Chapter 116: This Lakeside
Or cast a small vote, but it is really touched by everyone's support, sometimes I am tired of writing, I feel that I am not satisfied, when I am psychologically unbalanced compared with others, I am depressed and angry and say that I can't write, Lord Zhuge said disdainfully: Look at your faithful, you have to be responsible for them!
I'm blushing for myself and inciting my own ears and seeds, I'm a bastard!
From the very beginning, some friends said that this book was not pleased, at least if it was wanted to be published in the future. The protagonist is a woman, but it's not a romance, and it's also an empty history, and no one reads it. In fact, there are really not many people who look at it, just look at the introduction, female, Mulan-style, don't look at it! It's very straightforward and clear in the book review area.
Won't there be a market for the heroine? I don't care about that, I just want to write about the characters I want to write, Mulan has always been my favorite Chinese legend, what's the reason not to like a brave and strong woman? Maybe from the standpoint of different genders, women who are too strong are not liked by men, but I think only a small number of men do not like such women, maybe because they still have some residual gender discrimination in China, perhaps, they think that no matter how strong a woman is, she will not be as strong as men in other works they have had, perhaps, they think that from the perspective of women, human nature cannot become vivid, complex, and real, but I have always believed that Zhan Feng is not promoting feminism, I will also try my best to make the image of the protagonist fuller, and what I want to express most in the work is far from a story developed with a woman as the protagonist, I hope to make this book retain more emotions that can move readers, or, a vigorous and upward vitality. I don't expect this book to become a clear stream among many excellent works, but I still want readers to feel whether there will be a pleasure in their veins when reading this book, whether there will be a dripping and refreshing comfort, or whether there is a slight touch.
There are often some mistakes in the book, but fortunately with the guidance of many friends, I was able to revise it in time, this work is not perfect, but this conference will try to revise him to no big mistakes, your guidance is very important to me, and thank you very much!
Many of the plots in the book have been briefly mentioned, and they are always treated in Feibai, and some friends don't quite understand, such as what happened to Yi Wei after entering Beijing, what was written in the suicide note left by her mother, and how complicated her background is, these may be explained in detail in the last two parts, or will appear in the work one day.
At the end of the first part, this big decision has decided to change the title of the book, at the beginning, someone asked me to replace the name of Zhan Feng, saying that it is not attractive enough, but I think there is no other name more suitable than this name, but now the second part, according to the new idea to write, it is estimated that it will be completely off-topic, so it is obviously not suitable to take the name of Zhan Feng again, so I want to use Zhan Feng only as the title of the first part of this book, and the name of the second part is Gong Change, and this book wants to be renamed "Mythology Trilogy", hehe, The cover is done, but the book station can't change the title of the book for the time being because of the regulations, but it's basically going to be like this, so I squeak with everyone.
Conducted a poll survey,Ask the second part is better to open a new work or continue to be included in this book.,Apparently a small number of friends support me to open a new work.,In fact, from the beginning of writing Zhan Feng, I planned to write the palace change as a sister of Zhan Feng.,But when I wrote a large part,One day when I was talking about the development of the novel with Lord Zhuge ,A new idea suddenly popped up.,So I decided to include the palace change in this book.,Although it's not bad to open a new work.,But considering the third part,If you lose the second part., The third part will become more embarrassing.,So,Ben decided to write the three parts as one.,Hehe.,So to the friends who are in favor of opening a new work!
The first part has come to an end~~, but what will happen to Yi Wei, what will her attitude towards Li Chop be, what will be the injury of Fang Yan, what will be the fate of a soldier, whether the pardon of death will be able to offset other punishments, whether the broken arm Ding will return to the military system, whether the arrogant Zhuo Bing will change his previous state, what can the fog that often hovers on the verge of collapse bring to Detian, what is that dragon, tiger and unicorn, what is it, how many disasters will Zhuge Hou, the custodian of the edict, incur, and how will the internal changes in the palace evolve, What was Empress Hou's final contribution to Detian, what was the purpose behind Pan's retreat, and how would the fate of the other countries ......?
In the vast earth, who is the lord of ups and downs?
The earth is rejuvenated, all things are recovering, located in the north, until the ice and snow melt is already March, the hands that hide a winter will still want to drill into the sleeves from time to time, the sun is more than two days, the whole person feels warm, the green plants also take advantage of such a good weather to smoke crazy, within a few days, I saw a canopy of green willows, the ground is also covered with a layer of tender grass buds, Mei Xie peach blossoms, one pink replaces another pink, even the entire military department is like a newly colored ink, fresh and beautiful and tranquil can not see the traces of the war.
Yi Wei drew two buckets full of water in the lake to the west, her sleeves were rolled up high, every time she went to this lake, she would stay quietly for a while, in a place where millions of people live like the military department, if there is any corner of her private space, there is only this lakeside. More than three months ago, someone told him that he would wait for her at the old place one day, so she would go to the lake every day to draw water, and she cleaned the unicorn, which was the cleanest of all the horses, the most diligent, and subconsciously, she was looking for an excuse for herself to come to the lake, and this excuse was not used to tell others, but to prevaricate herself. Very frustrated and threw a big stone into the lake, she was really angry with herself, there are some things she is not qualified to pursue, such expectations will still be empty in the end, what about meeting her at the old place? And then what? How can you ...... in the end? Nothing is different, the natural gap can be crossed, but the gap created by society cannot be bridged.
Lifting two buckets of water, Yi Wei fled away from the lake and walked towards the stable, the water dripping all over the ground and spilling her shoes.
Rolling Tiger stayed next to the stable again, teasing the unicorn, coming back from the battlefield, Rolling Tiger stayed next to the unicorn when he was free all day, the unicorn didn't love him, and the rolling tiger was probably just looking for a boring companion, and there was always a layer of low air pressure in the military department after the war.
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