Chapter 28: The Unseasonal Demon Red
PS: Today is still two chapters in one, and you don't need too many reasons for a hard life. Today, I accompanied my sister, my mother went to the mall to buy things, I was cold and hungry, and at five o'clock in the afternoon, I started to code words, which was very hard.
Thank you for the reward, thank you here, your support is the motivation for my writing.
The two books are opened together, not only to write the old book perfectly, but also to write a new book, constantly conceiving the plot, as if to tear themselves in half, very painful, very painful, but must persevere.
Another half a month passed, and when the finale was finished, the code word was finally over, Li Qing breathed a sigh of relief, closed the computer, and only felt a lot more relaxed.
A large heavy stone fell to the ground.
The life of writing is not pleasant at all, it is simply equivalent to chronic suicide.
It's just that it's not good, but you have to persevere, and many people know that they commit chronic suicide, and they have to persevere until a miracle happens, or the end of their lives.
The two books were finally delivered thoroughly, "Snow Mountain Flying Fox" was given to Red Fu Entertainment Company, and "Marrying the Right Man in the Wrong Sedan Chair" was given to Hope Entertainment Company. As for how they advertise and how they sell, it is no longer something he can grasp.
It's like a gambler, throwing out the chips, placing a bet, and that's the end of it.
As for the outcome, he needs to worry about it!
Li Qing breathed a long sigh of relief and looked at the mirror on the side, in the mirror, his hair was messy, his clothes were messy, and the whole person looked like a dead dog.
"What a tragic life!"
Thinking about his life these days, Li Qing just felt extremely hard, but no matter how hard he was pressed, he had to endure it.
These days, the writing is constant, the code words are constant, in the morning I wrote "Snow Mountain Flying Fox", and in the afternoon I wrote "On the wrong sedan chair to marry the right man"; In the morning, he is a martial arts writer "Superfluous Man", and in the afternoon, he is a romance novel writer "Green Snake Has Tears".
The two roles are constantly being replaced, and the two minds are constantly colliding.
In a trance, Li Qing was a little schizophrenic and insane.
As a result of the insanity, Hu Fei appeared in "The Wrong Sedan to Marry the Right Lang", and Du Bingyan appeared in "Snow Mountain Flying Fox", and the names of pig's feet are often confused.
Li Qing can only open and replace it often, replacing the name of the pig's knuckle with normal.
In the confusion, the torment finally ended, and the state of schizophrenia ended.
Li Qing finally returned to a trace of normality, no longer a superfluous person as a martial arts writer, and no longer a romance writer Green Snake has tears, but is called Li Qing, a writer Li Qing.
After handing in the manuscript, Li Qing can finally rest for a while.
At the moment, I don't want to do anything, I don't want to watch TV, I don't want to play games, I don't want to travel, I don't want to make beautiful women in a bar, I don't want to chat with MM on the Internet, I just want to sleep, sleep until the end of the world.
What to write next?
Lying on the bed, Li Qing thought about it.
or write Xiaobaiwen's pinnacle work "Breaking the Sky".
Li Qing thought about it, and began to recall this pinnacle of Xiaobaiwen, and immediately the memories of his previous life appeared like a tide, and then like a movie, it was clearly visible.
In the previous life, "Breaking the Sky" was the pinnacle of Xiaobaiwen, and it created a generation of great gods.
In his previous life, he also liked to watch "Breaking the Sky", and many chapters were often read skipping and looking back at the end.
The name of this book is imposing and imposing.
In the later "Martial Arts", "The Great Juggernaut" tried to replicate this momentum when it was named, but unfortunately failed.
There are some things that cannot be reproduced.
It's like after Lu Xun wrote "The True Story of Ah Q", he couldn't write a comparable novel, no, no, it's not Jiang Lang's talent, but it can't be copied.
There are many things that cannot be copied and cannot be surpassed.
Secondly, in the plot control of the novel, there is tension. A lot of novels are written and written, and there are too many pig's feet to be written, too awesome, too strong, and the writing is a little out of control, and the rhythm cannot be controlled.
And this book controls the plot perfectly.
Only write about vindictiveness, not magic, because there are too many systems to write, it is easy to get out of control, and it is easy to not grasp the rhythm of writing.
A lot of pig's feet, written and written, too awesome, awesome, punching this, kicking that, writing is too cool, cool is a little unable to grasp the rhythm.
If it's too cool, it's not good; If it's too cool, it's easy to become a brain-dead article.
And the pig's feet that are broken are undoubtedly a lot of hard work, not a cool to the end, but are beaten everywhere, suffer disasters everywhere, almost narrowly defeat the enemy, maybe a bad luck, is dead warped, fortunately he is a pig's foot, with a pig's foot halo, even if the situation is no longer crisis, it is still not dead.
And Dou Po can be said to be a cool article, but it is not a brain-dead article; It can be said that the supporting characters are brain-dead, and the dragon is brain-dead, at least the pig's feet are not brain-dead.
In addition, many novels change maps too frequently, and the readers who change them are dizzy.
However, there are very few maps for Dou Po, and in general, there are only three maps, one is a certain empire, one is a certain academy, and one is Zhongzhou.
Simple and direct, readers do not look confused, which is something that many writers can't do.
Many novels, it seems to be written and written, but they have become very yellow and violent, and the pig's feet are often three thousand in the harem, and there are constant fights everywhere.
And in this regard, Dou Po wrote very successfully, there are a lot of pig's foot girls, many of them are imminent, and there is no large-scale push to the plot, facts have proved that if a novel wants to succeed, it must be a proper tragedy, and the tragedy will have shocking power.
A small white text, if you want to write successfully, you must have many girls, but you can't push it, even if it is pushed to the end, it is also if it is imminent, it is difficult to conquer, like a carrot hanging on a donkey, hanging the appetite of book friends, so that there is a sense of suspense and fun.
In Xiaobaiwen, it is best not to push the female pig's feet, and after pushing them, the influence will decline, just because many book friends have a sense of substitution, and they all want to substitute the pig's feet, and the girls who can't get it are often the best girls; As for the girl who was eaten in her mouth, although it was still delicious, the taste had dropped a lot.
At this point, Dou ** is extremely clever.
And Dou Po has created a flow of waste materials, a counterattack flow of slings, a flow of civilians beating nobles, and a flow of gold three chapters.
The flow of waste materials is the beginning of many novels, the theme of many novels.
Just because in the world, geniuses are a minority after all, most people are waste materials, and most people are unknown, and writing about waste materials is essentially writing about hundreds of millions of sentient beings.
**Silk counterattack flow, desperately beating the aristocratic flow, to meet the beautiful dreams of many book friends, after all, there is unfairness in society, and those who want to fight back against the silk are only a few who succeed in the end. Most people are losers, at least they can read the novel, fantasize about being a pig's foot from the novel, get a short-term victory, get a spiritual victory, and relieve negative emotions.
And it is the creation of the golden three-chapter stream.
For a novel to be successful, it must have three golden chapters.
The first three chapters are to attract the reader's interest, click on the collection, and only then can it be possible to survive; Only editors can value it and have the capital to survive.
If you can't do it, bye-bye, you'll only fail.
And if you want to write the golden three chapters well, it is very difficult, and the beginning of the fight and the beginning of the waste material flow are good references.
A lot of people may be scolding constantly, but they still have to start like this.
The superposition of these elements makes "Breaking the Sky" the pinnacle of Xiaobaiwen, and it is difficult to surpass the pinnacle.
After "Breaking the Sky", there are many writers who write Xiaobaiwen, but there are very few successes, and most of them hit the street to the extreme, and they hit the street to their grandmother's house.
And that great god, after that, also created "Martial Arts", "The Great Master", etc., I can't say that the writing is poor, and the writing is quite level, but it is a big difference compared to "Breaking the Sky".
Throughout "Breaking the Sky", although there are still a lot of criticisms, it is generally good.
It can be said that if you want to write a first-class romance novel, you must study "The Legend of the West Chamber" and "Dream of Red Mansions" well;
If you want to write a first-class erotic novel, Xiao Huangwen, you must study "Golden Vase Plum" well:
If you want to write a good martial arts novel, you must study "Water Margin" well;
If you want to write a good Xianxia novel, you need to study "Journey to the West" and "Romance of the Gods":
If you want to write a good historical novel, you must study "Romance of the Three Kingdoms" well.
If you want to write a good Xiaobaiwen, you need to study "Breaking the Sky" well.
Some of these creative concepts, some ideological essences, some writing techniques, some plot control, some human nature, etc., all need to be carefully studied, borrowed from them, and integrated into their own systems, which is beneficial to future writing.
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"Do you want to write it!"
Li Qing thought about it, swayed from side to side, and finally vetoed.
"Breaking the Sky" is the pinnacle of Xiaobaiwen, but it's a pity that it can't be written or plagiarized.
In the previous life, this novel was famous, although the author was superb and had an outstanding level of mastery of words, but it also occupied the time. At that time, a certain bit of old writers left, new writers had not yet appeared, and there was a vacancy in the top gods, and it was a high-level vacancy, and a hundred schools of thought contended.
And at a certain point, it is hard to recommend, and it is to increase support, and it is in the best period.
Therefore, a book is a god.
To have such an achievement, it can be said that the time, place, and people are indispensable.
Once one is missing, it is very likely to be yellow.
And Dou Po, what was written earlier, can only be said to be unremarkable, and the characteristics are not outstanding, but it was only when he fought his fiancée that he entered the **; When Yao Lao was arrested, he entered a shocking period.
At that time, he formed his own writing style, his own characteristics, and his own soul of the novel.
With a soul, it is a living human being; And without a soul, it's just a walking dead.
In the past, Dou Po had some taste of the walking dead, which was more about borrowing and imitating; But then he is a living person, with his own style and soul.
The whole novel came to life.
The biggest realization of "Breaking the Sky" is that it is a good novel, the literary style is not the first, the first is to let readers understand the storyline.
Many novels pursue the gorgeousness of language and literary brilliance, which leads to a vague plot. After reading it, many readers didn't understand what was written in the novel, and they didn't sort out the relationship between the characters, and they were confused.
In his previous life, he was a great success in breaking through the sky; And this plane may not succeed, and it is likely to hit the street to the extreme.
In the previous life, "Dream of Red Mansions" was the first of the four famous novels, which can be said to be the pinnacle of classical novels; And in this plane, it is extremely striking.
In his previous life, "The Old Man and the Sea" won the Nobel Prize, but in this plane, it was extremely popular.
In a trance, Li Qing thought of what Liang Siyu said in the novel "Canghai": "Wisdom can only be used at the right time and in the right place, otherwise, it is like blooming chrysanthemums in spring and autumn chrysanthemums in winter, and becoming a demon red that is out of season." Fang Jinmin's wisdom is not enough, it is not enough to use my wisdom, if it falls into the hands of evildoers, it will cause endless disasters. Those who violate the heavens are ominous, I know it now, and the heavenly machine is in the same vein, and it is ...... today."
This sentence, to put it bluntly, is to satirize those traversers, to satirize those black technologies, and to satirize those golden fingers.
Don't think it's a traverser, with a golden finger and black technology, it's just an unseasonal "demon red".
The wise have an eye on the millennium; The wise, with an eye on the present.
Obviously, many of the traversers are wise people, when it comes to cleverness, when it comes to power tricks, when it comes to cleverness, they are many, much worse than the local "natives", but the traverser stands tall and can look farther.
Just having wisdom is not necessarily a good thing, and looking too far is not necessarily a good thing.
Half a step more than others is a genius; One step more than others, he is a demon genius; Take two steps more than others, and you are gods; And if you take three steps ahead of others, you will only be called crazy;
And ten steps more than others, then wait to be sliced!
Wang Mang is a traverser with an eye on the millennium. wanted to reverse the law of reincarnation of the rise and fall of the dynasty, played the agrarian revolution and social reform, and wanted to reverse the general trend of heaven and earth, but the result was dead.
And Liang Xiao and Liang Siyu are obviously traversers, with golden fingers, who want to develop capitalism, and have the black technology of the artifact "Hidden Dragon", which is equivalent to the atomic bomb of later generations. It can be described as a natural pig's foot life, but unfortunately the ending is extremely tragic.
It's just because the steps are too big, and they take ten steps and are not sliced, just because they are strong.
Not every traverser is a success, and many traversers are losers, just because the steps are too big, and they fall to their deaths.
In this plane, after the arrival of the traverser, he was also cautious, fearing that he would take too big a step, and he would be eaten up by the times, and he would be reduced to Wang Mang's second and Wang Anshi's second.
Even back then, when he destroyed the Manchu Qing Dynasty, overthrew the Ming Dynasty, became the emperor, and ruled the world, he was still cautious, as if he had a fear of heights, and seemed to be as small as a chicken.
To carry out colonialism, we dare not call it colonialism, but call it indoctrination of barbarians; began to invade the West, fearing that it would be called a reckless army, just a small army; I was afraid that the minister would say that building a fleet would cost and hurt the people, so he could only instruct his brother-in-law to build a fleet and not dare to use the treasury.
That traverser has been cautious all his life, and he is deeply afraid that he will take too big a step and be eaten by the times.
But if he was so careful, he was still eaten up by the times, and a rebellion almost killed him; If he was a little unlucky, he was hanged and hung on the city wall, basking in the sun and hanging bacon.
"The founding emperor was so careful; I'm a grass farmer and an ant, how can I be careless. If it's just writing on the street, it's just a trivial matter, and if it leads to some taboos, then it's troublesome! ”
Li Qing took a deep breath.
"Dream of Red Mansions" is an unseasonal demon red;
"The Old Man and the Sea" is an unseasonal demon red;
"Breaking the Sky" is also an unseasonal demon red.
The former is, too far behind; The latter is too far ahead of its time.
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