said: "If it really causes you trouble, then forget it." ”

Sunset grass opened his mouth too much, he shook his head, and said softly, "What does Wei Gongjun think of monsters?" ”

Xia Chuanyu raised his eyebrows: "...... Does your family have anything to do with youkai? ”

Sunset Grass sighed, "Yes, my brother-in-law is a dog demon. ”

Xia Chuanyu instantly understood, no wonder the sunset grass was too reluctant, and the attitude of the field family towards the monster was ...... It's extremely bad, and it's normal for Sunset Grass to hesitate in her heart.

Xia Chuanyu said: "Don't worry, I just don't see it." ”

Sunset Grass let out a sigh of relief and said gratefully, "Thank you." ”

What the? Dog brother-in-law's opinion? Sunset's mother can knock him out directly.

In order to apologize, Sunset Kusata said, "Are you busy with work?" If you're not busy, come to the shrine tomorrow, and Mom said I'm going to clean up a small room for you, I hope you like it. ”

Xia Chuanyu smiled: "I'm sorry for your trouble." ”

But the next day, Xia Chuanyu didn't think so.

Sunset Shrine is a good place.,It's still a vermilion torii.,It's still a tall and warm god tree.,It's still a quiet and mysterious environment.,But when Grandpa Twilight beckoned Natsukawa Fish to help him go to the warehouse to move the cabinet.,Out of curiosity, he walked to the next room.,And was hit by the nervous dog.,Natsukawa Fish's saber Kaga Kiyomitsu fell into the well in the room!!

He rolled over and jumped in ==

As soon as he stumbled, Xia Chuanyu came to 500 years ago.