Chapter 5: The Goddess, the School Flower

Time: Unknown, it must have been a long, long time ago.

Location: Shenzhou Vast Land.

Heaven and earth are unkind, and all things are used as dogs!

Volume 1: Qingyunzhi.

He couldn't remember the details, so he could only write them on his own.

In the previous life, many writing routines were summarized, and the www.biquge.info of Biquge also held regular meetings to conduct activities to cultivate potential novices. After the appearance of a popular book, there was naturally an endless stream of followers, and since the emergence of the powerful divorce stream, mortal stream, and waste stream, similar plots have never stopped, and there are few new ideas, so that later fantasy novels basically give people the same feeling.

Fortunately, it is only 2002 now, and the three major strange books on the Internet, "Ethereal Journey" and "The Legend of Little Soldiers", have not yet begun to be written, and the most popular one is only "The Legend of Wukong", which has been selling for several years, and the entire market is completely in short supply. Either way, "Zhu Xian" has enough reasons to stand out. And the wonder of this book lies in the writing of love, and in the wonderful structure in the fantasy background.

Hu Yifei also has his own strengths, he is good at writing fight scenes and atmosphere. If you want to promote and suppress, you will be linked to short stories. The small story of Tong guò continues to be highlighted, and then the big ** is launched. The rhythm changes quickly, and the map is constantly changing and upgrading, which is the routine of popular fantasy novels in later generations. At this time, under the framework of the complete world outline of "Zhu Xian", it is completely possible to write the branch very well, and there are many subtle foreshadowings.

His weakness is that his writing is often unnatural. This is also a common problem for many writers. Under machismo, women are often reduced to foils, fall in love inexplicably, and then remain unswerving until death, and betrayal is not allowed, betrayal is death. Among them, the most scoundrel emotional drama is that many heroines open the harem, and many plots are unbearable to witness in the eyes of old readers.

Fortunately, in the original version of "Zhu Xian", love is what can move readers the most, just to make up for his weaknesses.

He has always been very focused when he codes, tapping his ten fingers on the keyboard, and all he thinks about is the scene of the world of the novel. The outline has been revised and revised, and there is no need to deliberately compare it at all, and the framework has echoed in my mind at this moment, and I will not deviate from the outline at all. With this focus, the efficiency of codewords is amazing.

The guys who were surfing the Internet nearby heard him crackling and the sound of keyboard tapping in their ears, and they all looked at him sideways. At first glance, it was simply amazing, ten fingers methodically crisscrossed on the one-foot keyboard, and words jumped out endlessly, never interrupted.

"This guy is so good, he is so fast at typing."

Others come to the Internet café to watch movies or play games, but he opens Word and types quickly on the Internet...... An inexplicable feeling arose. A little better than yourself is nothing, too much better than yourself, then you can only look up.

"Brother Fei, what are you writing? Typing is so fast. The fat man's question was also their doubt.

"Novels, written and played. You play yours with it. ”

"Gotcha, you can write it!" He had just received a big gift, and the fat man now respects him like a god, and when he sees that his fingers are not stopping, how can he bother. It's just that the shrewd little eyes didn't skim over and look at it with relish. Hu Yifei ignored him and immersed himself in the rhythm of code words.

It's really rare to write novels, and he still has this hand. The precedent for the fire of Han Han's "Triple Gate" is just ahead, and the recent online novel "The Legend of Wukong" has set off a reading boom on campus. Writing novels on the Internet this year can be regarded as a rather high-end behavior. It's just that the fat man sleeps with him and shares the same table, and he knows Hu Yifei well, although the composition is good, he won't leave him so far. Usually read Jin Yong's novels in class, neither of them fell behind, what level Hu Yifei is at he doesn't know? !

Hey, let's see what you write.

With such a thought, he even let go of his interest in playing the game and stared at it without blinking.

"Zhu Xian"?

The introduction is quite mysterious, "Heaven and earth are unkind to all things as dogs", he doesn't know very much, but he unconsciously raised Hu Yifei's novel to a higher level in his heart. The first chapter is just about Qingyunmen and the two children.,It's nothing.,I just think this guy's writing is really good.,No wonder you can get more than forty points every time you compose.。 When the battle started in the second chapter, he was immediately fascinated. It's all because of the fight scenes, which are completely different from the familiar martial arts tricks. Lightning and thunder, seven-tailed centipedes, poisonous blood flags, six-character Daming spells, divine sword and thunder magic tricks and other novel gadgets all make people think about it. The more I looked, the more I looked good, as if I saw something amazing, and there was a nest of small ants climbing in my heart, and I couldn't bear it.

Suddenly, he said: "Brother Fei, this idiom is typographed." ”

"Oh, where?"

Hu Yifei stopped and corrected the typo.

It's unavoidable, that's why there are revisions over and over again. Just take this opportunity to pause, drink saliva and move your fingers, "How is the writing?" ”

"Cow! Pretty! It's really worthy of me Feige, and I still have this hand! The fat man gave a thumbs up, and the sycophants slapped louder than the other, "It's just too slow." ”

Hu Yifei's face darkened, and his eyelids twitched.

Yes, the reader is never too fast, even if he can write 7,000 words in just an hour, it will only be done in minutes.

"Hehe, you wrote, I'll go get two bowls of instant noodles."

"Thank you."

……

He was groggy and drowsy all night, and it was not until the early hours of the next morning that the light pierced his eyes, and he gradually felt tired. Counting the number of words, there are more than 40,000 words, this kind of speed is not even in his previous life, and his highest record is only more than 30,000 words a day. Saved it satisfactorily, copied it into the newly bought USB flash drive, and saved the all-night time to give him a sudden shutdown. Stood up and stretched, waking up the fat man who was lying in front of the computer desk and drooling to get off the plane.

On Monday, the national flag was to be raised, and the director of education personally supervised it, and the old class was very strict about this matter, even if he skipped class, he couldn't commit a crime against the wind.

The two bought a few steamed buns and gobbled them up as they rushed to school.

Raise the national flag, play the national anthem, and then select a student representative to give a speech and share learning experience. Approaching the college entrance examination, the main force of the speech is naturally the junior high school students. There was a commotion in the ranks of the class, and one of the girls walked out of the team and walked all the way to the podium with brisk steps and skirt fluttering. With shyness and a slight crampedness, it attracts attention all the way.

A group of cattle in the 30th class of high school even stood on tiptoe and stretched their necks to look, "It's Li Huizhao's speech." "Goddess, school flower!"

Hu Yifei has a height advantage, and he can see it clearly without tiptoeing. This girl is one of the few beauties in their class who can handle it, and she is a school flower-level figure. I don't have any grades, and I often get in the top ten. The waist-length hair was slightly forked, but it was still neatly combed, and it was softly bound in a blue headband. The figure is very tall, more than 1.7 meters by sight, the white floral long skirt is even more graceful and moving, and a pair of pink sandals are worn under the skirt, ticking and walking, all showing the atmosphere of youth. It's just that he is too young, and he is also a little malnourished, and his body is slightly shriveled and too thin. The eyebrows on the face have not yet grown, and the beauty embryo is still prominent. He believes that in a few years, this girl's style will be enough to get rid of those famous school girls and Internet celebrities on the Internet.

Such a girl, who doesn't like it.