A young man with a bearded face sat on the curb of the road, staring blankly at the road. The people who passed by him showed expressions of pity or disgust.

He said to himself:

"My name is Lu Renjia, and I realized that I was a character in a novel."

"Actually, I can't talk about any characters, because I may not even be mentioned in the novel."

"Huh? Why do I know this? ”

"Here's the thing......"

It was a bright afternoon, and Lu Renjia was bored and ran to the Internet café to surf the Internet. But the Internet cafes were almost full, and Lu Renjia finally found a black Internet café in an alley. When I went inside, it was empty, except for a young Taoist priest with a white face and beard, sitting on a machine reading a novel.

Taoist priests also read novels? Lu Renjia glanced over curiously, and the name of the novel was "The Edge of Luck". It looks like it's supposed to be a novel related to fortune-telling. But......

This title seems to be magnificent, but in fact, I don't know what it is, if it is not a work of a great god, it will definitely hit the street. Lu Renjia shook his head, and sentenced the book to death in his heart.

"What does the little donor have to say about this book?" The Taoist priest noticed Lu Renjia's peeping behavior, and when he saw him after reading it, he shook his head and couldn't help but ask.

"Uh, no, no, no......" The two met in Pingshui, how could Lu Renjia say what he thought in his heart, just said that he hadn't seen it yet, where did he get his opinion.

The Taoist priest didn't believe it, so he had to let Lu Renjia see how the novel was.

Lu Renjia couldn't shirk it, so he had to sit in the position of a Taoist priest to help him take a look.

"The Edge of Luck"

Genre: Xianxia

Introduction: The theory of luck is mysterious and mysterious

In order to rescue the princess who was taken captive by the evil dragon,

Let's see how the people with the air and the sea are turned over and soaring into the sky!

Word Count: 9527

Let's not talk about this inexplicable topic, the type of misclassification and the very inconsistent introduction, just talking about this number of words, Lu Renjia has no interest. He has always been fattening and killing when he reads, and he can't read it without a 30W word.

Of course, those novels that want to read the first chapter after reading the synopsis, and can't stop after reading the first chapter.

But since I promised someone else, three chapters are three chapters, and I finished reading it at once.

Lu Renjia clicked on the first chapter, took a few glances, and directly skipped and clicked on the second chapter. The first chapter is completely shaking.,What kind of luck is what?,What kind of atmospheric luck can be.,There's also some classical Chinese mixed in.,I don't know which book copied it.,I can't read it.,Bad reviews!

After the second and third chapters are finished, the background of the story begins to be introduced, and it is not until the end of the third chapter that the sentence comes: the story begins here.

"Tsk." Lu Renjia smacked his mouth, not knowing what to say about this book.

The Taoist priest waited for Lu Renjia to finish reading, and then he couldn't wait to ask, "How is it?" ”

Lu Renjia looked at his eager appearance and said suspiciously: "This book can't be written by you, right?" ”

"Which Taoist priest would take the wooden fish as a name?" The Taoist priest smiled and asked, "This look is written by a monk." ”

"Yes, but why do you care so much?" Lu Renjia still didn't believe it

"I know the monk." The Taoist priest explained: "I want to collect some opinions so that I can help him improve. Don't worry about anything, and be bold enough to say it. ”

Taoist monks to help monks? There's no such thing as a ghost. And let me not take it into account, obviously I want to collect bad comments to hit the monk.

With a plan in his heart, Lu Renjia said tentatively: "First of all, from the perspective of the setting. The author seems to want to apply the story of Dragon Quest to the background of oriental fantasy stories, which is considered a ......" Lu Renjia originally wanted to say that this is a bit creative.

However, the Taoist priest suddenly frowned and interrupted, "This is plagiarism?!" ”

Look at it, we originally meant to praise, but this Taoist priest said that it was plagiarism.

So Lu Renjia followed his meaning and criticized the novel from the title to the content, up and down.

For example, the name of the novel is too inexplicable to attract the reader's interest. It can be changed to "Fighting the Evil Dragon", "Fighting the Dragon Continent", "I Want to Fight the Dragon", etc., and be sure to express the theme of the story or something of interest such as the golden finger.

Another example is that the type is not good, and it is difficult for the Xianxia class to become popular. To change the story, it takes place in modern times, the aura is lacking, and the princess is a spirit that is rare to see in ten thousand years...... This makes it possible to divide into urban categories.

Another example is that the content is written like. The three golden chapters are so important, we must tell the story well, so that readers can read it. If you really can't think of a good beginning, you can follow the routine, what kind of waste firewood flow and divorce flow is still acceptable.

To sum up, this book is either a street or a eunuch when it is written like this.

Lu Renjia, who said the rise, didn't notice that the green tendons on the Taoist priest's forehead jumped and jumped.

"It seems that Xiaoyou has studied novels quite a bit." The Taoist priest interrupted Lu Renjia's tirade.

"I can't talk about research, I just like to read novels. Where did I just go......" Lu Renjia was on the rise, and couldn't stop at all: "Oh, speaking of character portrayal." The personality of the character should be distinct, not only the protagonist and the supporting villain, but also his character should be reflected even if it is a dragon role. ”

"Oh?" The Taoist priest suddenly asked suspiciously: "Since you are so capable, are you interested in making a sexually distinct trick in my novels?" ”

"What?" Lu Renjia was stunned at that time, he understood every word of what the Taoist priest said, but he couldn't understand it at all.

I saw the Taoist priest take out a brush from his arms and rush at Lu Renjia in the air. The tip of the pen immediately generated a huge suction force, which wanted to suck Lu Renjia in.

"You wrote this book?!" Lu Renjana didn't understand that he would be wrong, so he offended this Taoist priest: "You are a Taoist priest, how can you call Mu Yuro!" ”

"When I was young, I couldn't eat, so I went to be a monk for a few days, and this pen name is to commemorate that lost youth." The Taoist priest held a pen in his right hand, took out a string of Buddhist beads in his left hand and said: "Amitabha, besides, the Buddha is the Tao." ”

"Your uncle!" Lu Renjia felt that he was being sucked in little by little, and couldn't help but scold: "You are bald...... Dead bull nose, I'm just telling the truth, you're going to hurt me, an author like you who can't listen to opinions will definitely not be able to write a good novel! ”

"Humph! Full of nonsense! The Taoist priest snorted coldly, urging the force to strengthen the suction of the pen.

Lu Renjia couldn't resist, and was sucked in with a "whoosh". Only one sentence remained in the Taoist priest's ear.

"You will definitely be a eunuch in this book~!"

"The wail of the defeated dog! I still don't believe it, I can't write this book! This is what I preached...... Hey, where's my Bodhi bead? Could it be ......" The Taoist priest looked at his empty left hand and was stunned.

"That's it, if you encounter it, just write him to death with a creation pen. When the time comes, take back the Bodhi beads. But then again, who said we can't listen to opinions......" The Taoist priest shamelessly changed the name of the novel to "Urban Fighting and Breaking the Evil Dragon", and then changed the genre to Chengdu, deleting and rewriting the three chapters that had been uploaded.

He used his mana to manipulate the creation pen and wrote: "The power of the Dao, three stages! ”